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Re: Read this poem I wrote;

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Catucus is not online. Catucus
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26 Dec 2014 05:17 PM
(it is copyrighted. Possibly going to be published.)


(clans, this is now on topic haha)




Today, we stalled at the Crimson Tree,

With its burning leaves and many deeds;

We laid in ash and made to keep;

A world in fire, born to weep.


Today, we fell at the Crimson tree,

With its melted bed and smelted red;

We sunk in ember to rest our heads;

Our bodies broken, our hearts well-fed.



Today, we kissed at the Crimson Tree,

With its branches brazen and roots ablaze;

We sapped the fire and made to stay;

The day will end, and we will decay.



Today, we burnt down the Crimson Tree,

With its flaming bark and many sparks;

We came to see and clear the dark;

You and I, we've left our mark.



Yesterday, we had a Crimson Tree,

It had flaming bark and burning leaves;

It cleared the dark and made to keep.

But today, there is no need;

For, you and I, we're planting seeds;

And tomorrow, there may be;

More than one, Crimson Tree.

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FuritIgnis is not online. FuritIgnis
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26 Dec 2014 05:17 PM
applause again
amazing
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Catucus is not online. Catucus
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26 Dec 2014 05:18 PM
thank ya again
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Catucus is not online. Catucus
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26 Dec 2014 05:21 PM
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26 Dec 2014 05:22 PM
better than anything I read in school
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Catucus is not online. Catucus
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26 Dec 2014 05:23 PM
@022, that means a lot to me. You have no idea.
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hockeychris11 is not online. hockeychris11
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26 Dec 2014 05:23 PM
actually really good
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Ariff is not online. Ariff
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26 Dec 2014 05:23 PM
-tears up-
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Catucus is not online. Catucus
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26 Dec 2014 05:24 PM
Thanks guys. :)
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scaredhobo is not online. scaredhobo
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26 Dec 2014 05:25 PM
*wipes eyes* it's beautiful 😪!
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26 Dec 2014 05:25 PM
i am done with life
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26 Dec 2014 05:25 PM
good
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Catucus is not online. Catucus
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26 Dec 2014 05:25 PM
Thank you!
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Catucus is not online. Catucus
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26 Dec 2014 05:27 PM
Actually, I think this is the greatest poem I have ever written.
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Diecis is not online. Diecis
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26 Dec 2014 05:27 PM
what is this for
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Catucus is not online. Catucus
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26 Dec 2014 05:28 PM
@Die, I wrote it for the girl. We're dating now. :D


Publishers have also noticed me. I am compiling my work into a large compilation of poetry and philosophy.
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Diecis is not online. Diecis
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26 Dec 2014 05:28 PM
wow poetry is magic
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26 Dec 2014 05:32 PM
psst houston we have a problem

cos the booty youre gonna get gonna be outta space
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FuritIgnis is not online. FuritIgnis
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26 Dec 2014 05:37 PM
permission to put on blurb ornaw?
i give creds
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Catucus is not online. Catucus
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26 Dec 2014 05:38 PM
Absolutely Furt! Thanks!
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Catucus is not online. Catucus
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26 Dec 2014 05:40 PM
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Catucus is not online. Catucus
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26 Dec 2014 05:42 PM
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FuritIgnis is not online. FuritIgnis
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26 Dec 2014 05:43 PM
i took out 2 paragraphs cuz this is long
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Catucus is not online. Catucus
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26 Dec 2014 05:44 PM
Thanks anyways.

As an artist, it's nice to see that my work gets a reception.
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26 Dec 2014 06:03 PM
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