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| 05 Jan 2015 02:15 PM |
A/N: Hello again readers! If you’re new to this please go to the first story here: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=152843125. I know the first story was a little iffy-iffy and maybe unrealistic, but hey that’s how it went XP. I would love for you guys to spread the love and make my story have more publicity… There is a lot more to write and I hope you guys enjoy! Also, I will probably be fitting as many stories into one post as possible. (Hopefully there is not a character count… if there is please inform me.) If there are unlimited characters then I will probably be fitting 3 stories into one post (depending how long each one is). [REMINDER]: This is a work in progress and I will post each story as soon as possible. All story links I have so far will be in my blurb. Feet-licking and pink elephants were done in OOC (out of character), but I added it to the story anyway because I thought it was funny :P (Shh. I’m not weird at all…)
[SIDE] Story Two: “The Coffee Exchange, Feet-licking, and Pink Elephants” It had only been a few days since Lori had accepted James’ offer to stay with his group and she was already at Masterson Valley getting familiar with the group members. There was only one other member of the group that she needed to know of, Chris. Chris is a bad drunkard and Axe’s mentor… Lori was very doubtful about that last fact, but went along with the current situation anyway. She learned about Axe’s obsession with coffee and James’ interest in inventions. One morning, Lori made coffee as James and Chris went out to search for more supplies for the group. When they left, she realized that Axe seemed to be acting weird this morning and decided to make coffee for him as well. The brunette planned to give the coffee to him politely and leave, but something much more “out-of-the-ordinary” happened. It was as if Axe was being lured to her by the strong scent of coffee. They had an intimate stare as Lori slowly handed him a mug of coffee. The feeling of his eyes locked on hers sent shivers down her spine. Then Chris suddenly opened the door with one swift drunken movement. Chris looked at the scene with a suspicious look on his face. “Oi, when did this coffee exchange start?” Axe and Lori immediately spread apart from each other. Chris laughed and then drowned his smile with a bottle of scotch. James also saw the scene and kept quiet as he unloaded the supplies that he had gathered. Later on that day, Lori was thirsting for a drink at the Crane Town bar so she asked Axe to go with her.
Just a friendly drink.. nothing special… right?
They drank far into the midst of the night and ended up falling asleep on the bar floor. Lori woke up the next morning with someone’s foot inches away from her face. “AHHH!” She jumped up and clutched her head in pain. “Too.. many.. drinks.” She realized it was Axe’s foot and woke him up. “Uhmph.. Morning..” She looked at him oddly. “Why do I taste feet in my mouth?” Now they both looked at each other oddly and then cracked up into a ball of drunken cackles. After they settled down, Lori asked where Axe’s gear was. “The pink elephant took it away!” She looked at him confused. “Everyday at a certain time the pink elephant takes away my stuff!” They both started laughing even though the joke made no sense. After some time passed and they got some-what sober, Axe found his gear under a piano and they headed home with major headaches and funny memories. Months had gone by and each day made the group’s bond grow even stronger. Lori actually felt something that she hasn’t felt in a long time. Happiness. All her remorse, guilt, horror, and paranoia were replaced by genuine happiness. She knew that this feeling wouldn’t last for long, so she savored it while it lasted.
A/N: Okay… so some of you told me to make a new paragraph every time someone talks.. so I’m not sure if I did it right, but if I didn’t please tell me! Sorry if there is any grammar or spelling mistakes… I’m only twelve T-T (and some of you twelve-year-olds are probably even better than me) Yes I know it’s kind of mushy-lovey-dovey right now, but this is more than just a funny love story. Please keep reading and I don’t mind any constructive criticism!
Story Three: “Story-Time” It had been a long time since Axe and Lori had met and she finally felt ready to tell her story to someone. After all, it was someone she trusted and this would be the first time she ever told anyone. Axe sat down in the chair in front of her, giving Lori a questioning look. “So, what did you need me for?” She took a deep breath before spilling her past.
Here it goes… no turning back now.
"First of all, Lori Foster is not my real name. My name is Ellie Rose. I'm from New York and I moved to Hawaii, because... Well I'll tell you. I remember my childhood was wonderful. My family was rich, powerful, respected, and I had a lot of friends. Everybody called us the Roses because we were so 'perfect'. As I grew older I soon realized that roses withered..... I lost all of my friends for some reason and my parents fought everyday. I never knew what they fought about.... I would always go to sleep to escape from this horrid reality but then I'd wake up to screaming and fighting.. But it wasn't just words. My father abused my mother... I will always remember sitting by the sidelines, watching my mother be beaten so close to death... I was so unable to do anything.. So powerless. My mother would always sing me a lullaby whenever I went to sleep to calm me... It was a beautiful tune, but now it haunts me. I became so stressed that I began to have these moments... I would stare off into space and focus on an object. Everything else would fall to oblivion and it would just be me and that one object. I would just stare at it for hours, thinking of nothing. It was very dangerous because I was unaware of my surroundings and I could not snap out of it or control when it happened. It occurred so often I began to call them 'wonderings'. One night my parents' argument was more heated than usual and it worried me. My mother sang her lullaby to help me sleep... She promised me she'd come back... She promised. She never came back. I never forgave my father that day. Now that my mother was gone, I soon realized that my father's fists would turn towards me. He beated me everyday until I was barely alive then he'd wait the next day just so he could do it again... It was cruel. After five years of torture, he left me alone for a few years...... but then he joined the USCPF. He was a high rank and he forced me to join with him. He made me.... Kill so many innocent people. I took mothers away from children just like mine was taken away from me. Ironic, isn't it? I couldn't take anymore of this torture.... I killed my own father. I didn't even give him a proper burial... I just let him rot in the dirt… Where he belongs. I changed my name and moved to Hawaii... But the torment didn't end there. My father has.. 'Friends'. Very good ones. They swore to make my life miserable for an unknown reason to me... I don't know what to call them so I just call them... Well... 'them'. I immediately isolated myself when I arrived in Hawaii... I didn't want anyone getting hurt because I knew they were watching me. After awhile, I made a friend.. I fell in love with him. He had... Such beautiful eyes. One day I heard a knock at my door and there was a package there.... I opened it and… There in the center were those beautiful eyes. They gouged them out of his skull and sent them to me... How cruel and disgusting... I eventually brought myself to move on and make new friends. I befriended a couple in love. They were so happy it gave me hope to find a new love in life.. One night, I came back to camp with the girl, and we saw that 'they' found her boyfriend and killed him. She was devastated... And so was I. I came back to the camp another night and saw the girlfriend lying on the floor dead. There was a suicide note that said... 'I'm sorry.' I'm sorry? I'M SORRY?!!?! ….. She left me alone and all she could say were those two words. This is my life. This is my reality.”
Axe sat there in astonishment. This hell that she has been through… he couldn’t even process the feelings he was overwhelmed with. He felt like apologizing, but remembered her last words. It was official, he was speechless. They both sat in silence for a few moments until Lori broke the ice. “Now that I’ve told you my story… I think I deserve yours.” She started eating cherries as she waited for what would come next. He adjusted his bandana and tried to recollect his thoughts. Her story made it hard for him to think and it took a couple moments to finally get words out of his mouth.
“My name, as you already know, is Axe. I was not really one of the people who you can relate to in the first minute. It all begins in Toledo, Ohio. I was a child to a family of three, my mother, uncle, and cousin. We never really lived together like normal people, but we managed. My friends were always a fall back solution if anything happened. My best friend and I got in trouble.. Skip ahead a few years, when the first few steps you take make the world seem so large. I never saw any of my friends again, or my family. I trusted anyone who seemed like they could protect…and that’s where you learn not everybody is nice... They did.. Things.. to me.. From then, I roamed as a medical advisor, and a wise person. After a good five years, I moved to Crane to watch the people, until you came by…”
Lori looked away when hearing his last words and gave a small blush. (Stop it Lori you don’t blush!) She shoved another cherry in her mouth, trying to hide the redness of her cheeks. They both sat in silence for awhile until Chris came bursting in. He smirked at the two and he knew he had just intruded on something private. “Ah, I know what you two are doing… You guys are love-birds now, right?” Lori started dramatically choking on a cherry seed when she heard what he had said. Chris laughed as he watched Lori un-lodge a seed from her throat. After she was finally able to breathe normally, she threw the seed at Chris which made him go away. Axe and Lori didn't talk to each other for the rest of the day, until morning came. In the following days they acted as if nothing has changed, but both of their perspectives of each other were different from that day forth.
A/N: …. It was kinda a big rant, but I just needed to get that backstory out there…
A/N: Okay, so will I get flagged if there is swearing? … I don’t know, but please tell me if I will so I won’t put anymore swearing in my next stories. This is where it gets serious. ;D
Story Four: “Dreams” Lori came back to camp to get some rest, for it was already dark outside. Axe was sleeping while James was guarding the camp. “Hey Lori,” “Hey…” She mumbled tiredly. “You should get some sleep. You seem tired..” She looked up at him. “Are you sure? How long have you been awake…?” He smiled at her reassuringly. “I’ll be fine.” She finally agreed and climbed into the covers. She felt comfortable as she drifted away into a well-needed slumber. The brunette opened her eyes and found herself in her old house.
A dream? I haven’t had one in a long time.
Her eyes adjusted to the darkness as buried memories of torment came up into her mind. The old thoughts made her want to cry, but then she heard a haunting tune coming from downstairs. It was her mother’s lullaby. “M-Mom?” There was no voice; instead, the tune stopped and footsteps climbed the staircase. Her eyes widened as she saw who the figure was. It was her father… His rotting corpse was there, going up the stairs. He took long slow steps and he reached his hand out to Lori. Her body was stiff and she was unable to move. That raspy voice that she remembered from so long ago, escaped from his raggedy mouth. “Ellie, my daughter…” Her heartbeat quickened when she saw him drawing closer to her. “They’ve found you. There is no escape…” He grabs her arm and a rotting piece of flesh falls off in the process. She screams and wakes herself up. Axe, James, and Chris rushed into her room. “What? What is it?” asked Axe nervously. Lori’s hands trembled and she rubbed the spot that her father touched her. “I had a nightmare…” Axe seemed to pity her, when he gave her a hug. “It’s okay…” She broke from his embrace to go to the window. “Morning already…” James nodded and brought in some canned beans and almost hit Chris’ bottle of scotch when doing so. “Hey! Watch it!” James ignored the drunkard and continued on. “These cans are all we have left.” The four adults ate in silence at the table outside of Lori’s room, as she recalled her nightmare. She slipped into a wondering and stared at her spoon for a few minutes while James tried to snap her out of it. “Lori?” He waved his fingers in front of her face. No response. “Oh sh*t. Axe she’s doing it again.” He shook her violently then she snapped back to reality. Lori punched James in the face out of surprise. “Ah, f*ck!” “Oh god, I’m so sorry! You scared me.. Let me help you.” James held his bleeding nose. “No, no I get it.” Lori brought a rag to him to clean up the mess. Axe sighed when he looked at the scene and he went to throw the cans away. The day went by normally, but Lori couldn’t help but think about the inevitable nightmare that awaits her tonight. Night fell over the sky and Lori was growing weary. Axe walked into her room and found her still awake. “You should probably go to sleep, Lori. James wants us to go looting for more supplies tomorrow.” She completely ignored him, and kept staring at the night sky. “Uh, Lori?” There was a small moment of silence. “I can’t sleep.” “Why can’t you sleep?” “I don’t want to go back… What if he comes back…?” “Who?” Lori’s soft voice in the dark room frightened Axe a bit. “My father visited me in my dreams. He said ‘they’ve found me’ and that ‘there is no escape’…” Axe now understood her worries. “Dreams aren’t real.. I’m sure you’ll be safe tonight. Your sleep should be treasured. Take advantage of this free time and get some rest, Lori.” “Okay.” She had spoken a lie straight to his face without wavering one bit (I mean she did have a lot of practice over the past years…). He left her alone and went to get his own rest. Lori stayed awake for hours just spending her time looking out the window. Her eyes became droopy and it wasn’t long until she fell asleep. She awakened and realized she was in another dream. Her eyes explored the scene. It was a barren desert with some soldiers marching around. She looked down and found her long brown hair draped over a uniform. This dream… it took place when she was in the USCPF. She didn’t know what to think so she just went with the flow. She walked out into the battlefield and she started sinking into the sand. “W-What the hell??!!?” Here gaze fell to her shoes and she saw corpses pulling her body down into the ground. Those familiar faces sent fear through her body. All those innocent lives she took were taking her down with them. Lori screamed, attempting to claw herself out of this situation. She just wanted to wake up. She just wanted the past to go away. Her eyesight was growing narrower as she was pulled deeper into the sea of fleshy dead bodies. Lori’s breaths were getting shallower and she felt like she couldn’t breathe. Then, everything went black. “What’s going on…” Lori felt around the bed and realized it was still dark outside. She watched the sun rise and she felt safe again. Weeks went by and her sleep was no longer disturbed by these deranged nightmares, but this isn’t the end. Lori’s nightmare became her reality. It was in the middle of the night and she was watching over the camp. Footsteps echoed at the end of the ladder and she could hear a person climbing up. Actually it wasn’t just a person, it was persons. Lori unslung her sniper rifle and aimed it at the approaching man. Her body froze when she discovered who was in front of her. “N-No… that’s impossible.. I- I killed you!” Axe woke up and was clearly confused at the situation. The man in the dark finally spoke. “Ellie, my daughter…” Axe clenched his fists when he realized it was her father. But how was that possible? Lori’s fear-stricken eyes fueled Axe’s strength to fight. The men in suits behind Lori’s father, Mr. Rose, grabbed Lori by the arms. “S-Stop!” Axe lashed out at Mr. Rose, but was held back by some other suity men (lol). Lori was so scared that she couldn’t even scream. Her scream was lodged in the middle of her throat, refusing to be let out. She was being dragged into a room and she couldn’t even care anymore.
So this is how it ends…
It was over. He won, and she didn’t even know how. Axe was tied down onto a chair as the other men did something to Lori in the other room. “Let her go you b*st*rds!” He was slapped across the face by Mr. Rose. “Be quiet and let me explain to you.” Axe sat there and listened reluctantly. “Ellie, or Lori as you may call her, is mentally ill. A bit insane if I say so myself. The only reason why my wife and I fought was because we were debating whether to send her to an asylum or not.” Axe was very skeptical, but he kept listening. “She went mad… She murdered her own mother and framed me for it. Now what kind of daughter would do that? She kept screaming… ‘Dad stop hurting her!’ as she stabbed her mother to death. She ran away because I threatened to put her into a mental hospital, and we’ve been searching for her all this time.” Axe spoke up when he was sure the man was finished. “Everyone is a little mad. Take a look at yourself for example,” Mr. Rose furrowed his eyebrows. “Do you not understand, you ignorant boy?! She is a COLD-BLOODED MURDERER! She killed innocent lives and went INSANE!! Get this through your thick-skull. She is not what you think she is.” The scene was getting heated up. “And why should I believe someone like you? Lori is a unique person and no one can fake a personality like that!” Mr. Rose was getting frustrated with Axe and he called his men to beat some sense into him. Axe was dripping with blood when Lori came outside of the room. Something didn’t seem right with her… She didn’t have that bold and strong structure anymore. Instead, she was shaking and staring at her hands as if… as of they were covered with the blood of innocent victims. “He’s right, Axe.. I’m a cold-blooded murderer.” Axe couldn’t believe what was going on. “No.. no! What the f*ck did you do to her?! Brainwash?!!” She just stared as her hands. “How do you feel about me now…” Axe just stared at her beautiful face.. He couldn’t say anything. Not after seeing what just happened. Lori was sad to hear no reply. She looked up and studied her father’s face. It looked as if he was starting to sweat under her intense stare. He didn’t quite look the same as he did before… or were her eyes fooling her? She gave an evil smirk as she came to the conclusion that this was a man in disguise. “Father, can you sing Mother’s lullaby for me?” The imposter stood there, not knowing how to react. Axe saw what Lori was trying to reveal to him and he also smirked. “Game over.” At that very second, a bullet flew through the air, hitting the imposter right in the face. Other bullets killed the men behind Lori and she went to untie Axe. They both looked up and saw James taking out the men one by one. “What a reliable group member,” Lori laughed as he tossed them some guns and they all knew how this would end. By the time the battle was over, the camp was covered with tiny growing fires and smeared blood on the floors and walls. She had survived, at least for now.
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Kaka088
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| 05 Jan 2015 06:14 PM |
| Please write a book.(Also go to wattpad, its an app where you can post your storys and its awesome face, you can also get more fans ;P) Also wanting to make a group 'bout this baddddd |
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| 05 Jan 2015 10:12 PM |
| @Above XD lol maybe I should? But I'd like to keep it on roblox only because ATF is a roblox game and it'd be so tiring to explain this and that... You can make a group only if I can join ;D lol it's so weird now that I have fangirls.... o.O and these characters are actual people that I've role played with... I'll probably put a cast of the characters in my blurb later or something. |
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| 06 Jan 2015 12:27 AM |
I'm just gonna say I approve of this, because I don't feel like reading a refrigerator-sized blob of text, and my word doesn't matter to anyone around here anyway.
•∆The expression of your ignorant, biased opinion is entirely unnecessary∆• |
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| 10 Jan 2015 04:57 PM |
| If the link at the top doesn't work, just go to my blurb/bio. It has all the links of the stories that are currently out |
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patr34
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| 28 Feb 2015 11:26 PM |
| Wouldn't Lori have a bit of I don't know... Stranger danger? When she's offered to have drinks with men she doesn't know? |
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| 01 Mar 2015 09:55 AM |
Welp, you're going good sire just keep going on with this, make it an epic 1000 or so part story over the entirety of her ATF career and we'll have an insta-classic.
That..was slightly a joke but I really do like the story so far. Good work. |
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