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| 09 Dec 2014 02:37 PM |
http://www.wattpad.com/story/28147945-the-mountain
Short. Story. |
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| 09 Dec 2014 08:07 PM |
AYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
No comments? Really? Not good? Not bad? Not anything?! |
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| 09 Dec 2014 08:09 PM |
The name's Padonty. Don Padonty. I like many things. I like- This story. |
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| 09 Dec 2014 08:13 PM |
I'd suggest one of my photos on Deviantart. I have a nice one of a river.
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Pruz
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| 09 Dec 2014 08:13 PM |
| But it's a volcano on a snowy mountain. |
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| 09 Dec 2014 08:14 PM |
*a volcano IN a snow-covered mountain ... **a snow-covered volcano |
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| 09 Dec 2014 08:17 PM |
| Wuw. I find pleasure in books like these! Where a dead person narrates the whole thing! It's kinda nice...BUT YOU LEFT A CLIFFHANGER SO YOU MUST DIE. |
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| 09 Dec 2014 08:18 PM |
How is that a cliffhange-
Oh.
Well, if you didn;t figure it out ... Everyone died. The end. No, really. |
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| 09 Dec 2014 08:19 PM |
didn't *
shhhhhhhh I can type magnificently!11!1 |
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| 09 Dec 2014 08:19 PM |
"Cliffhanger" "Break's over Roach. Time to go." Catch my reference? Here, use this as long as you give credit to me.
http://therockinception.deviantart.com/art/The-Peaceful-Waterfall-494248597 |
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| 09 Dec 2014 08:21 PM |
IT IS ON THE TOP OF THE TALLEST MOUNTAIN THERE ARE NO WATERFALLS THERE |
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| 09 Dec 2014 08:22 PM |
But It's better than a hand at least :) |
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| 09 Dec 2014 08:22 PM |
| Can there be waterfalls in places that snow? |
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| 09 Dec 2014 08:24 PM |
| There can, but they would have to be frozen, and would have to have been un-frozen waterfalls at one point to have been frozen. Seeing as this is a mountain peak, where there is no liquid water just lying around.... Yeah no |
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| 09 Dec 2014 08:29 PM |
| There, I changed it. Satisfied? |
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| 09 Dec 2014 08:43 PM |
| Haha, I made a story like this, but it is still in my drafts. I shared it here once. |
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