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lien587
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| 08 Nov 2014 11:04 AM |
(Eh, I've edited it on some other sites, even though I can't have the cool picture I normally have with it on here.)
-ENTRY 869:_048_ CHF. BARBARA GORDON-
"The elusive 'Batman' is missing in Gotham's moment of need.
The Jokerz Gang has gained control of the streets with legions of robotic reincarnations of the villain Doctor Freeze. The Justice League has tried to help, but Gotham is the least of their worries. Central City, Metropolis, and everywhere on the East Coast is being targeted. Heroes from everywhere are attempting to help, but most are dead, as well as the Force. Earth's greatest heroes have been defeated, including Superman, Static Shock, Warhawk, and Micron, in this city alone.
Batman, if you're out there, I know that you can hear this. Gotham needs a hero. Gotham needs you." ~~~ -ENTRY 871:_048_ CHF. BARBARA GORDON-
"No heroes have been spared. Bodies are piling up. With Batman still missing, the city's only hope is the Question. She's been fortifying my office, but I don't know why. Please, Batman, we need you." ~~~ -ENTRY 875:_048_CHF. BARBARA GORDON-
"Batman has been confirmed to be dead. Gotham is the last city to be conquered. Blüdhaven, Fawcett City, and Central city were taken yesterday with the deaths of Green Arrow, Captain Marvel, and the Flash. Renee told me that this drive would be our last hope. They're coming. I can hear it. The Jokerz are behind the door. This is Chief Barbara Gordon, formerly known as Batgirl. Goodbye." ~~~ INTRODUCTION
The Question checks over his files a few thousand times more. He sighs, and says, "They're no Justice League, but they'll have to do. Manhunters, Go retrieve these people."
The Manhunters Get battle ready. "No, that won't be necessary." They nod, and drop their weapons. They fly off in all different directions, repeating their chant,
"NO MAN ESCAPES THE MANHUNTERS." ~~~ PLOT
In the year 2101, nearly seventy years after the Justice League was disbanded (and the Jokerz took over the area, get with the program), a digital clone of The Question (the male one) is reassembling it. And you are a vigilante/hero that the Question wants to be in the JLA. Gotham is extremely cold, and covered in ice, and the place is ruled by gangs in an all out war for domination. You will be infiltrating these gangs, fighting regular villains, and exploring iconic places in the DC universe. ~~~ CHARACTER SHEET:
ALIAS: APPEARANCE: POWER SOURCE: (Like Magic, Natural Mutation, Radioactive waste, Ect. [If applicable]) POWERS/ABILITIES: BIO: MORALITY: (DnD Alignments)
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lien587
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| 09 Dec 2014 09:39 PM |
Wanna join?
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Coriandr
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| 09 Dec 2014 09:58 PM |
Wow... This is... Wow.
So joining. Marked.
Though, I might do more than is put in the CS... And you should probably state some rules, besides the obvious.
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| 09 Dec 2014 10:01 PM |
Name: Alias: Age: Gender: Power Origin: Abilities: Biography: Morality: Occupation(Before Destruction): Personality(Optional):
^ Good CS to use. Still basic. Might want to add, still.
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| 09 Dec 2014 10:05 PM |
HOW IN THE BLOODY HELL DOES THIS WORK I MAKE AN HOUR LONG RP= NEXT TO NONE JOINERS BUT NO HALF WORKED RPS= 10 BILLION JOINERS/MARKERS TELL ME WHAT WITCHCRAFT IS USED |
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lien587
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| 10 Dec 2014 10:36 AM |
Hate to mess with you, rockmax, but I pent hours editing an idea. Often times, basic ideas are the best! Think about it, some of the best plots can be summed up in one sentance, or a few words. too convuluted, and you get... John Connor.
But one of the great things about fan-rps is that it's a familiar world, something people don't need much explanation in. Also, I have much more plot written, to be posted when the story begins.
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Coriandr
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| 10 Dec 2014 02:09 PM |
Oh, yeah, and P.S., Green Arrow died in 2011. At least, Oliver Queen-Green Arrow, and in the mainstream DC Universe. Though, you could be talking about his son, Conner Hawke. I doubt it though. o3o
Oh, and so did Barry Allen-The Flash. I forget how he died... Either way, Wally West took up the mantle.
And as for the others... Did they live until like, a hundred-and-some-odd, or what? Really shouldn't have made it 2101. That's a bit long...
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Name Coriander Ferre Park
Aliases Cory(Other spelling variations: Cori, Corey) Speed Demon The Flash The Flash 2.0 Kid Flash The Blur The Blink And other common aliases and misconceptions made by the public.
Current Alias Impulse
Age 23-24(Depending on the date) - Birth Date: June 8th, 2077 The date will change if you believe 2101 isn't viable or logical.
Gender Male
Power Origin Failed experimenting of the "Flash" serum.
Abilities Constant High-Speed Molecule Vibration This means that he is constantly moving, thinking, and comprehending faster than usual. He can run up to mach 20(15,360 MPH - 24,600 km/h - 6830 m/s). See "Weaknesses" for more detail on speed.
Weaknesses Constant High-Speed Molecule Vibration Due to this constant vibration, Coriander comprehends things at a very high speed, and most things around him seem slow. Unless he tries slowing down his molecules to the limit, everything would still seem almost three times slower than average human comprehension.
Molecule Heat & Deformation Due to his speed, if he tries going at a fast speed, usually anything above mach five or so, his molecules will heat up, and therefore he could die if going to fast from gaining a fever, and his body temperature going above the norm.
The same problem comes with his molecules. Sometimes, as he runs, molecules won't keep up and will break off from his body. The faster he goes, the larger chance of this, as well as the larger chance of death from such things. It could pull his head off if he isn't careful.
Family http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Allen_Family Add "Coriander Park" as Linda Park's son, given for adoption, and his father is unknown, and is biological parents only. His father was never married to his mother.
Biography Coriander Park was the biological son of Linda Park and an anonymous father. At birth, he was given up for adoption to the Keystone City Adoption Center(KCAC), and never taken for adoption by anyone.
He grew up as an average, adopted child. Though, he had a large interest in chemistry. As he grew, he kept up with the news on superheroes and their doings. Whether via news, Internet research, anything. He was specifically intrigued by the so-called, "meta-humans", more specifically, "The Flash", "Impulse", and "Kid Flash", though he found "The Flash" to be deceased. He wondered what it was like to go that fast, and by some of the nerds'-he-knew's understanding, as well as many Internet fanatics, it seemed as if their strength came from their speed.
Through the years, he did plenty of research trying to find out about his family. He eventually found them, after several months of research, and aggravating and head-ache inducing phone calls and messaging. He found his mother to be Linda Park, and went to visit them.
Eventually, he caught on to a suspicion of Wally West being one of the speedsters, through several ways. He started investigating, but, instead of finding out the easy way, he found several chemicals in his basement laboratory. He looked at them, and though about them... With his interest in chemistry, he knew what everything was, and what it did. He realized what they were, and how they worked.
"Genius.", was his first thought at the realization, though it still seemed a small chance. Though, he figured they would probably use an excuse such as, "That's insane!", or something of the sort to keep his identity secret. He didn't even know if his mother knew. So, he bought some of the various things he needed, or made them. Depending on whether he could actually buy them.
He then went to make the serum, but, it seemed as if nothing had happened. And, nothing did. He realized that he was missing one thing... An electrical current. He ordered some strong, electrical wires, and a large generator. He then remade the serum, and electrocuted it. He quickly injected it into his blood, but it shocked him from the inside, knocking him out.
Cory woke up to a seemingly normal day, besides a bump on his head and a broken vial over a fallen table, some of the serum over his body rather than in. He left the school lab, surprised that nobody had realized he was in past late hours, and found the world to seem to slow down. Cars had their lights on, people were in them, everything seemed normal... But nobody moved. Even a woman that was taking a late night run. She had been in mid-step, but just left her leg in the air. Then he realized; Something had gone horribly, horribly wrong.
He ran to the Wests' house to find his mother's husband, Wally West, and did. Wally sped up his comprehension level to see what was happening, and Coriander explained the whole thing. Wally was baffled. He knew that it had to be very rare for that to work, let alone with just an electrical current and not something as powerful as a lightning bolt. He barely knew what to do, but told him that normally he had to force himself to speed up, not down, and Coriander was troubled. He had no idea what was going to happen.
Wally took him to the Justice League, and they tested him and such to figure out the problem. They realized that he'd used too much of the chemical that sped his molecules up, and that he would permanently be in that state. Though they hesitated to reveal it to him, being he was still in his teenage years and his reaction could be catastrophic.
Eventually, they told him what happened, and trained him in super speed. How to control it, how to slow his molecules, and so forth. But he could never slow his molecules to the average speed. It seemed as if he were going double their speed, if not more, and it took him quite a bit of work to comprehend anything anyone said, but, he eventually got used to it.
He became a trainee under the Justice League, having had the Teen Titans and the Team(Young Justice) disbanded by then, and eventually even got out on the field with them. He then went off to freelance in Keystone City with Wally West, keeping in touch with the Justice League now and again.
He eventually moved in with his mother and Wally West, Wally growing on him and becoming like a father. At least, in his mind. He had no idea what Wally thought of him, but it seemed good. He was fed, clothed, and sheltered under the Wests. Eventually Wally West died, and Bart Allen, an apparent relative that wasn't even born yet, took up his mantle.
Eventually, a large gang that goes by, "The Jokerz" infiltrated and terrorized cities. It seemed as if they had no heart or soul. They burned and froze cities to the ground, not giving a single thought of any life. He fled the Wests' house after their death, and found a safe house in Gotham with Barbara Gordon, the Question, and the Manhunters. He then went to become a Manhunter himself.
And now, is present day.
Morality Good
Occupation Manhunters None before destruction.
Base of Operations Keystone City, the Wests' home.
Inventory He took the full-body suit of Impulse after he became Kid Flash.
Other Sorry if mach 20 seems a bit high. I'll bring it down, but, as the weaknesses go, mach 20 is just a maximum *if* he didn't die from the mass heat build up and his limbs ripping off.
Also, the history is a bit long, I know... I kind of went full-fledged nerd there. :3
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Coriandr
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| 10 Dec 2014 03:25 PM |
Now, wait for this to die...
Eh, whatever. I'll just make a new roleplay about the future DC Universe and the new heroes... That could be him. With a bit of a different biography and family tree. |
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| 10 Dec 2014 03:28 PM |
Well then, I'll be crying. By the way, I had a roleplay called Heroes and Gallantry, but no, everyone bails just when it was getting to the good part. And I worked for DAYS researching firearms and attachments. |
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| 10 Dec 2014 03:35 PM |
| I'll probably join. Got a couple of nifty powers up my sleeve. |
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| 10 Dec 2014 03:36 PM |
I'll post my true alligence here. LONG LIVE MARVEL |
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Coriandr
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| 10 Dec 2014 03:49 PM |
"Well then, I'll be crying. By the way, I had a roleplay called Heroes and Gallantry, but no, everyone bails just when it was getting to the good part. And I worked for DAYS researching firearms and attachments."
I didn't bail. That was a really good roleplay... Bunch of fr00bz just left out of nowhere.
"I'll post my true alligence here."
To DC, the great and awesome, best comic strips EVAR???
"LONG LIVE MARVEL"
pft marvelscrub
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| 10 Dec 2014 05:01 PM |
Excuse me, I have some comments. by Manhunters, I mean the robot Manhunters, made by the Guardians of Oa, just re-purposed. Also, Wally West would be dead already by that time, the prologue takes place in the year 2069, and no reference to the Speed Force?
So, like, is he a chemical creation instead of a speed force one? Also, maybe fix your bio for these, and the slowed perception makes sense, but he could not function at all without some sort of heightened perception; as soon as he moved practically anywhere, he'd slam into things or trip, causing death, even for someone who can experience thousands of G's of Acceleration.
So, he can probably access the speed force, just that his powers are limited; friction and human thought barriers still affect him, at least minutely. The chemicals didn't give Barry Allen his powers, at least in some continuities, just the lightning and the Speed Force. And, you know what, I'm the Game Master, I don't care if it conflicts the comics.
One GIANT note: this takes place within the DC Animated Universe. (Batman Beyond, Batman the Animated Series, Superman the Animated Series, Justice League, so on.)
PS, please, slow down your posting, and your signature is actually against forum rules; one line maximum.
And, please, just keep the items on the same line, it's hard to read that CS.
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| 10 Dec 2014 05:07 PM |
| (Hi fives wifi in cartoonish matter) |
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Coriandr
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| 10 Dec 2014 05:17 PM |
"xcuse me, I have some comments. by Manhunters, I mean the robot Manhunters, made by the Guardians of Oa, just re-purposed."
Duhh... Never learned of those. Well, I've heard of them. I just never really looked into it. So, sorry about that. But, if so... I don't think this roleplay will interest me.
"Also, Wally West would be dead already by that time, the prologue takes place in the year 2069, and no reference to the Speed Force?"
I realize Wally West would be dead, but it seems as if you've strayed from the mainstream universe. If not, who was the Flash, then? Bart Allen II(Impulse/Kid Flash II) never took up the mantle. At least, never in the mainstream universe.
"So, like, is he a chemical creation instead of a speed force one?"
I'm pretty sure the Speed Force came from the lightning that struck.
"Also, maybe fix your bio for these, and the slowed perception makes sense, but he could not function at all without some sort of heightened perception; as soon as he moved practically anywhere, he'd slam into things or trip, causing death, even for someone who can experience thousands of G's of Acceleration."
I thought about that, but, with the enhanced perception, he could just avoid anything that would make him trip, and avoid tripping, as if he were moving at a normal speed.
"So, he can probably access the speed force, just that his powers are limited; friction and human thought barriers still affect him, at least minutely."
Uhh... No. Where'd you get that idea?
"The chemicals didn't give Barry Allen his powers, at least in some continuities,"
But it did in the mainstream universe. At least, it was a part.
"just the lightning and the Speed Force."
No it didn't. Not in mainstream. They affected it, but the chemicals were a part of it. A big part, if my information serves me. My information being the wiki, made by bigger nerds than all of us combined.
"And, you know what, I'm the Game Master, I don't care if it conflicts the comics."
I hate people like you. If you don't want to stick to it, don't put it in a universe of that sort. Otherwise, follow the story. Specifically mainstream or otherwise specify.
"One GIANT note: this takes place within the DC Animated Universe. (Batman Beyond, Batman the Animated Series, Superman the Animated Series, Justice League, so on.)"
Bah! I've never watched those. I've tried, but I can't seem to find it *anywhere*. Even on DVD.
"PS, please, slow down your posting, and your signature is actually against forum rules; one line maximum."
That rule is crap, and rarely does anybody follow it. I've said this to somebody before, and I'll say it again; Get me a warning and/or ban, then I'll make it one-line.
"And, please, just keep the items on the same line, it's hard to read that CS."
Not really. I make my CS's like that so that they're easier to read. Otherwise, it's all jumbled up like a word wall, and it's annoying as heck to read. At least, by most standards. Especially with the bio, I would get flamed so much for doing things that long without paragraphs.
"Ew DC"
WiFi, WHY?!?!
DC is suh 'mazin' doh! DDD: umg ur nawt meh frned anemoar bohoo qq cricri ;'c
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| 10 Dec 2014 05:40 PM |
Well I hate to ruin your perfect, Stirling New 52 continuities, but the ideas expressed in this directly go against certain aspects. also, This is my own creation, I am allowed to stray from the source material. If you for some reason see less value because it doesn't follow one specific continuity, then just quit DC all together.
Currently, New 52 Batman has FOUR DIFFERENT UNIVERSES, so, if you're looking for something cohering to exactly what you want, just read some books and don't get antsy when a completely different, unattached work has different details.
So, adjust for it, or don't sign up in the first place.
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| 10 Dec 2014 05:46 PM |
"Well I hate to ruin your perfect, Stirling New 52 continuities,"
I don't follow just New 52. I follow the original comics.
"but the ideas expressed in this directly go against certain aspects."
Then you should state that it's your own DC Universe you've created, and that not all aspects are the same.
"also, This is my own creation, I am allowed to stray from the source material."
Again, you should state that if you are going to. Otherwise, *we* are all lead astray, and as such, I made a CS that you would decline due to that.
"Currently, New 52 Batman has FOUR DIFFERENT UNIVERSES,"
Again, not just going on the New 52.
"so, if you're looking for something cohering to exactly what you want, just read some books and don't get antsy when a completely different, unattached work has different details."
I read comic strips and wikipedias, again, made by much bigger nerds that include just one that knows more nerdy-stuff than all of us combined. Don't assume I just follow the New 52 stuff. I hate it when fr00bz like you assume that I'm part of society, and follow as such, acting as if I know everything. I act not of such. I act on what I know, and then accept it if I happen to be incorrect.
"So, adjust for it, or don't sign up in the first place."
Tell me what I need to adjust to, or don't make the RP in the first place.
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| 10 Dec 2014 05:58 PM |
I never directly said that you follow New 52, and the batman was just an example. I don't need to inform people that this work is unrelated to other works, and your wording suggests to me that you are merely using ideas you don't like as an excuse to prove that my ideas are bad and that this thread is bad. I was merely trying to give you advice, and you go off on a wild tangent about how this thread is terrible and that I am a liar.
If you would please just not take everything I say as an Ad Hominem, I assure you, what I am saying is clear.
But allow me to rephrase; it is pretty obvious that either your character is tapping into the speed force or some kind of magic is involved. No injections or chemical changes could cause a breaking of the laws of physics. Also, he could not be a Manhunter due to his non-psycho robot physiology, nor trained by the Justice League. However, a pretty long workaround could be established to allow him to be trained by Wally West, but the Question and Barbara Gordon were dead before 2077.
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| 10 Dec 2014 06:41 PM |
"I never directly said that you follow New 52,"
"Well I hate to ruin your perfect, Stirling New 52 continuities,"
w0t m9? That's pretty direct.
"I don't need to inform people that this work is unrelated to other works,"
If by "other works" you mean the mainstream DC Universe, yeah, you kinda do.
"and your wording suggests to me that you are merely using ideas you don't like as an excuse to prove that my ideas are bad and that this thread is bad."
I never said the thread was bad. In fact, I think it's pretty good. What I'm saying is; you need to specify if you aren't going by mainstream. Even in the Marvel-DC crossover RP, the creator specifically specified that both were mainstream Marvel and DC universes. Then nobody got confused.
"I was merely trying to give you advice,"
Advice? You mean advice about how this isn't based on the mainstream DC Universe? You mean the advice you should have given to everyone in the original post? That advice?
"and you go off on a wild tangent about how this thread is terrible and that I am a liar."
When did I ever say this thread was terrible? Heck, when did I ever say you were a liar? Well, now you're a liar. But that's just because you said that I called you a liar, when I never did.
"If you would please just not take everything I say as an Ad Hominem, I assure you, what I am saying is clear."
Again, I'm not taking everything as an attack. Or, as you say, an "Ad Hominem". I'm saying that you should have mentioned that this isn't mainstream DC Universe in the original post.
"But allow me to rephrase; it is pretty obvious that either your character is tapping into the speed force or some kind of magic is involved."
How so? The Flash, Kid Flash, Impulse, they all came from science. Not this so-called "magic". In fact, most of the Allen and West family of Flashes are all on science, and don't believe in magic or religion or anything of the sort.
And no, my character is tapping into science, by using chemical reactions along with electricity to make your, "Speed Force". Really, I'm pretty sure the Speed Force is just what they called their little serum-lightning thing.
"No injections or chemical changes could cause a breaking of the laws of physics."
This is DC. Everything breaks the laws of physics. The Flash himself was baffled until death about how he got his abilities.
"Also, he could not be a Manhunter due to his non-psycho robot physiology,"
Again, I didn't realize that you were going on that. I never even looked into the Manhunters, I just heard of them once or twice before.
"nor trained by the Justice League."
I didn't know that was a restriction, either. You should really state these types of things. Just like stating the fact that this isn't the mainstream DC Universe.
"However, a pretty long workaround could be established to allow him to be trained by Wally West, but the Question and Barbara Gordon were dead before 2077."
Then how are we in 2101? Has it been that long since we were all established as Manhunters? Because, that would make some history that would be hard to keep up with. Excuse the pun.
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| 11 Dec 2014 08:33 PM |
never said red arrow was dead
Name: Roy Harper alter ego: Red Arrow age: 20-30 powers: no powers, yet he is skilled with a bow and was trained by green arrow bio: yeah, yeah you know the story power so- wait no powers |
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| 11 Dec 2014 08:39 PM |
wait a minute hes dead of old age...OLD RED ARROW-no. |
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