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| 09 Dec 2014 11:02 PM |
Writing this http://pastebin.com/9sbvAHMN (PS Bonus to anyone who finds out why it isn't roblox appropriate, I have no idea)
Taro Says "オイラーズは、完全なたわごとです" |
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| 09 Dec 2014 11:04 PM |
Please guys
Taro Says "オイラーズは、完全なたわごとです" |
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| 09 Dec 2014 11:13 PM |
| That's not even a complete SHORT STORY |
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| 09 Dec 2014 11:25 PM |
that story is...you know know, i dont even feel like making a simile, nor a metaphor for that big fat juicy shaqueille oneal on steroids
crap that was a metaphor
ᗩᘉᓰᗰᗩ☂ᕮↁᗪᗩᘉᘉϒ〇 |
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| 09 Dec 2014 11:28 PM |
It's about a third of the way done I admit it is harsh in nature |
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BMLGUY
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| 09 Dec 2014 11:29 PM |
I found 1 error
"The Innkeeper glares at the Terry" should be "The Innkeeper glared at Terry"
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| 09 Dec 2014 11:32 PM |
| It's present tense in that case bml |
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BMLGUY
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| 09 Dec 2014 11:33 PM |
| Well it at least shouldn't be "The Terry" |
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| 09 Dec 2014 11:35 PM |
| Oh yeah I forgot to remove "The" |
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ebenton95
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| 09 Dec 2014 11:48 PM |
| I do see a couple of heII's thrown in at the end there so that would be a reason y. |
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RektItJon
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