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MASTERLUKE755 is not online. MASTERLUKE755
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09 Jan 2015 12:37 PM
Post 'em
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K
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09 Jan 2015 01:25 PM
no
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FlyingDeath is not online. FlyingDeath
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09 Jan 2015 01:25 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EJ3zUPFwW8w

do it
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09 Jan 2015 03:32 PM
i would advise against that, people on VCR seem to be unable to take criticism

yeah i'm fave
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uranium52 is not online. uranium52
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09 Jan 2015 08:03 PM
Ooh look at that the famous MasterLuke

Prowler and constant poster of /r/apocalypserising


"I give up" - uranium52
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Praise Masterluke, our /r/ApocalypseRising overlord.
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Kasodus is online. Kasodus
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10 Jan 2015 07:10 AM
does it have to be my own videos
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10 Jan 2015 08:59 AM
still waiting on the critique
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10 Jan 2015 10:07 AM
wat Luke is famous?
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Noobegai is not online. Noobegai
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10 Jan 2015 10:11 AM
@Flying
Since Luke won't critique it, I will.
A little cheesy
Animation was choppy
Other than that it was okay.

Sweetness
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FlyingDeath is not online. FlyingDeath
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10 Jan 2015 10:29 AM
@Noobegai
Thanks for the critique, this helped.

only thing I don't understand is the cheesy part, as in what part is cheesy?
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Noobegai is not online. Noobegai
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10 Jan 2015 11:03 AM
Eh, just wasn't very intense.
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ZekkieTheGreat is not online. ZekkieTheGreat
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10 Jan 2015 11:13 AM
NOOBEGAI UR VIDEOS AREN'T INTENSE YOU'RE NOT WORTHY













jk
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10 Jan 2015 11:13 AM
you're overusing cross-lines
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FunctionalProgrammer is not online. FunctionalProgrammer
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10 Jan 2015 03:07 PM
critique pls

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uBmRm9xBlmI

or give me constructive criticism, i can handle it.
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Noobegai is not online. Noobegai
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10 Jan 2015 03:08 PM
like I said.
Boring
4/10
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10 Jan 2015 04:39 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nwl82DW2jco

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10 Jan 2015 04:57 PM
cheesy -/- intense

lmao


Route 66 Productions Christmas Special (FT. ItsMeta): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eSGZeF8SX_0
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@Remainings
Not funny.
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ZekkieTheGreat is not online. ZekkieTheGreat
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10 Jan 2015 05:01 PM
wtf Noobegai do you even qualify to critique?
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10 Jan 2015 05:02 PM
idk
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MASTERLUKE755 is not online. MASTERLUKE755
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10 Jan 2015 08:39 PM
k well im gonna nitpick

@FlyingDeath

-Intro a LITTLE too long imo
-Random frame flashes at around 0:12 when it switches camera angles
-Could've found a better font for for the FlyingDeath/Caliroll title bit, something more grungy
-Shot from 0:18 to 0:26 felt too long, in fact I probably would've cut that from the video altogether or would have made it significantly shorter
-Stop motion was good, but I feel like it could have had a higher framerate
-Not enough action for an action video
My #1 complaint is that the brightness/contrast/saturation all change throughout the video multiple times. Try to maintain a consistency, it's all over the place here.

@FunctionalProgrammer
The editing was decent, but you need to have actual things in that besides text and the floating R. I'm sure you're already aware of that since the video is just a preview.

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ZekkieTheGreat is not online. ZekkieTheGreat
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10 Jan 2015 10:21 PM
@Luke Functional's video was a preview
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ZekkieTheGreat is not online. ZekkieTheGreat
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10 Jan 2015 10:21 PM
owait I take that back I didn't see what you said at last elolofldl
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