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bmoreno830 is not online. bmoreno830
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19 Dec 2014 05:02 PM
Rockport, a very young but successful democracy, one in which recently a new constitution was written, one which will need a strong and determined hands to shape it's new constitution and future. I, am one of those hands, I have been in Rockport for several months, and have served as a House of Representative for the majority of my time within Rockport. I want to touch on the following subjects, improving the activity of the legislative branch, expanding Rockport services, and the right to bear arms.


As a result of our new constitution, many new doors for the legislative branch have opened up, for example the ability to build off of our right to own a non-lethal weapon as stated within the bill of rights. I, as I have tried and tried again will try my best once again to sign into law a bill which would allow all citizens to own a non-lethal weapon such as a low powered form of the TRC pepper spray. Now, I know there would be abuse of this tool by many hardened criminals, however the abuse will be buffered by the addition of new things to do at Remington, therefore drawing interest away from the criminal field.

As can be seen by my Expansion of Rockport Services bill, I attempted to expand the EMS, and RDOT services at all Rockport cities, and even attempted to open a conference center at Monica. Although this is only one of my many bills which never were voted on, I plan to pursue this one as intently and diligently as our right to bear arms. However, even though I wrote this bill, a mayor by the name of Rvnz was responsible for bringing this matter to my attention, and is a co-signer of the bill.

Ultimately, even with our newly renewed constitution and ambition among Rockport, none of this will matter if our Legislative branch continues to remain inactive, with that being so, I plan to run for Speaker of the House, for the third time. If elected as Speaker of the House, at the very least a session will be held every Friday or Saturday, unless a family emergency occurs. Although some may think my many failed attempts at SotH signify that I'm not the right choice, this is far from true, with my bills and devotion to Rockport as evidence. In the end, only us, the citizens and people of Rockport can ultimately bring our State to greatness, you, the citizens, the people.

Bmoreno
Two-term Incumbent House of Representatives
#Bmoreno4HOR
#Bmoreno4SotH

Bill Index
1. Right to Bear Arms Bill - http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=144837190
2. Legislative Organization Bill - http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=149253250
3. Expansion of Rockport Services Bill - http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=149702048
4. Expansion of Justice Bill - http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=149703117
5. National Guard Establishment Bill - http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=149827162
6. Legislative - Judicial Seperation of Supremacy Bill - http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=150015824
7. LEGISLATIVE GUIDING BILL - http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=150294467
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sniperdude345 is not online. sniperdude345
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19 Dec 2014 05:09 PM
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xXBobThePotatoXx is not online. xXBobThePotatoXx
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19 Dec 2014 05:14 PM
Its not a "democracy" ITS A REPUBLIC GET IT RIGHT REMMINGTON
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19 Dec 2014 05:20 PM
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TrooperQUANGA is not online. TrooperQUANGA
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21 Dec 2014 10:40 AM
Drink bleach, skrub.


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TrooperQUANGA is not online. TrooperQUANGA
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21 Dec 2014 10:41 AM
Loljk.


no support, skrub.



Still drink bleach.



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NextGenerationQUANGA is not online. NextGenerationQUANGA
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21 Dec 2014 10:46 AM
Good speech. I support for real. Above was just a little fun. You are a smart person but you have a bad attitude. Fix that and you will have my vote all the way.
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bmoreno830 is not online. bmoreno830
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23 Dec 2014 11:05 AM
My attitude is only a product of my environment on ROBLOX, as is the attitude of many others on ROBLOX. I apologize if I offended you in any way.
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23 Dec 2014 11:05 AM
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ciaisaac is not online. ciaisaac
Joined: 12 Dec 2010
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23 Dec 2014 12:36 PM
Bmoreno, I apologize in advance if this may be a little mean.

This speech is poorly written; it's full of run-on sentences & grammatical mistakes. The speech has a poor layout/outline too. It goes off topic multiple times; e.g., you're talking about becoming Speaker of the House in your House of Representatives speech. This is what you said: "... improving the activity of the legislative branch, expanding Rockport services, and the right to bear arms." Instead of doing that in the order you said, it went like this: Bear arms, Rockport services, & improving inactivity-- backwards.

You can't improve activity if your a Congressman. Inactivity of other members is unavoidable unless you're the Speaker of the House. The Speaker can have a majority vote from the House to see if the inactive member shall be removed. Although, talking about Speaker of the House in your House of Representatives speech is unacceptable.

This speech shows that you're power hungry as well. "Well.. proof pl0x, cia?" You're posting the speech way early hoping to get ahead of the game. Overall, I think making a speech early should be banned. It let's the speech sponsor get an unfair advantage. You're also posting all your bills. How many bills you have doesn't mean you're better than anyone else. It doesn't matter how many bills you have; it only matters if you support the citizens & actually think of good bills instead of spurting out bad ones immediately & not get caught up in power.

In conclusion, I'm not trying to be mean. I'm being fairly objective with some subjective areas. This is just some constructive criticism to improve yourself. Don't give me any of that denial stuff. My paragraphs are well constructed. Please take your time to read it ALL.

(I'll support when I'm ready, Bmoreno.)

Ciaisaac
-House of Representatives
(Soon to be UCC)
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Rvnz is not online. Rvnz
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23 Dec 2014 06:19 PM
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Love the Expansion of Rockport Services Bill.

-Rvnz
Previous Mayor of Monica


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23 Dec 2014 10:09 PM
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ciaisaac is not online. ciaisaac
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26 Dec 2014 04:22 PM
My criticism was of the speech; it was not of you.

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26 Dec 2014 04:23 PM
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26 Dec 2014 05:47 PM
Support, why not.
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