Catucus
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| 26 Dec 2014 05:17 PM |
(it is copyrighted. Possibly going to be published.)
(clans, this is now on topic haha)
Today, we stalled at the Crimson Tree,
With its burning leaves and many deeds;
We laid in ash and made to keep;
A world in fire, born to weep.
Today, we fell at the Crimson tree,
With its melted bed and smelted red;
We sunk in ember to rest our heads;
Our bodies broken, our hearts well-fed.
Today, we kissed at the Crimson Tree,
With its branches brazen and roots ablaze;
We sapped the fire and made to stay;
The day will end, and we will decay.
Today, we burnt down the Crimson Tree,
With its flaming bark and many sparks;
We came to see and clear the dark;
You and I, we've left our mark.
Yesterday, we had a Crimson Tree,
It had flaming bark and burning leaves;
It cleared the dark and made to keep.
But today, there is no need;
For, you and I, we're planting seeds;
And tomorrow, there may be;
More than one, Crimson Tree.
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Catucus
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| 26 Dec 2014 05:22 PM |
| better than anything I read in school |
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| 26 Dec 2014 05:23 PM |
| @022, that means a lot to me. You have no idea. |
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Ariff
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Catucus
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| 26 Dec 2014 05:25 PM |
| *wipes eyes* it's beautiful 😪! |
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Diecis
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Catucus
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Catucus
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| 26 Dec 2014 05:27 PM |
| Actually, I think this is the greatest poem I have ever written. |
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Diecis
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Catucus
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| 26 Dec 2014 05:28 PM |
@Die, I wrote it for the girl. We're dating now. :D
Publishers have also noticed me. I am compiling my work into a large compilation of poetry and philosophy. |
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Ariff
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| 26 Dec 2014 05:32 PM |
psst houston we have a problem
cos the booty youre gonna get gonna be outta space |
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| 26 Dec 2014 05:37 PM |
permission to put on blurb ornaw? i give creds |
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Catucus
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| 26 Dec 2014 05:43 PM |
| i took out 2 paragraphs cuz this is long |
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| 26 Dec 2014 05:44 PM |
Thanks anyways.
As an artist, it's nice to see that my work gets a reception. |
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