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| 11 Jan 2015 07:35 PM |
blackhawk's going down, just like poly and fabio, you're about as useful as Cj and nuke, if you haven't realized im a duke, if anything you're a dutchess, mate, beating eminem? that's like kicking a kid in crutches!
try to proclaim yourself as a god, i'll be superman, you'll be zod, the only kryptonite that affects me, is your odor, damn that thing gets to me,
naturally, i cause catastrophies, influencing nationally, increasing the casualties most of what you spit are maladies
so try to rebut, i just hope you know you're not rugged enough to be rappin with puff
im out |
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| 11 Jan 2015 07:43 PM |
Knock Knock Who's there Another contender for the crown You'd almost be worth notice if you weren't dressed like a clown
If I'm a Duchess, then you're probably my footstool. I'm trying to figure out if you even graduated from grade school Because with rhymes that weak And an ego that tall You're going to suffer one hell of a fall
Beating Eminem was easy, you're right; That doesn't mean this is a greater verbal fight Your best option is flight into the night unless you want to get smite by a wordsmith of might |
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lcycle
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| 11 Jan 2015 07:52 PM |
My first verse was weak I admit that, Doesn't mean I still can't beat this pissy little rat, I'm the lord and saviour, Your sitting on the steps with your boots going rat-a-tat-tat, I did graduate from grade school, flying colours! Just like you, having rainbow time with others, You're like the RAT HICOM, You're about as sharp as a daikon, But at this point its too far for bygones to be bygones.
You know honestly, I'll tint you red, Just like the leakage in your bed, After a night of verbal abusage, I'm gonna blow you up, like crashed fuselage.
Why? Because my rhymes send you tumblin' My raps set thunder rumblin' When I'm through with you, all you'll do is start mumblin' If I were you, at this point, I'd start runnin'. |
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| 11 Jan 2015 07:58 PM |
Your understanding of rhyme leaves something to be desired, if you were a professional rapper you'd be immediately fired. Your words carry all the impact of a feather on the wind, These next few lines are going to leave you chagrined.
Insulting me about my career? Yet your own resume seems quite austere. And I doubt you'll be remembered here.
Actually, scratch that last line. You'll be remembered for this one time, Where the king of rhyme Looked down at the pathetic mime; and laughed
because the stuff you're posting? it's a verbal crime. |
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| 11 Jan 2015 08:00 PM |
you do realize that rapping isn't just rhyming the last word of every/every other line
right
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| 11 Jan 2015 08:02 PM |
| im aware im trying to integrate some slant rhymes in this one gimme a sec |
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