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| 22 Dec 2014 02:03 PM |
First I'd like to apologize for being a day late before we start the story. Anyway here is the next chapter.
Before tinfoiledman joined the FEAR army he was a seven year old. Now he is eight. Tinfoiledman had such a horrible life before one random person named 4bros walked up to him and said "OMG ur tinfoil!" In fact his life on siruis 7 could have been considered torture. He decided to speak in third person and make a book about his life.
Chapter 1. "The removal"
Tinfoiledman like most siruisians who were fourths were given a machine to enhance brain power. Tinfoiledman wasn't like most siruisians. When he three he was selected for the army for being a fourth family member. He didn't know this of course until he was five. Tinfoiledman knew he was smart when he got permission written from the government to be a fourth.
Today was like any other day, his two brothers got ready to play there favorite game VAK STRIKES BACK IV while his sister plans to get on the nets to talk to most people about possible revolution of the four odd planets and the three evens. He just sat on the doorstep till his bus picks him up to go to his school. Tinfoiledman wanted to talk to Peter and Jacob but was afraid he would be attacked and his sister Megan would try and save him like last time.
As he got on the bus he decided to sit in the middle where no one sat so no one would pick on him. But instead Matt got up to go to the middle and pick on him. "Hey tinny hey tinny you going to get a A today like during your whole life?" "Government must love you so much to look behind all that ugly," he continues till the rest of the trip but tinfoiledman of course ignored him like he always has. Tinfoiledman went to class.
Class lasted 8 hours like everyday and of course all the children listen and remembered with the help of there machine stuck to the neck. Today was different though. "Tinfoiledman please head to the nurse's building thank you." Tinfoiledman knew what this ment of course and most of his class was shocked. He was going to lose the machine. He thought "this isn't a great place to be."
He headed to the nurse. "Tinfoiledman we will be removing the machine. We apologize for this but the government has failed you." "Your such a smart kid but I don't know what happened." About ten minutes to twelve minutes later tinfoiledman didn't know how long it took. Tinfoiledman somehow knew Matt and his gang would be outside.
"What are you going to do Tinny tinny?" Matt was mocking him for the fun of it. Well tinfoiledman realized what was happening so he reacted. He wanted to end this fight quickly so he tackles Matt. Matt and the gang didn't think he would attack. Matt landed hard on the dirt. As Matt tried to get up tinfoiledman grabbed a stick and started hitting him with it repeatly. Matt didn't come up but tinfoiledman started kicking him. "You wanna fight me? This will happen again and again till you stop just all of you next time."
Chapter 2. "Combat school"
"Why did you beat up that boy?" The policeman kept repeating himself. "I did it to win the fight" "But you won obviously and kept fighting." "No, I won the fight permanently they would have attacked me again if I did not do that." The policeman kept going on explaining what happened to his parents.
Leave me alone is all tinfoiledman could think about. He didn't want Matt and his friends to hurt him and he didn't mean to send him to the hospital. He spent the next week being without the monitor. He felt alone without it. The cold metal when he was showering and the way he could lay on it while sleeping.
"Tinfoiledman is going to combat school" the principal of combat school himself was at his house talking to his parents. This was rare since he usually stays up there. "Dad, Mom, what is happening?" Instead of answering he just got ignored. He decided go back to bed.
"You are not allowed to eat for the next 24 hours pack everything your not afraid to lose and get ready to spend 1 year learning physics and getting strength." Everyone were sent this message if they were going to battle school. Of course it was optional. Tinfoiledman didn't need to pack anything for combat school.
He got aboard with many other kids a total of 30 all of them laughing or talking to friends. "Quiet!" "Get your seatbelt on and get ready for a ride, it should last 20 seconds!" A lot of the kids kept talking after they did as told. Tinfoiledman was afraid that this was going to be like the old launches with many explosions and errors, but he kept calm reminding himself that was 300 years ago.
Chapter 3. "Meeting the commander"
Quickly after Tinfoiledman got aboard satellite 5 AKA combat school commander of FEAR was going to come aboard which should take one month since the teleporter was not functioning for a 100 year trip from his star system to siruis. But before that tinfoiledman learned physics in space and went into the "Zero room" where gravity didn't get manipulated by machines which was a big square room with a goal. Capture the flag and come back.
"Tinfoiledman come to Yellow's room you have been recruited by them." That was the last thing the trainer told them all. He has been here for a week and now he was being last. Now tinfoiledman was a smart person so he thought there was a reason why he spent a extra day with the next trainees.
"Our strategy is simple." "We make sure we are sideways of our opponents always and we keep three teams." "The trainees newest will go last and the oldest first." Tinfoiledman was getting bored of his leader Frylop. He spents the hour listening of course to make sure to fit in.
First battle today. -Violet said the note. There was 20 teams and only one room meaning it usually takes a while before the first fight. Sometimes there is two teams against two sometimes one against one against one. Normally though one against one.
"Tinfoiledman as our newest you would be going to last wait 30 seconds until you go next" as Frylop kept going on about there strategy he bit his tongue when he saw that Violet started to get out. "Make sure to use cover when ever your opponent removes your leg with his freezer." Tinfoiledman waited.
As the battle raged on it took nearly 8 minutes before each team was down to 5. Violet grouped up and Yellow still was getting ready to remove troops. Tinfoiledman for sure had 1 minute. As he got ready to go a opponent came from behind and froze half of his teammates before he could freeze her. It was his turn to go now.
Chapter 4. "Getting noticed."
Now of course tinfoiledman was a noob of his team didn't mean he couldn't aim well. Back at home he played laser tag at the local Diamond Lazertag almost every month. The freezers were really similar to the laser guns just a better scope. He had to adjust before he could start target the guns. He learned as he fought.
"The noob did going to near failure to a tie for our team" said the first group of yellow. "He proven himself worthy to be on the strongest team but not now" said the second group."He is to risky to play as a sniper and to easy to play as a target" said the third group. He was getting recognized. He knew hate was coming.
"Tinfoiledman you will be in group one until group three has a free position" said Frylop. He was getting ready for class till Ben of group one was telling him about his new position. "You will have to listen to me only once I am out Frylop will put you on his group." "You will always go left distracting for our top soldiers in group two who will snipe the people targeting you once I saw go." Tinfoiledman listen till he was about late for class.
A week passed till there next battle they got two notes. Battle today -Dark Blue and Target DB for us -Green "Alright we got our practice in you should try to keep up with your leaders and if your leader falls send one of you to me" said Frylop. "Leaders if we have another tie I will look for replacements to trade your position." "Get ready!" The doors opened and the flags were ready.
Tinfoiledman followed till DB started attacking they all took cover and got their orders. "Tinfoiledman two ain't ready but they will be in about a minute, go ahead and start distracting for us we got Jacob and Morgan ready to snipe for you the rest but me will go ahead and distract with you remember to fire repeatly at our enemy and don't hold the trigger." Tinfoiledman of course obeyed and didn't get frozen in the progress he disabled two and damaged three while doing so with the help of their snipers.
They won the match but green decided to betray first when the teams got lower then 15. Each team starts with twenty so when they did it was a bit of a problem. They got defeated quickly by group two and DB. Tinfoiledman was still being impressive for their team and making some friends. "Tinfoiledman, the principal would like to see you as 7:00 AM tomorrow" was the last thing he heard from the instructors.
Chapter 5 "Meeting the principal"
"Hello Tinfoiledman I understand you've been here for." He paused. "Two weeks now is it?" "Anyway I would like to ask you a question. Do you realize you made your team raise by two ranks on average member since you got here?" The principle went on for a while about school and training. Tinfoiledman missed practice and class had to do the work anyway before bed.
"Tinfoiledman you missed practice can you come with me to fill you up on free time" his leader said. "Yes I will come." "Thank you I understand I can't take your free time away from you." "Thanks for not trying to force me to train."
"Tinfoiledman your gun takes one fifth of a second to recharge but that time can be used to avoid the enemies shots, you should fire in that time" Ben his leader was teaching tinfoiledman the importance of movement and time in a battle. "I want to impress Frylop in battle next time seven days from now by not being disabled or lose our limbs by using the time we got." "Morgan you seemed to be better in close range then long range would you like to replace Sam?" "Sure."
Tinfoiledman learnt and got ready for his next battle. Two more weeks till Sonic (aka Sonic the hedgehog for his successful attacks on anti-assassination) has a teleporter to come. "Tinfoiledman stop daydreaming we got two more minutes till purple attacks" said Ben. "Purple has a strong offence but a low defence they may have changed their strategy though" Frylop said.
"One you will go around to the left to get them from behind you will attack sideways." "Two you will attack the offense but if they get to strong three will come in and help you." "Three you will be sniping their snipers and once they are defeated move on to help group two." "Once this is all done you will attack their defense" Frylop was ready and then the doors opened. |
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LetsBet
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| 22 Dec 2014 02:08 PM |
| Nice! Never heard of a gun that reloads that fast. I wish ROBLOX guns could reload that fast :P |
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| 22 Dec 2014 02:18 PM |
| Siruis Seven (based on tinfoiledman's sayings) is basically the future of Earth. It's extremely advanced with the best engineers in the galaxy. Your basically screwed if you try to fight a army of siruisian 7s. "For siruis 7!" -Tinfoiledman |
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| 22 Dec 2014 02:44 PM |
| That quote has been noted into my book of memories :D |
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