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| 19 Dec 2014 05:02 PM |
One of my first ever OFFICIAL disses. I did diss Lucid before, but I'm back again. Don't take this to deep, The Digitals.
[INTRO]
[F] these [B]'s feelings, play no games with these [N]'s, bout time I pull out the AK, pull that Mother [F]'n trigga!
[VERSE] Fake [N]'s, claiming they get money, you [F]'d with M4, but your raps are funny, stole your girl from you [N]'s, shes my honey, [F] your feelings, rapping is my hobby, your raps are awful, your all snobby, kill all of you [B]'s, I got racks of your body's, now stand back, watch, go cry to your mommies.
Ya'll know I make money, its a fact, took your [B], she ain't coming back, should of shut the [F] up, now I'm pulling up the MAC, ya'll know you some [S], everything you do is whack, you messed with M4, you know you can't talk smack, now your falling down, gave these [N]'s an asthma attack.
Ice Tea, my bars are so cold, I get more than money, [S] greater than gold, you know you can't face me, I'm uncontrolled, when I hear words come out of your mouth, put that [S] a hold, move back, [B], you just got told.
Try to rhyme back, don't even bother, for the best I know, who knows if I'm your father? these [N]'s know whats coming, ya'll know I slaughter, don't stand down, never gonna lose my honor, should of stepped down, accepted the offer, now I'll teach you fools how to do it proper, your all horrible, I'm rapping against toddlers, now backup, [B], learn from someone who makes more than a dollar.
Anyways, thanks for listening. Also, heads up, I got inspired by mainly two people: Lor Chris (good friend of mine irl), and Wobull (don't know his rap name). Anyways, leave advice and rates for this. Thanks!
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| 19 Dec 2014 05:03 PM |
wow official diss
disses got 2 be official now |
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| 19 Dec 2014 05:06 PM |
@Lonely
ya man, I got to copyright and trademark and ya know
(What I really ment is my first diss was just a first thing for me, and this was actually a real diss that I made.) |
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Wobull
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| 19 Dec 2014 05:23 PM |
"Anyways, thanks for listening."
note: you did not provide any beat, so, what did we listen to?
second, this is better than the diss the digitals made, but, still not too good. try mentioning some facts and get to the weak spot when you're dissing, don't just name call. |
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| 19 Dec 2014 05:38 PM |
Mainly cause it was better than the Digitals xD
Rekton |
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| 19 Dec 2014 06:12 PM |
| We haven't released our diss, be ready for your time to be pressured! |
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| 19 Dec 2014 06:14 PM |
"be ready for your time to be pressured!" wat? |
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Wobull
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| 19 Dec 2014 06:15 PM |
| lol clowns sending threats |
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| 19 Dec 2014 06:28 PM |
| I'm not releasing the diss today, I need hella naps |
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| 19 Dec 2014 06:58 PM |
| Awwwww the itty bitty baby jack needs sleepy time |
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| 19 Dec 2014 08:56 PM |
| Be honest, you don't stand a chance against me. I can take the digitals all by myself. But, it would be nice to have a little rap crew to take care of these fools... I still won tho, and thanks for the support guys. |
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| 19 Dec 2014 08:59 PM |
| CREATIVE RAP NAME THERE MAN, NEVER SEEN ANYTHING LIKE IT |
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| 19 Dec 2014 09:01 PM |
| Ik man, someone had Ice-T. I was gonna be Hot Tea, but since its winter, I thought I should be Ice Tea for now. Don't worry, later I'm gonna change to Hot Tea. |
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| 19 Dec 2014 09:02 PM |
"someone had Ice-T"
i love how this is worded as if Ice-T wasn't a big deal or anything |
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| 19 Dec 2014 09:04 PM |
stahp the pressure man ok, but Ice-T was one of the legends of rap. I need to get listening to him though.
Anyways, can I get advice and rates? |
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| 19 Dec 2014 09:25 PM |
9.5/10. So close. You used a couple words I had to look up in a dictionary. Work on your metaphors doe- Metrix |
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| 19 Dec 2014 09:33 PM |
| Don't even know of the digitals. |
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| 19 Dec 2014 09:35 PM |
| The Digitals are a rap crew made up of rappers Kez , spaz (LOL), rez , nez and such |
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| 20 Dec 2014 06:02 AM |
| Your only good cause your rap name is pretty much a rap legends rap name. |
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| 20 Dec 2014 06:02 AM |
@Sonic
Lets throw em in the damn van ngga |
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| 20 Dec 2014 07:44 AM |
| Anyways, thanks for all the support I'm getting. I'm just waiting for the digitals diss, and yeah. |
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| 20 Dec 2014 07:47 AM |
| Ayy man. Can't we make the gang up before they diss you back so we can show the digitals how we are more pro then their movement? |
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| 20 Dec 2014 08:17 AM |
| @Above Sure!! We'll diss you ! |
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