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Re: This war of mine rp.

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coolisiahwebbe08 is not online. coolisiahwebbe08
Joined: 21 Feb 2012
Total Posts: 1592
14 Jan 2015 10:45 AM
Inspired by tha game bro....



===============================PLOT
n This War Of Mine rp you do not play as an elite soldier, rather a group of civilians trying to survive in a besieged city; struggling with lack of food, medicine and constant danger from snipers and hostile scavengers...Life in death is in you're hands...Flu's....SHOT'S....DEATH.. ........
===============================
Now tiem for the rules c;
===============================RULE'S
1.Don't god-mode.
2.Don't start a flame war.
3.You can alway's create a new group if you die.
4.DO NOT...SAY "Find's meds usese em." it's random what chu find
5.Enjoy.

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time for perks :P
===============================PERK'S
Good finder... find more stuff...
Fast runner low health :l
Silent... Does not make noise but takes longer to find stuff...
Good cook. les chance of food poisoning.
Good immune system well...les chnace of getting a flu :P
GOOD CRAFTER Make stuff faster...also higher chance of getting cut :P

2 perks only :P
===============================
Nowwwww for theeee.....CS!!!
===============================CS
Member 1:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Perks:
Story:
What do chu look like?:
....
Member 2:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Perks:
Story:
What do chu look like?:
...
Member 3:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Perks:
Story:
What do chu look like?:
...




Enjoy people!




Potato plz
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caicee is not online. caicee
Joined: 08 Feb 2011
Total Posts: 1344
14 Jan 2015 10:46 AM
Wut?
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coolisiahwebbe08 is not online. coolisiahwebbe08
Joined: 21 Feb 2012
Total Posts: 1592
14 Jan 2015 10:50 AM
(Welp jack failed rp GG MAN gg man)

im sorry what's wrong e.e
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birm123 is not online. birm123
Joined: 06 Oct 2012
Total Posts: 16942
14 Jan 2015 02:16 PM
I should remake this as an isrp

kthxforidea
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Coriandr is not online. Coriandr
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Total Posts: 6850
14 Jan 2015 02:51 PM
meh

horrible grammar and layout

Fix it, could be a good RP.


siggy.nil
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coolisiahwebbe08 is not online. coolisiahwebbe08
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14 Jan 2015 09:07 PM
bad grammar?...

e.e
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coolisiahwebbe08 is not online. coolisiahwebbe08
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14 Jan 2015 09:07 PM
brim your gonna steal my rp?.


Gg
some good roleplayer you are...
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marc12267 is not online. marc12267
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14 Jan 2015 09:08 PM
He's right you know.
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superboy5519 is not online. superboy5519
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14 Jan 2015 09:09 PM
I think that Birm would make it better, actually.
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coolisiahwebbe08 is not online. coolisiahwebbe08
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14 Jan 2015 09:10 PM
Me?.



lol.
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coolisiahwebbe08 is not online. coolisiahwebbe08
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14 Jan 2015 09:10 PM
Nah rather not have him steal a rp i worked on for 14 minute's.


wtf there is no bad grammar
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superboy5519 is not online. superboy5519
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14 Jan 2015 09:11 PM
It's not stealing when you're the one basing a roleplay entirely off a game...
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valvefan123 is not online. valvefan123
Joined: 19 Jan 2011
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14 Jan 2015 09:14 PM
Horrible. Especially the grammar. The plot section was ONE SENTENCE! Also, the struggle is real with no spellcheck.

-A smile will get you far, but a smile and a gun will get you further.-
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coolisiahwebbe08 is not online. coolisiahwebbe08
Joined: 21 Feb 2012
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14 Jan 2015 09:15 PM
I was inspired e.e


so i stole the game?....
roleplay is different ye know.

Gamer's stole game's since they record and play as other gamer's what ever float's ye boat
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coolisiahwebbe08 is not online. coolisiahwebbe08
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14 Jan 2015 09:16 PM
Please show me my grammar misteak m8111!1!
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birm123 is not online. birm123
Joined: 06 Oct 2012
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14 Jan 2015 09:20 PM
"brim your gonna steal my rp?.


Gg
some good roleplayer you are"

[Grammar activate.]

First of all, it's Birm, not "brim".

Second of all, as Super stated, I could probably do this better. In this statement I don't claim to be the best at writing roleplays and I acknowledge the fact that there are many more skilled in writing roleplays, such as Timpookie, SwedishLemon, LNG257, etc. I do believe, however, that I could do it with at least some grammar to let people recognize that I put effort into it, rather then just sitting down at my table/bed/whatever and writing a five minute roleplay with an entire lack of grammar.

Thirdly, as Super said, it's not "stealing" if the roleplay was, originally, based off of an already created game. It is simply taking a roleplay with a lack of quality[there is no denying this fact; several have stated that it is one of the "bad" roleplays here, but not because of it's concept, but because of the way it's written, from length and detail to grammar.
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coolisiahwebbe08 is not online. coolisiahwebbe08
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14 Jan 2015 09:25 PM
Mr.Brim Blame auto correct

Where is that grammar misteak at.
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birm123 is not online. birm123
Joined: 06 Oct 2012
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14 Jan 2015 09:32 PM
Inspired by tha game bro

>tha

the*

n This War Of Mine rp you do not play as an elite soldier, rather a group of civilians trying to survive in a besieged city; struggling with lack of food, medicine and constant danger from snipers and hostile scavengers...Life in death is in you're hands...Flu's....SHOT'S....DEATH.. ........


>n

In*

>you're

your*

>Life in death

Life and death?

Now tiem for the rules c;
===============================RULE'S
1.Don't god-mode.
2.Don't start a flame war.
3.You can alway's create a new group if you die.
4.DO NOT...SAY "Find's meds usese em." it's random what chu find
5.Enjoy.

>tiem

Time*

>alway's

always*

>usese

uses*

>em

them*

>chu

you*

===============================
time for perks :P
===============================PERK'S
Good finder... find more stuff...
Fast runner low health :l
Silent... Does not make noise but takes longer to find stuff...
Good cook. les chance of food poisoning.
Good immune system well...les chnace of getting a flu :P
GOOD CRAFTER Make stuff faster...also higher chance of getting cut :P

>les

less*

>LES AGAIN

les*

>chnance

chance*

Member 1:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Perks:
Story:
What do chu look like?:
....
Member 2:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Perks:
Story:
What do chu look like?:
...
Member 3:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Perks:
Story:
What do chu look like?:

you*

I believe I win.
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marc12267 is not online. marc12267
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14 Jan 2015 09:33 PM
BIRM DELIVERED
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zachattack220 is not online. zachattack220
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14 Jan 2015 09:34 PM
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Coriandr is not online. Coriandr
Joined: 25 Jun 2014
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14 Jan 2015 09:37 PM
">LES AGAIN

les*"

less**


siggy.nil
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birm123 is not online. birm123
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14 Jan 2015 09:40 PM
quiet you
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Coriandr is not online. Coriandr
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14 Jan 2015 09:43 PM
grapocrite


siggy.nil
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birm123 is not online. birm123
Joined: 06 Oct 2012
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14 Jan 2015 09:47 PM
r00d
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coolisiahwebbe08 is not online. coolisiahwebbe08
Joined: 21 Feb 2012
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14 Jan 2015 10:00 PM
omg he doesnet know...

tiem = time...

les = less

chu = you.


do you know short letter's bruh
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