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| 04 Jan 2015 11:20 AM |
~~Building your character~~ Name: Age: Gender: Apperance: Family (Optional): Weapons (Max: M14, any "better" gun will be voided. Mags: 2D6) ~~Stats~~ (Please balance them out)D6,D8,D10,or D12 Str. (Strength): Dex. (Dexterity, how fast you are): Char. (Charisma, your health): Dip. (Diplmoacy, Ex. Speeches): Int. (Intelegence):
Here is my character: Name: John Kilson Age: 17 Gender: Male Apperance: Red Shirt, Jeans, Red Shoes, Family (Optional): Weapons: Dual G18 (silenced) 6 Mags (To find stats, roll 4D6 and add the highest 3, then assign the numbers as you please (max 18)) Str.:12 Dex.:11 Char.:12 Dip.:11 Int.:10
~~Storyline~~
You live in the State of Chicago, and you arrive from your flight to a pile of ruins, people screaming, and things that are eating people, good thing you have a weapon. You run from the plane, ready to shoot anybody who comes near, you only think one thing "Trust nobody"
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:25 AM |
Chicago isn't a state, YouNoob. And there's no plot at all. |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:34 AM |
I look to my left, seeing several people carrying people who look injured from the plane to a building with a sign "Hospital" on it. Curious if I could help, I sprint to the building, guns in hand.
I run inside the building, exhausted from the 100 yard run, thinking, "How did I just run that far?" I hear a scream behind me, one of those undead things tackling an old woman, and I shoot at the zombie (DC 5 check Dex.) *succeeds, does 2D8 damage to zombie (8) and the zombie dies* I attempt to drag the old woman to the Hospital (DC 10 Str.) *Fails, I cant drag the woman to the hospital, so I leave her there and run inside* |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:35 AM |
| Well, shut up and deal with it. |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:36 AM |
I don't just "Deal with it". You need to get a plot here. |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:36 AM |
Well, shut up and deal with it.
Eh. That's pretty mature response. |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:37 AM |
| Why don't you make one if your so desperate? |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:38 AM |
It's your role play, not mine. What a mature response.(2) |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:39 AM |
| And I said, "Shut up and deal with it." so if you don't like it then shut up and deal with it. |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:41 AM |
| Anyways...... Back to the roleplay. |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:43 AM |
| It looks like after you said that no one's going to join. |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:44 AM |
| Well, that's ok with me if I have to write an entire story for others to read. |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:44 AM |
I don't think anyone's going to read it if you act like a snot. Do think about that. |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:46 AM |
| Attempts to punch rockmax2112alt in the face (DC5) (10) *succeeds* rockmax2112 is now dead and should shut up and go to another thread. |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:47 AM |
I am a Rock. I do not feel pain and cannot die. Now, how about you take my advice about not being a snot? |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:48 AM |
You are not a rock, you are and alt.
Now if you WOULD shut up, I would be ABLE to stop being a snot. |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:48 AM |
Plot: Not enough detail, even though it gives the player some sense of what's going on. 3/10 Grammar: Pretty good, although it gets a bit bad. 5/10 Character Stats: OP makes his player overpowered, and he defies his own rules. 0/10
Overall: 8/30. Needs A LOT of work.
¿ızzɐɹǝʞɐɔuɐd ǝɥʇ noʎ ǝʞɐɯ sǝʞɐɔuɐd buıʞɐɯ sǝop 'ızzɐɹɐdɐd ǝɥʇ noʎ sǝʞɐɯ ɐzzıd buıʞɐɯ ɟı |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:49 AM |
Nah. Now, go make a plot. Now. God wills you. |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:50 AM |
"an lot of work" That does not sound or look right.
¿ızzɐɹǝʞɐɔuɐd ǝɥʇ noʎ ǝʞɐɯ sǝʞɐɔuɐd buıʞɐɯ sǝop 'ızzɐɹɐdɐd ǝɥʇ noʎ sǝʞɐɯ ɐzzıd buıʞɐɯ ɟı |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:52 AM |
| I have only made 1 typo. And if the Max stat is 18 and my highest is 12. Then I am NOT being OP. Although I do get the "Without a plot" part, I think I should get a bit more credit than 8/30, maybe 22/30? and succeeds is actually how you spell success. It has 2 e's in past terms, try typing that in. |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:52 AM |
I mean for my typo right before your post, you nitwit.
Now, shut up and deal with it. |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:54 AM |
| Snot hypocrite is acting like a hypocrite. |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:55 AM |
Wow, calling names. So mature.
Also, your character's overall stats is 56. Overpowered much?
¿ızzɐɹǝʞɐɔuɐd ǝɥʇ noʎ ǝʞɐɯ sǝʞɐɔuɐd buıʞɐɯ sǝop 'ızzɐɹɐdɐd ǝɥʇ noʎ sǝʞɐɯ ɐzzıd buıʞɐɯ ɟı |
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| 04 Jan 2015 11:56 AM |
| How is admitting that I made a grammar mistake hypocrisy? Sorry, I don't understand alts very well, sorry, but I need to create an alt account to fully understand you, rockmax2112alt. |
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