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| 15 Dec 2014 08:48 PM |
From the POV of SER's "Phone Guy." Hello! Welcome to Sparky's Entertainment Restaurant. Uh, where children of all ages come together for fun and imagination. SER is not responsible for any death or dismemberment. Before you start on your new summer job, I uh, gather up some research for the animatronics' so you can understand. First is Sparky The Hound Dog. Named after the creators dog, Sparky. He's adored by most of the little kids, for being "cute, and cuddly." He's been activated and here ever since 1989. He's lively, probably like little kids like him. He has a tannish suit with a blue collar. He's the shortest animatronic, 6'1 to be exact. But he can be glitchy. Ummm, Like the others here, Sparky has some, uh human speaking abilities? As we think. But nothing to worry about. Next is Foxlin the Fox. (Inspired by my RP friend, ChristianRivallie.) If you've ever heard about that forgotten restaurant Freddy Fazbear Pizza or something like that. In 1989, SER got in a lawsuit with FazBear Entertainment. Anyway, they got in a lawsuit with them since of, uh "copying" Foxy. But I guess they did have a point. So they changed Foxlin more green. Kids joke around that Fox&Foxlin were "Married." Ah, those little kids. With the Five year old humor, kind of cute actually. I work dayshift after all. But um, yeah. Foxlin is 6'5. And was made very quiet and shy... Uh. I don't know why they'd do that. Seems weird huh? That quietness is in a spooky way, she creeps me out actually. But uh. Moving on right? Bo The Goat. Ah, this one was my favorite, uh even though he's mysterious. Though, nothing to worry about to you. Even my daughter had a little six year old crush on him. Ah. That was before the 'incident' happened. Um.. B-B-ut.. Mov-Moving on right? Ahem. Don't want to bore you. He's 7'1. A tall one. Bo's a waiter and cook. They must've made him to cook I guess. But Bo could be more dangerous then you'd think. His mouth stretches to something you'd never dream of. Oh wait, wasn't supposed to tell you that. Eh, since we don't want you stressed. That'd be horrible. Nothing to worry about. Every-Everything fine right? This is out of what I do being something else throughout the day, I'm a bit jumpy. Glitchy you could say. You should be fine with me- I mean him. Right? Bobby The RockBear This one is sort of unkown. Just only his height, which is 6'7. He never came out to parties, so we scrapped him for parts. Though on nightguard saw it. IT was black, with a wide blood stained, grin that stretched to his ears. After he told us that, the next night. He went missing.... He just disappeared. His family's blaming us. But we had no idea what happened to him. But, if you see it maybe, try avoiding eye contact. Ok? Um, good luck! I'll see you later to- tomorrow. Bye! "What was with that Phone person?" You question yourself. "All glitchy, that information was kinda useless." You questioned yourself a bit more until you realized you been doing so, for about five minuets at that time. You got back to work by flipping through the cameras. With an eerie feeling that someone or something was watching you. |
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ATFS
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| 15 Dec 2014 08:50 PM |
| Also, this is from the mind of Hotw223, this is just is alt account. Find this interesting? Probably not. But say if you want this to countiue! (Even though it still will no matter what.) Just tell me what you think about it! See ya on the flip side! (Of a Sparky Suit) |
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brettxl05
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| 15 Dec 2014 08:55 PM |
Ready4Sparky
gimme the gabe newell |
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timpookie
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| 15 Dec 2014 08:56 PM |
Hey, have you heard of this new invention called the "paragraph"? It'd make this a helluva lot easier to read!
"Wouldn't the sentence 'I want to put a hyphen between the words Fish and And and And and Chips in my Fish-And-Chips sign' have been clearer if quotation marks had been placed before Fish, and between Fish and and, and and and And, and And and and, and and and And, and And and and, and and and Chips, as well as after Chips?" ~ Martin Gardner |
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brettxl05
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| 15 Dec 2014 08:57 PM |
don h8 on him m8
#Ready4Sparky
gimme the gabe newell |
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ATFS
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| 15 Dec 2014 08:58 PM |
| Eh, Thanks for the hint, I try my best :/ Have a good day! |
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ATFS
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| 15 Dec 2014 09:00 PM |
| Also with the Quotes thing, In the actual story I'll be adding quotes for the charcter(s) I didn't put it here since it's more like an introduction. |
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brettxl05
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| 15 Dec 2014 09:01 PM |
*calls scott* SCOTT, I HAVE A NEW JOB FOR YOU. Scott Cawthon: Whaa? What, its 3:20 pm in the morning. I DONT CARE SCOTT, MAKE 5 NIGHTS AT SPARKY`S NOW. Scott Cawthon: Why should I? BECAUSE I GOT 20,0000 DOLLARS FOR YOU. *Scott Has Dollar Signs In His Eyes* Scott Cawthon: ITS A DEAL!!!
#Ready4Sparky
gimme the gabe newell |
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MrVincent
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| 15 Dec 2014 09:04 PM |
wtf.
you don't put a period after your title. |
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ATFS
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| 15 Dec 2014 09:36 PM |
It's called typos, though I'm sorry.
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| 15 Dec 2014 09:59 PM |
(Excusing typos)
"Sparky's Entertainment Restaurant"?
Is this an uninspired, uneducated blatant ripoff, or is there a popular secondhand version of FNaF that I should know about?
Either way, I feel inclined to be a part of this. |
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| 15 Dec 2014 10:03 PM |
...I really should have read the entire post before posting.
::grumble grumble::
Oh well, I still feel inclined to be a part of this. |
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ATFS
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| 16 Dec 2014 02:46 PM |
| I'll do my best to make it better as I go. This is the first time I've done something like this. |
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| 16 Dec 2014 02:53 PM |
Yes, because this isn't a blatant rip-off of an already shtty game or anything
"Not when I kick into maximum over-hype!" |
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| 16 Dec 2014 02:55 PM |
| ^ Coming from the guy who literally just ripped off MY post. |
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| 16 Dec 2014 02:55 PM |
Didn't see your post Sorry Hue
"Not when I kick into maximum over-hype!" |
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brigond
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| 16 Dec 2014 04:12 PM |
I just think it is too original.
I like the somewhat different concept and all.
Some errors writting wise.
I give it a 7.5/10
Nice job. |
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Pruz
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| 16 Dec 2014 06:05 PM |
| Ooh. Hold on let me read it. |
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Pruz
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| 16 Dec 2014 06:10 PM |
I might make my own.
Since I have around 24 fan characters. I drew 3. Might as well. |
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brettxl05
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| 16 Dec 2014 07:26 PM |
I have a character suggestion, me aswell being a fnaf fan. The character is called "Rabid The Rapid Pirate" He`s green. Wearing a pirate hat. Thats all.
gimme the gabenewell |
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Pruz
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| 16 Dec 2014 08:58 PM |
| I don't even know the species. |
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brettxl05
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| 16 Dec 2014 09:00 PM |
scratch that
gimme the gabe newell |
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| 17 Dec 2014 05:51 AM |
Eh..I don't know what you should fix, I mean everything's looking awesome so far.The animatronics' name are good,kind of copied.. I mean: 3.Bo The Goat (I know someone with that name,probably he's your friend too?) 2.Sparky The Hound Dog (Copied from a rumor from FNaF that is proven false) 1.Foxlin The Fox (Doe you said that it's copied from a friend,it's just really from Foxy,FNaF 1/2) 3 - Not really important, after all.. 2 - Eh, what can I say?It is copied, but..Yeeah. 3 - Any other ideas? Question: Is this going to be a RP game or just a story? |
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| 17 Dec 2014 05:58 AM |
Also, I'll give it 9 out of 10. Why?Because: -You copied some of the characters,around 3 or 4. -Sparky's Entratainment Restaurant?Doesn't that make you think of..Uh,I don't know..Five Night's At Freddy's? Other than that,everythin's good. |
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