generic image
Processing...
  • Games
  • Catalog
  • Develop
  • Robux
  • Search in Players
  • Search in Games
  • Search in Catalog
  • Search in Groups
  • Search in Library
  • Log In
  • Sign Up
  • Games
  • Catalog
  • Develop
  • Robux
   
ROBLOX Forum » Pop-Culture (Music/Books/Movies/TV)
Home Search
 

Re: Gang Signs - Indiella

Previous Thread :: Next Thread 
Indiella is not online. Indiella
Joined: 15 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 2603
22 Dec 2014 10:28 PM
DISCLAIMER: The song is in the point of view as his g/f.
Album comes out 12/24, so in 2 days. :)
Instrumental: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tbt2BAoq7Zo
-----------------------------

[Verse 1] (0:24)
He didn't wanna but they sayin' he deserves it
Revenge is best kept cold, that's how he served it
He sayin' he didn't do it, but people sayin' they observed it
Yet when they're questioned, they keep shut and try to curve it
"I don't wanna answer...", then they pull down the curtains
They say he was the ringleader, call it a Britney Spears circus
They callin' him a T just 'cause he from the turbans, [middle east]
The only thing they saw was the trashcans that were burning
I don't know who to believe, I'm just searchin' for a median
Everything is moving so quickly, they aren't waitin' for me to begin
This boy's surrounded in his demons, looks like he ate that apple from Eden
Yeah, hand me that red one, I'll take the medium
Friends talk so much [s], sayin' "He's d[e]ad to me"
Caught his tongue slippin' like he got a lisp, is that an S or a Z?
Poor boy, didn't know how to be a man because he never had a good mama
Bumpin' woman to woman, smells like revenge to me

[Hook] (1:12)
You don't know what you have until it's gone,
You say, not today, you'll wait tomorrow
But once you get a taste of what it's like
You never know until you flash the signs

[Verse 2] (1:36)
"Yep, he's worthless", said all of his neighbors
Worked as a lifeguard while his dad was fixin' alternators
Almost got busted sm[o]king p[o]t behind the trailer
Packed it up, put it in his pocket and said he'd save it for later
Call it whatever you wanna, but he's got a woman now
Tryna leave everything he knows, he's moving to Brooklyn now
This some J Cole [s], he got a crooked smile
Finally happy, he don't wanna ruin it now
But that day, three knocks to the door, they poundin'
Been hiding from the cops for 5 days, they finally found him
Opened the front door, now he was surrounded
He took off out the back and tried runnin' off towards the mountains
He headed towards the back door, but the cops caught up to 'em
They scattered around, yelled at him, and tried swattin' 'em
Tried grabbing his collar, but his pull was too strong for 'em
The kid ran upstairs, locked his door, brought his gl[o]ck to 'em
He thought, (2:24) "This is the last moment, then I'll be gone
No more sorrow, no more fear, no more wrong
Only one pull, then I'll be d[e]ad"
Write my name on that bullet, baby, so I'm the last thing to go through your head

[Hook] (2:24, as well)
You don't know what you have until it's gone,
You say, not today, you'll wait tomorrow
But once you get a taste of what it's like
You never know until you flash the signs

[Bridge (old, slow recording]
"Gang signs...-scratch- out the window, ya -record skips-
Hopin' all of 'em offend you, ya -blurred noises-
They say your hood...is a pot of gold
And we gon' crash it when nobody's home"
-pause 5 seconds-

[Hook x2] (3:36)
You don't know what you have until it's gone,
You say, not today, you'll wait tomorrow
But once you get a taste of what it's like
You never know until you flash the signs

[Outro (scratchy, foggy voices)]
= "They say he died because of his gang drama! Always tryna sell p[o]t!"
- "Nah, [n] he died 'cause he had too much stress! His girlfriend can be a real pain in the [a]! I'd k[i]ll myself too if I dated her!"
Report Abuse
Aetion is not online. Aetion
Joined: 02 Oct 2010
Total Posts: 5482
22 Dec 2014 10:30 PM
ACK

<|/|>
Report Abuse
GoldenKinq is not online. GoldenKinq
Joined: 18 Feb 2013
Total Posts: 721
22 Dec 2014 10:32 PM
I like your bridge.
Report Abuse
Wobull is not online. Wobull
Joined: 07 Apr 2014
Total Posts: 8168
22 Dec 2014 10:32 PM
ACK
FPP
600

8/10
Got really boring though
Report Abuse
GoldenKinq is not online. GoldenKinq
Joined: 18 Feb 2013
Total Posts: 721
22 Dec 2014 10:37 PM
RGZ UP NIKKAH Xhik Xhing
Report Abuse
Wobull is not online. Wobull
Joined: 07 Apr 2014
Total Posts: 8168
22 Dec 2014 10:39 PM
bié guǎn wǒ!
Report Abuse
Indiella is not online. Indiella
Joined: 15 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 2603
22 Dec 2014 10:39 PM
> I like your bridge.

Thanks. :)

#ACK
Report Abuse
Procyonix is not online. Procyonix
Joined: 07 Dec 2012
Total Posts: 2442
22 Dec 2014 10:42 PM
9/10
Report Abuse
GoldenKinq is not online. GoldenKinq
Joined: 18 Feb 2013
Total Posts: 721
22 Dec 2014 10:45 PM
\.^./
Report Abuse
contryboyyall is not online. contryboyyall
Joined: 19 Oct 2011
Total Posts: 99
22 Dec 2014 11:42 PM
SWAG
Report Abuse
lunafanplace is not online. lunafanplace
Joined: 11 Sep 2012
Total Posts: 2943
22 Dec 2014 11:45 PM
I liked the idea, but i don't like the delivery, Indiella.

The chorus and the bridge was good, but i felt you could of delivered the verses better.

6.5/10 - simply for the idea, and ignoring the delivery

If this were delivered better it could easily be a 8/10-9/10.
Report Abuse
Tripcord is not online. Tripcord
Joined: 31 Dec 2011
Total Posts: 593
23 Dec 2014 01:01 AM
Damn, the drought is over!!!


8/10
Report Abuse
RoDuck3D is not online. RoDuck3D
Joined: 24 Sep 2011
Total Posts: 10683
23 Dec 2014 02:22 AM
>They callin' him a T just 'cause he from the turbans, [middle east]

who calls a guy from the middle east a "t"

wtf
Report Abuse
wildwolfkilla is not online. wildwolfkilla
Joined: 18 Dec 2012
Total Posts: 1725
23 Dec 2014 07:28 AM
Hold up she's d@ting Aetion?

^I'm not sure if I could say the full word that's why
Report Abuse
RandyMD is not online. RandyMD
Joined: 30 Mar 2011
Total Posts: 699
23 Dec 2014 08:33 AM
I think you could've put more lyrical precision in your verses, but overall great song :))
Report Abuse
themanfighted is not online. themanfighted
Joined: 28 May 2013
Total Posts: 22
23 Dec 2014 10:26 AM
this is cute
Report Abuse
llPreston9911ll is not online. llPreston9911ll
Joined: 28 Mar 2014
Total Posts: 2294
23 Dec 2014 10:39 AM
this is cute [2]
Report Abuse
Indiella is not online. Indiella
Joined: 15 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 2603
23 Dec 2014 10:59 AM
> who calls a guy from the middle east a "t"

T[err]orist.

> The chorus and the bridge was good, but i felt you could of delivered the verses better.

I agree, I was rushing to finish the last 3 songs for my album so I can release it on my birthday. Plus, I never do songs to real beats and I wanted to try something new, so I'd have to get used to the concept of using type beats. Thank you for your opinion. :)

> Hold up she's d@ting Aetion?

No..This isn't about Aetion it's about someone else. :(( Plus, it's in the g/f's point of view, not mine.

Report Abuse
themanfighted is not online. themanfighted
Joined: 28 May 2013
Total Posts: 22
23 Dec 2014 11:05 AM
"This some J Cole [s], he got a crooked smile
Finally happy, he don't wanna ruin it now"

this is so much fire it didn't even rhyme

going on my goatest rorap bars
Report Abuse
Indiella is not online. Indiella
Joined: 15 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 2603
23 Dec 2014 11:09 AM
It was a slant rhyme, lol.
Report Abuse
Wobull is not online. Wobull
Joined: 07 Apr 2014
Total Posts: 8168
23 Dec 2014 11:10 AM
some blacks pronounce smile is smowle
Report Abuse
themanfighted is not online. themanfighted
Joined: 28 May 2013
Total Posts: 22
23 Dec 2014 11:12 AM
i forgot coons talk like theres peanut butter stuffed in their mouth
Report Abuse
Indiella is not online. Indiella
Joined: 15 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 2603
23 Dec 2014 11:15 AM
I'm not black so um...no?
Report Abuse
themanfighted is not online. themanfighted
Joined: 28 May 2013
Total Posts: 22
23 Dec 2014 11:19 AM
so you talk like you got a speech problem ok
Report Abuse
SkyscratchZX is not online. SkyscratchZX
Joined: 18 Dec 2010
Total Posts: 12641
23 Dec 2014 11:20 AM
"I'm not black so um...no?"

you look really black to me
Report Abuse
Previous Thread :: Next Thread 
Page 1 of 1
 
 
ROBLOX Forum » Pop-Culture (Music/Books/Movies/TV)
   
 
   
  • About Us
  • Jobs
  • Blog
  • Parents
  • Help
  • Terms
  • Privacy

©2017 Roblox Corporation. Roblox, the Roblox logo, Robux, Bloxy, and Powering Imagination are among our registered and unregistered trademarks in the U.S. and other countries.



Progress
Starting Roblox...
Connecting to Players...
R R

Roblox is now loading. Get ready to play!

R R

You're moments away from getting into the game!

Click here for help

Check Remember my choice and click Launch Application in the dialog box above to join games faster in the future!

Gameplay sponsored by:
Loading 0% - Starting game...
Get more with Builders Club! Join Builders Club
Choose Your Avatar
I have an account
generic image