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| 11 Jan 2015 06:04 PM |
don't really know what to say it's been so long and at the end of the day you're walking out the door to a better place
but before you leave kid, about face
so brother since you're here let's talk about erica
oh don't disappear
that business was shady don't attempt a justification cause frankly that'll just lead to frustration because i don't need some narration that isn't sincere
now let's talk about your building career
do you know the meaning of design clearly not or you'd have already resigned and from here i can already hear your irritating bleat but i'm not here to swallow more of your deceit
prepare to get unseat |
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Olethrus
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| 11 Jan 2015 06:05 PM |
| when i go first it's always weak |
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drlone
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| 11 Jan 2015 06:08 PM |
| tha wu-tang clan comin' attcha |
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| 11 Jan 2015 06:09 PM |
imo if you rapped to it with the right flow its good lyrics are a bit everywhere, maybe you should try to tie your next point into your line, so it flows better |
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| 11 Jan 2015 06:11 PM |
oh snap!!!
-lord of the frozen north- |
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| 11 Jan 2015 06:13 PM |
| tell that loser to reply right now let's go |
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Syncretic
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| 11 Jan 2015 06:22 PM |
"and from here i can already hear your irritating bleat but i'm not here to swallow more of your deceit"
was expecting you to say meat but you said deceit |
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| 11 Jan 2015 06:43 PM |
I don't know you well enough to draw on personal features But know that I'm a god - speak 'bout me and you're a preacher You can't hope to understand the mind of one so omnipotent You're a rodent, I can hit you with my car and still get no dents My flow's so dense but hot - like lava volcano Also your mom's nickname - "Woah, she's gonna blow!" You challenge me? See, you can meet me at the Hanging Tree I see you fail to breathe, I'm pleased, it's murder in the first degree You think your flow's original? I'll be giving you no mercy Take you to court, the jury finds you guilty of line burglary If my lines fail to excite you, I there's a pill for that You're the one with all the issues, swear my lines are far from wack If I were black I'd be famous, but I'm at a racial disadvantage I just need that spark, something to increase the ampage But one thing is sure, you're not even close to my level At least people tell me that I rock, all they tell you is you pebble |
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| 11 Jan 2015 06:54 PM |
"At least people tell me that I rock, all they tell you is you pebble"
this was bad
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HMAX12
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| 11 Jan 2015 06:55 PM |
"You're a rodent, I can hit you with my car and still get no dents" Ya, not that good. |
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| 11 Jan 2015 06:56 PM |
@Killer It's a play on words lol |
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| 11 Jan 2015 06:56 PM |
| Calm down guys I didn't have to make it great, I only had to beat OP |
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| 11 Jan 2015 06:59 PM |
| Don't declare victory quite yet Eminem. |
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| 11 Jan 2015 07:00 PM |
@Black You got your chance. That's it. |
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| 11 Jan 2015 07:06 PM |
Come on, Eminem? Did you think that was my best? Your eagerness to end this match is quite funny; do I detect distress? So confess to your inferiority before I crush you with verse My words are a black harmony; your final curse.
Let's talk about Erica You dodged that subject real fine Might as well just admit that you acted like swine I shouldn't waste my words on you; they're nothing short of divine So knee before me, then build my shrine
Your words have no elegance, no style, no grace Nevertheless you've committed me to a new arms race of words Still, this shouldn't take long because you're a disgrace
All those seeking victory, join my master race... |
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ISOLAYTOR
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| 11 Jan 2015 07:11 PM |
| Alright ISO if Eminem doesn't respond I will because that means he admits he is my complete inferior and that I am his new word god. |
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Legion1x
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