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joeani
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| 09 Jan 2015 01:25 PM |
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EJ3zUPFwW8w
do it |
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Faave
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| 09 Jan 2015 03:32 PM |
i would advise against that, people on VCR seem to be unable to take criticism
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uranium52
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| 09 Jan 2015 08:03 PM |
Ooh look at that the famous MasterLuke
Prowler and constant poster of /r/apocalypserising
"I give up" - uranium52 |
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| 10 Jan 2015 07:05 AM |
| Praise Masterluke, our /r/ApocalypseRising overlord. |
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Kasodus
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| 10 Jan 2015 07:10 AM |
| does it have to be my own videos |
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| 10 Jan 2015 08:59 AM |
| still waiting on the critique |
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Noobegai
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| 10 Jan 2015 10:11 AM |
@Flying Since Luke won't critique it, I will. A little cheesy Animation was choppy Other than that it was okay.
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| 10 Jan 2015 10:29 AM |
@Noobegai Thanks for the critique, this helped.
only thing I don't understand is the cheesy part, as in what part is cheesy? |
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Noobegai
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| 10 Jan 2015 11:03 AM |
| Eh, just wasn't very intense. |
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| 10 Jan 2015 11:13 AM |
NOOBEGAI UR VIDEOS AREN'T INTENSE YOU'RE NOT WORTHY
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spacegang
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| 10 Jan 2015 11:13 AM |
| you're overusing cross-lines |
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| 10 Jan 2015 03:07 PM |
critique pls
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uBmRm9xBlmI
or give me constructive criticism, i can handle it. |
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Noobegai
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| 10 Jan 2015 04:39 PM |
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nwl82DW2jco
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routess
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| 10 Jan 2015 04:57 PM |
cheesy -/- intense
lmao
Route 66 Productions Christmas Special (FT. ItsMeta): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eSGZeF8SX_0 |
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Noobegai
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| 10 Jan 2015 05:01 PM |
| wtf Noobegai do you even qualify to critique? |
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Noobegai
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| 10 Jan 2015 08:39 PM |
k well im gonna nitpick
@FlyingDeath
-Intro a LITTLE too long imo -Random frame flashes at around 0:12 when it switches camera angles -Could've found a better font for for the FlyingDeath/Caliroll title bit, something more grungy -Shot from 0:18 to 0:26 felt too long, in fact I probably would've cut that from the video altogether or would have made it significantly shorter -Stop motion was good, but I feel like it could have had a higher framerate -Not enough action for an action video My #1 complaint is that the brightness/contrast/saturation all change throughout the video multiple times. Try to maintain a consistency, it's all over the place here.
@FunctionalProgrammer The editing was decent, but you need to have actual things in that besides text and the floating R. I'm sure you're already aware of that since the video is just a preview.
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| 10 Jan 2015 10:21 PM |
| @Luke Functional's video was a preview |
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| 10 Jan 2015 10:21 PM |
| owait I take that back I didn't see what you said at last elolofldl |
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