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Re: Don't close your eyes- Not even for a millisecond

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megakidmata is not online. megakidmata
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13 Jan 2015 05:56 PM
I just felt like writing something creepy today... Might make it into a full fledged story, probably a fan fiction.

Don't close your eyes. Not even for a millisecond.

If you close your eyes, they can find you.

If they find you, they can become you.

If they can become you, they can control the world.

They're called shifters. They live in our dreams. But some times, they leak out. And when they leak, they can take over humans, even for a short moment. And when they take over, no one is safe.

Sometimes, they can achieve almost permanent control, locking you within your own head for almost an eternity. They do have to leave, though, once a month, to regenerate in Dream pools. Dream pools are any place that has a large amount of people sleeping in the same area, such as a RV campground, or hotel. They do this while your body is asleep. If you wake, you can escape them.

But they almost always find you before then.

Luckily, you know when they are approaching. They emit a voice, sometimes completely random. Usually, it's a deep, scary one that only some can hear, or sometimes it's a high-pitched scream that causes your skin to crawl. Regardless, once you hear the sound, they are targeting you. Then is when you should never blink.

How would I know this? Because I am trapped in my own head.

Some one help me.

(It's probably pretty bad, but I'm going to try and get better through posting more chapters. If you liked it, great, if you didn't, that's OK too. Just tell me what to improve on!)
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sassygirl770 is not online. sassygirl770
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13 Jan 2015 05:58 PM
creepy...I wish this was an RP
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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13 Jan 2015 05:59 PM
If they can become you, they can control the world.

How?
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MrVincent is not online. MrVincent
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13 Jan 2015 05:59 PM
@mage

What if the person the narrator was speaking to...

the president?
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megakidmata is not online. megakidmata
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13 Jan 2015 06:00 PM
Give credit to me and you can create a RP version.
I'm just using this as something to build my own writing skills, right now.
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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13 Jan 2015 06:01 PM
What if the person the narrator was speaking to...
the president?

The president can't control the world. And be more specific. There isn't only one president.
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megakidmata is not online. megakidmata
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13 Jan 2015 06:02 PM
@ Mage
They turn into their spirit form and take over your body. The process sends the victim into a state similar to sleep paralysis, which they use to keep you from resisting.
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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13 Jan 2015 06:02 PM
They turn into their spirit form and take over your body. The process sends the victim into a state similar to sleep paralysis, which they use to keep you from resisting.

That's wonderful. How do they control the world though?
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SwedishLemon is not online. SwedishLemon
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13 Jan 2015 06:06 PM
Mage, I think he's implying that if they take over enough humans they could take over the world with an army of sorts.
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megakidmata is not online. megakidmata
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13 Jan 2015 06:07 PM
Imagine if they achieved permanent control of all of the world's authorities? While some people may catch on, those people could also get controlled too.

Now for a name for these things...
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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13 Jan 2015 06:07 PM
Mage, I think he's implying that if they take over enough humans they could take over the world with an army of sorts.

But he says "If they become you" as in a single person. The fellow he's speaking to.
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megakidmata is not online. megakidmata
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13 Jan 2015 06:11 PM
I meant it in a general term. There are multiple individuals of this creature, and only one creature can control one human. However, these beings live in the dreams of every single thing that can dream, so there may be an indefinite number of these beings.
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Pruz is not online. Pruz
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13 Jan 2015 07:10 PM
It's SCP Containment Breach all over again.
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megakidmata is not online. megakidmata
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13 Jan 2015 07:11 PM
Huh? Whats that?
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megakidmata is not online. megakidmata
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13 Jan 2015 09:02 PM
Decided that the creatures will be called nightmares, because they are what turns a dream into a nightmare.
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levian8877 is not online. levian8877
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13 Jan 2015 09:44 PM
Nightmares? Be orginal here, if your going to name them nightmares then name them in Latin or something.

somnum exterreri solebat

Like this.
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ConstelIation is not online. ConstelIation
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14 Jan 2015 01:08 AM
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why do I even try to read things here


♓ғɪɢʜᴛ, sᴍɪʟᴇ, ᴄᴜᴛᴛʟᴇᴄᴜʟʟ! 38D
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valvefan123 is not online. valvefan123
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14 Jan 2015 01:16 AM
so edgy

2/10 not worth the 3 minutes

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megakidmata is not online. megakidmata
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14 Jan 2015 07:13 AM
I did warn you that it would be terrible. This is basically a side project, something I'm using to improve my writing.
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ConstelIation is not online. ConstelIation
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14 Jan 2015 08:16 AM
why diddn't you warn me before


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PickachuGirl is not online. PickachuGirl
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14 Jan 2015 09:12 AM
man is this from doctor who, because I feel it is
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megakidmata is not online. megakidmata
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14 Jan 2015 03:26 PM
Actually, that's what I plan on turning it into, XD
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