zacmaq
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| 14 Jan 2015 09:38 PM |
| Damn dude you typed up that whole thing?! |
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zacmaq
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| 14 Jan 2015 09:38 PM |
it's long i know and hard to follow
stream-of-consciousness, if you will |
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zacmaq
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| 14 Jan 2015 09:39 PM |
"Damn dude you typed up that whole thing?!"
yeah in like 20 minutes |
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| 14 Jan 2015 09:40 PM |
What was going through your mind? Honestly that's more than I can defecate in a couple days. |
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zacmaq
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| 14 Jan 2015 09:41 PM |
| nothing, yet everything at the same time, like i know exactly what i feel and know what i want to say but do it in a way that sadly is hard to understand and uselessly cryptic |
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Kokuen
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| 14 Jan 2015 09:43 PM |
i never knew you could write on ur computer
be a dragon |
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| 14 Jan 2015 09:44 PM |
bruh i would seriously try to read this if it wasn't like really late in the evening i just took like a couple of glances and my mind was just like 'lol no'
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Boeing717
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| 14 Jan 2015 09:44 PM |
too lazy/tired to read right now
summarize please
and i'll read tomorrow if i'm interested |
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| 14 Jan 2015 09:46 PM |
| wow zac, I'm pretty picky with stuff i read but you're a pretty descriptive and exciting writer |
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zacmaq
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| 14 Jan 2015 09:46 PM |
i don't know if i can summarize actually like, it's weird
job, something happens, cares less about job, epiphany, lives, looks for relationships |
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Ouendan
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| 14 Jan 2015 09:49 PM |
I like that super detailed style of writing Good Job |
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Qwazilla
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| 14 Jan 2015 09:49 PM |
Skimmed and caught "a roman bathouse"
Really all I needed to read 10/10 |
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zacmaq
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| 14 Jan 2015 10:05 PM |
even mroe updated, done for tonight
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Awkrin
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| 14 Jan 2015 10:06 PM |
| Make it into a graphic novel so I could read it. |
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zacmaq
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| 14 Jan 2015 10:17 PM |
i would be terrible at that actually
by the way, i changed the accidental pov-change that i did, damn
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Nitro509
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zacmaq
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draxonaut
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zacmaq
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GoshiDoll
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| 14 Jan 2015 11:55 PM |
What's it supposed to be?
Warning: Dates in calendar are closer then they appear. |
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Finn102
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| 14 Jan 2015 11:57 PM |
I write too http://www.writerscafe.org/DarkestStoryline/writing/ |
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zacmaq
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| 14 Jan 2015 11:58 PM |
a guy who has this insecure feeling for a long time that he's useless inside, that everything he is is expendable, but he's complacent he changes when his attitude toward perfection is forced to be changed by being late to work one day, and which allows him to break free from it he seeks hobbies and stops caring about hiw work, while looking for love he's trying to find it
not done by far
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zacmaq
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| 15 Jan 2015 12:00 AM |
| i read "This is an Accurate Representation of how Ketchup is Made" and died laughing |
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