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| 07 Jan 2015 06:41 PM |
(Reposting because the original was filled with flame and two spammers claiming that their five second survival rp is superior to mine, which is a lie.)
"Passengers, we are experiencing some problems on our flight pattern. Remain in your seats as we make contact with the nearest airport. Thank you." The female voice spoke in the loudspeaker.
You sighed as you looked at your watch. Great, I'll be late, you thought to yourself as you took a look at the paper. London Gazette, the title read as you flipped the page. You spied various eye catching articles, when you looked out the window. Daytime. You saw the ocean waves as you saw an approaching island. Suddenly, someone screamed 'Bomb!'. And that's what you last saw before everything turned black. You heard some sort of noise screeching, like a hawk. You opened your eyes as sand was in your mouth, of course marronish red. Great. You expected the worst: A plane Crash. You shook your foot out of some wreckage, and you slowly crawled out of the wreckage, seeing broken seats, debris, some bodies. Finally crawling out of the wreckage, you realised you were on a beach. Ahh, a nice, white grain sand beach. You also saw some other survivors, but the second you saw them you felt something being pointed to your head. It was some sort of militiaman pointing an AKM at your face. He spoke some broken english. "You hand up air! Now!" You slowly got up and complied, seeing other survivors doing the same. You were lead to some sort of car, a jeep. There were more militiamen in the jeep, carefully watching and herding everyone aboard the trucks like sheep. (Synopsis) You were on flight 262, a flight going to Hungary from the U.S, during the conflict of the Sandonesians and the Huseains, two rival factions at war for ages for control of Pandar, a rich, economically stable country. However, you were blown out of the sky for another reasons. Slavic terrorists for years hated Abdual Mikslovac, a well known and loved politician who tried to quell peace in the country. So when the terrorists found out he was traveling on flight 262, agents already working as airport security stowed away semtex with an extremely long radio range. When they found out he was in the middle of the ocean, they blew it. (History of Pandar) Pandar is 200,000 miles of square land, in the middle of the Atlantic ocean. Various nomadic tribes from europe, exploring the ocean, came upon the country and settled it as early as 10,000 B.C. Going on and on until the 200 A.D, the established country of Pandoneisia banned all export and import with European nations, as many were coming and going to loot the lovely island of it's riches. Pandar, in 1800, had sent various agents to various countries across the globe, bring back various foods and inventions, and stay in these foreign countries and remain in contact, thus many families were born. Many people in foreign nations have exported many inventions, guns, entertainment, even to the current day. In about 1987, a civil war erupted, and currently is being fought. And you're being dragged in this. Factions of the Pandorian Nation) (Sandonesians) The Sandonesians are a group of organized but thinly spread tribal men. They are fighting for a nation entirely ruled of tribes, and the establishment of previously abolished harsh tribal rules. They appose a free democracy and argue that a tribal nation would greatly benefit all. (Huseains) Huseains are a barely organized but are in numbers slightly greater than their rivals. They believe in many freedoms, something Pandar has not seen in ages. Many argue that a tribal nation would only divide them, not reunite the nation as a whole. They also want to acknowledge existence to the world. (Rules) Standar rping rules standard Roblox rules Put "All hail the red army!' In other (Cs) Name: Age: Gender: Appearance: Bio: Items: Other |
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| 07 Jan 2015 06:43 PM |
"(Reposting because the original was filled with flame and two spammers claiming that their five second survival rp is superior to mine, which is a lie.)"
not |
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| 07 Jan 2015 06:45 PM |
Rats. I hate life. Why can't you leave this alone? I at least gave valid criticism in that stupid five second survival rp, which you value as jesus on earth. |
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| 07 Jan 2015 06:45 PM |
now you crack.
by the way, just because your roleplays failed doesn't mean you blame it on others.
it's more of a lifetime role-play, this is a prison role-play more of. |
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| 07 Jan 2015 06:47 PM |
Why do you care about my failed roleplays? They failed because no one took interest. I never blamed it on someone else, stop putting words in my mouth. |
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| 07 Jan 2015 06:48 PM |
| And no, this is not a prison role play. The rpers have a chance to escape and take sides. |
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| 07 Jan 2015 06:49 PM |
"chance to escape" "take sides"
sounds like prison to me |
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| 07 Jan 2015 06:50 PM |
| OH BOY IS IT TRIVIAL INTERNET FIGHT O'CLOCK |
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| 07 Jan 2015 06:53 PM |
Did you even read the plot? You're in the middle of a civil war, you've been captured by people you don't even know, and there's a war going on and people don't know. I'm allowing total free roam and no restrictions, except for real life reasons. if you're not going to help me be a better writer, then stop flaming the thread. I at least gave valid criticism. Which you're going "ripoff111 plot stinks because I didnt even read it11" It's a survival role play with a twist, not much you see these days. |
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| 07 Jan 2015 06:55 PM |
| did read plot, basically prison |
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| 07 Jan 2015 06:58 PM |
No you didn't. The amount of time it took you to post tells me you didn't. Can you please just stop flaming me? Just please? |
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| 07 Jan 2015 07:08 PM |
(Yeah, it is better. Maybe a few flaws, but better. Neither of you are right in terms of quality of these RPs, as in, stranded was meh, but acceptable and this isn't a copy, but whatever I'll shut up now I'm mostly just rambling. Rock is more in the right here, but I'll welcome debate.)
Name: Lucian Clarke Age: 28 Gender: Female. His name is Lucian, what do you think? Appearance: 5'11", with messy, disheveled, black hair and pale blue eyes. A moderately burnt and torn red t-shirt, and a white cargo jacket in a similar state. Jeans and black sneakers. Bio: TBR Items: N/A
(Well now I wanna make an air marshal character. Nah.) |
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| 07 Jan 2015 07:13 PM |
Accepted. (Slack, the real story was that I was giving valid criticism to the rp, and everyone yelled at me for spamming it. Then I make this and they scream at me for this being a copy.) |
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| 07 Jan 2015 07:22 PM |
(Yeah, i read it. It was okay, just not great. Mind if I take this to my notes? *hostage notes screaming oh god please, post meeee!*
shaddap, it rubs the lotion on its skin or else it gets the hose again! *ahem* that was nothing) |
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| 07 Jan 2015 07:22 PM |
(Bump comon guize pls join) |
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| 07 Jan 2015 07:35 PM |
im baaack :D
"(Marc pls I need your help so I post critique on some uber bland survival rp and everyone screams at me for posting legit critique so then I make my own survival rp that's way better and they flame the thread claiming it sucks and just flaming its called flight 262)"
uh huh.
call an awesome roleplay bland, yet you call this piece of sht legit. we're not flaming, it's called CRITICIZING |
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| 07 Jan 2015 07:40 PM |
It's not legit critique. It's not helping me become a better writer. Your logic is flawed. This has more detail and background information. And I called marc in because I thought he'd be interested and he knows me. |
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marc12267
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| 07 Jan 2015 07:43 PM |
| So Rocky, the first time you met me is when you replied to my terribly made RP called "OC High" or some other piece of trash. |
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| 07 Jan 2015 07:44 PM |
(Awesome? BAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHA! That piece of crap has three sentences! This has like, 5 paragraphs! What are you smoking?! HAHAHHA |
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| 07 Jan 2015 07:45 PM |
| (Oh yeah. I was kinda mean, but then I redeemed myself. |
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marc12267
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| 07 Jan 2015 07:48 PM |
| I agree, Rocky. For some reason, I keep calling you Rocky instead of Rock. So mind if I revive that RP idea into a satire? |
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| 07 Jan 2015 07:50 PM |
Hahahahahha- Waut what bun dun dun dunaaa
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=9o19CaOSuD8 |
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| 07 Jan 2015 07:51 PM |
| Alright. I'll leave it dead then. Instead, I'll go with a British noir murder RP. |
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| 07 Jan 2015 07:52 PM |
iStarLiting,
I don't think that you should be trying to criticize rockmax. You're not in a proper position to be "criticizing" anyone here. You haven't made any sort of roleplay since the day you happened to pop up in RPF, so please. Stop being an insane bumhole.
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