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Fluffmiceter is not online. Fluffmiceter
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06 Dec 2014 09:56 AM
at making a good thumbnail. Any feedback plox?
https://twitter.com/725732985729857/status/541256685416103936
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Gaaraz is not online. Gaaraz
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06 Dec 2014 09:56 AM
nty
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slerps is not online. slerps
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06 Dec 2014 09:56 AM
ugly
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DonexLorshius is not online. DonexLorshius
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06 Dec 2014 09:57 AM
You need to make the thumbnail in a new room....
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Lightning0Splash is not online. Lightning0Splash
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06 Dec 2014 09:57 AM
I guess, but the "New Ambient Sound tracks" is kinda unnecessary.
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Fluffmiceter is not online. Fluffmiceter
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06 Dec 2014 10:01 AM
^ It changes the environment of the game. For example, I play 4000 Degrees Kelvin from Portal in Darkness mode to create a scary environment.
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Fluffmiceter is not online. Fluffmiceter
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06 Dec 2014 10:02 AM
any particular reasons why I should move to a different room? I think that the thumbnail should remain simple, instead of jamming every single detail of the game into the viewer.
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Coinfull is not online. Coinfull
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06 Dec 2014 10:03 AM
There needs to be more of a focus on the character you're portraying. The bottom segments stray my attention so I don't know what I'm truly looking for.

http://www.roblox.com/Overseers-Egg-V5-0-item?id=150654655
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Fluffmiceter is not online. Fluffmiceter
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06 Dec 2014 10:04 AM
@ coinfull:

A bigger spotlight? What would you change about the thumbnail?
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Fluffmiceter is not online. Fluffmiceter
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06 Dec 2014 10:05 AM
@coinfull:

I was kinda hoping for the bottom segment to be an aftertaste, something that you look at after seeing the main stuff.
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Coinfull is not online. Coinfull
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06 Dec 2014 10:08 AM
I'd get a little bit closer to the character (personally, I would, you can work with what you have though). From there I'd have the bottom images surrounding the primary image, such as that of a touched, circling formation (Almost like you're looking down a tube of the images to see your primary image). This is my opinion though, for you could want something entirellllly different. If you are wanting a darker view on the image, I'd take out the bottom images.

http://www.roblox.com/Overseers-Egg-V5-0-item?id=150654655
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Fluffmiceter is not online. Fluffmiceter
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06 Dec 2014 10:11 AM
I'll think about both suggestions. I doubt I will move the camera closer to the subject because it took quite a while to stage the NPC in the middle, and I forgot to save the props.
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ranaldo10 is not online. ranaldo10
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06 Dec 2014 10:11 AM
3/10 for trying



"Choughio up el weedo, before I blow your brains out over the patio."
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luke99884 is not online. luke99884
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06 Dec 2014 10:12 AM
Well you need too dress the noob but everything else but that i like.
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luke99884 is not online. luke99884
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06 Dec 2014 10:14 AM
but everything else i like
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Fluffmiceter is not online. Fluffmiceter
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06 Dec 2014 10:15 AM
I think I did a great job with the lighting, maybe not with other stuff.

Anyhow, do you think you would be interested in playing if you saw that thumbnail? I hid most details to make the thumbnail inconclusive and make viewers curious. Also, I doubt that people will complain about the thumbnail because they'll be biased by the quality of the actual game.
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crazyawsomejames is not online. crazyawsomejames
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06 Dec 2014 10:16 AM
i think you should just take out the picture and put the text above them with the other things on the top left hand corner

and then maybe change the font of the darkness text but other than that it's good
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crazyawsomejames is not online. crazyawsomejames
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06 Dec 2014 10:16 AM
pictures*

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luke99884 is not online. luke99884
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06 Dec 2014 10:18 AM
you should add a beast looking for him and hes runing with a torch
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Fluffmiceter is not online. Fluffmiceter
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06 Dec 2014 10:50 AM
^ That would be cool, but misleading. People would consider it as scamming because the Darkness mode doesn't include the beast. Unless you're making a pun off of the name.
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luke99884 is not online. luke99884
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06 Dec 2014 11:48 AM
Um im not making a pun
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