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| 29 Dec 2014 04:41 PM |
{Hook}
Being thug is what I'm about I'm not going to scream or shout Or frown or pout Just gonna look forward No other place I'm staying focused
{Verse 1}
Yea, we looking for inspiration I'm looking to be the next sensation I just need motivation And be the man I am Be the shepherd not the lamb Take a selfie on my cam I see these peeps with fire They calling me a liar And I can tell you thats not my desire All I need to do is look forward Get these problems sorted.
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Being thug is what I'm about I'm not going to scream or shout Or frown or pout Just gonna look forward No other place I'm staying focused
{Verse 2}
All these haters that are hating Are demonstrating what not to do Cos people be jealous Of what I have and they don't They just to lazy to get it and won't Trying me feel down but they giving me the Motivation to get off the ground and get Out off the water when I'm bout to drowned I save myself and everyone else When they sad and mad And when they lose their mom or their dad
{Hook}
Being thug is what I'm about I'm not going to scream or shout Or frown or pout Just gonna look forward No other place I'm staying focused
{Verse 3}
Do it while you can Fry it in the pan And be a man No tryin' to act the hard lad So go and die or cry Don't lie, you weak So go and see out what you want And look forward Its the only way When your lifes in a state
{Hook}
Being thug is what I'm about I'm not going to scream or shout Or frown or pout Just gonna look forward No other place I'm staying focused
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| 29 Dec 2014 04:42 PM |
| [Its my second rap. Please rate it. Thanks.] |
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| 29 Dec 2014 04:45 PM |
0.5/10
Never call yourself a thug. Kthxbye. |
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| 29 Dec 2014 04:52 PM |
| Fair enough. As I say haters gonna hate bruv. |
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| 29 Dec 2014 04:56 PM |
| Not a hater, just don't like this song or the fact you proclaim yourself a "thug" like its a good thing. |
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| 29 Dec 2014 05:04 PM |
| Hey cone on man. I'm proving some points. |
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| 29 Dec 2014 05:08 PM |
| 1/10 1.verses too short. 2. your not a thug if your rapping on ROBLOX. 3. rhymes decent, but not good enough with how short verses are, and how unrealistic and dumb lyrics are. |
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| 29 Dec 2014 05:09 PM |
| Just cause people call you out on yo bullsht. dont mean they are haters. stop ro-rapping if this is whats its gonna be about. theres a reason people hate ro-rap.. |
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| 29 Dec 2014 05:10 PM |
| I'll take it into consideration. |
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| 29 Dec 2014 05:32 PM |
| Are You English? Blud Wagwan! half British I am! 9.5/10 |
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| 29 Dec 2014 05:33 PM |
| Not English. Northern Irish. Thanks for the rating. |
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| 29 Dec 2014 05:38 PM |
| Some people appreciate a good rhyme. |
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| 29 Dec 2014 10:52 PM |
1st verse was alright. Yeah try to prolong the verses and don't use as many simple rhymes.
6/10 |
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| 30 Dec 2014 05:24 AM |
| Stag - Forward (Thomas Eftürk & Ugür Özcan Vocal Mix) |
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| 30 Dec 2014 06:04 AM |
| Don't call yourself a thug, Thug Life was a rap group..I mean its alright, but not on ROBLOX, and make longer verses. atleast 16 lines. |
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