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Re: Hot Wheels Creepypasta

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LightedRoblox is not online. LightedRoblox
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26 Sep 2011 06:02 PM
( I wrote this creepypasta. I wanted to put this on Roblox Talk. :l )

When I was kid, I always loved Hot Wheels. I remeber when I always got a big box full of 1900s - 90s Hot Wheels, I collected some of cars such as Fords, Chevrolets, Caddliacs, and more. I loved them so much, amd it's kind of like my hobby. But I was like five at time. I remeber these good old times.


One day, I remebered these great days. I tried looking for hot wheels box, I found it in basement. Box was torn, broken, it was badly in horrible conitudion. But I don't even care, as long cars in there were fine. Their paint were kind of gone. Not really gone, just little spots. Like roofs of car or something, and I quickly noticed that car had glowing tire and body. But I igonged it, and took it to second floor of my home. I took out one classic car from great, old 1950s and started playing with it. And my box was growling, it was like dog growling in deep voice. I shut the lid, and put it on my drawer. And I checked time, it were 9:00. It went so fast, like all of blizzare. And I went in bed, like a usual.


By 12:00, to be exact. My bed started to rumble, it was very strange. Verrry strange, I went to bathroom. I thought I were farting hard. After bathroom, my room were glowing green. I noticed box lid were green, and I slowly opened it. I tried looking in green beam of source light, it was like sun in there. And glowing stopped, it were hot rodded version of 32' Chrysler. And it had open hoods. And it had huge blazing engine. And I looked at it, and held it on my hand. And my hand started to ache for no reason at all, I dropped it in toilet and flushed it. And it began flushing down, AND car went down like a tornado. And all of sudden it popped out with fire on it. And fire went away, and there were paper soaked with poops. Don't even ask me why.



But I looked at paper, there were family. At first I don't even know what it is at all. And it seemed like me and my family. We were skeletons at that point. Once again, it looked very real. I couldn't resist to throw away it. I stayed focused on the picture. Maggots were wriggling around in holes in our flesh. Guts were spilling out of our bodies. My dad’s eyeball was hanging loose from its socket. It was too much to bear, but something still made me to resist me from looking away. But I starred at 32' Chrysler, I thought about about setting it on fire. And I checked my fireplace if it were blazing. And yes, it were. Very brightly. I was like YES!. I threw paper and 32' in fire. And watched it burn it, car melted like a metal and steel. I noticed there was a sparks coming out of it. I'm not sure what was it. But it's done for now, and I went to bed. Like if nothing happened.
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deathridder is not online. deathridder
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26 Sep 2011 06:04 PM
Eh....
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daryqueen is not online. daryqueen
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26 Sep 2011 06:05 PM
boring not scary
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RichieRich is not online. RichieRich
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26 Sep 2011 06:10 PM
I have like several boxes full of Hot Wheels.
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toadwheels12 is not online. toadwheels12
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26 Sep 2011 06:13 PM
Not too creepy. The picture of dying family is unoriginal.

Toadwheels12, the undying legacy, only on Roblox.
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ChocolateQueenHa is not online. ChocolateQueenHa
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26 Sep 2011 06:15 PM
Bad grammar, and that wouldn't be creepy, that would be pretty cool.

~Coco
~Vincent The Shaggy
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LightedRoblox is not online. LightedRoblox
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26 Sep 2011 06:15 PM
I did read my own story. My favorite part were...


Quote: "My dad’s eyeball was hanging loose from its socket."
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Subject219 is not online. Subject219
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26 Sep 2011 06:15 PM
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LightedRoblox is not online. LightedRoblox
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26 Sep 2011 06:15 PM
And I have bad grammar, I know. :l
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LightedRoblox is not online. LightedRoblox
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26 Sep 2011 06:17 PM
kinda lame bro

the main thing that irked me was the spelling

the family thing was unoriginal, also <----- So what, it goes nice with story. -.-

also

"my bed started to rumble" Same with below.

"it was glowing green" <---- Eh? It's original.
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wiiplay is not online. wiiplay
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26 Sep 2011 06:19 PM
I thought this was gonna be creepy D:
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Subject219 is not online. Subject219
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26 Sep 2011 06:20 PM
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26 Sep 2011 06:21 PM
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dew365 is not online. dew365
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26 Sep 2011 06:21 PM
Not scary at all.. but OK for an amateur I suppose..

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44isanormalusername is not online. 44isanormalusername
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26 Sep 2011 06:24 PM
Ok let's see what I find wrong:
1. Haunted hot wheels cars? What the heck?
2. Glowing green? Rumbling? Growling? So cliche.
3. And what was that picture part? I don't get where the picture came from. It was unoriginal anyways.
4. The overall story was just weird and stupid, I think I'll go read about the slendermen. (not talking about craftmine, endermen were based off that creepypasta)
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demolisher42 is not online. demolisher42
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26 Sep 2011 06:32 PM
This story kind of entertained me. It reminds me of the time when I was young and I had a hot wheels car that glow cyan or turquoise. (Some kind of light blue color)
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thekigpig123 is not online. thekigpig123
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14 Jan 2015 10:34 PM
ummm..Hot Wheels were not made 1900-1950s they were made in 1968-today. And why was the car glowing?And how was the car on fire? radeing 5/10
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Scyblocks is not online. Scyblocks
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14 Jan 2015 10:43 PM
I made cities of hot wheels and once something fell over in the middle of the night when nobody was around.
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twoolard is not online. twoolard
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09 Mar 2015 04:58 PM
That has nothing to do with me
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