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| 01 Dec 2014 09:23 PM |
well I want to state my feelings outside of my mind but I fear discovery and getting shot down sorta like a B-17 flying over an area with a whole lot of flak coverage
...just like 7th grade |
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RotomWash
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:24 PM |
in this day and age, I don't think poem's fly too well..
It'd be best to straight up tell your crush that you like him/her |
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:24 PM |
no no I'd guard that poem from her with my life
...just like 7th grade |
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cricket11
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:24 PM |
write a poem but rap it
(hello floodcheck my old friend) |
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RotomWash
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:25 PM |
"no no I'd guard that poem from her with my life"
oh if that's the case, then I don't see any problems with you writing a poem |
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kent195
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:25 PM |
watch your dreams get shatter into itty bitty recces pieces
-Roses are red, Violets are red, Holy crap my garden is on fire- |
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:26 PM |
scrubs I'm telling you it will never be seen by mortal eyes I just need to express my feelings outside of my mind
...just like 7th grade |
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:26 PM |
Just do this poem my cousin wrote to his crush:
"Roses are red, violets are blue, this poem may not make much sense, just like my love for you."
pretty cheesy if you ask me. |
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:28 PM |
| For me all i did was ask a friend to help me get my crush/ex now to notice me and i just built up confidence untill i asked her out but i wouldent use that advive you can but we broke up today 6 days doe thats my best no just kiding my best is 3 years but she broke up with me its my fault but still she wanted to hang out but i did not have time because im on the scools sports teams and every break im with the team so spend time with him or her if you date him or her dont be mean like i was. |
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:28 PM |
does nobody read past the title anymore? I WILL NOT SHOW THAT POEM TO ANYONE I WILL HURT WHOEVER GETS A HOLD OF IT
...just like 7th grade |
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:30 PM |
No do this poem
''Roses are red. Violets are blu- Wait. Flowers suck.''
That would be a good one for an emo/goth |
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:31 PM |
/e sigh THIS POEM WILL BE FOR MY EYES AND MY EYES ONLY READ PAST THE FIRST POST YOU LAZY NECKBEARDS
...just like 7th grade |
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:32 PM |
>you lazy neckbeards
I'm sorry, I can't hear you over your excess amounts of chromosomes. |
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:32 PM |
also @sonic she's not emo/goth/any of that edgy crap
...just like 7th grade |
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:35 PM |
@Pte chromosomes are silent
...just like 7th grade |
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lagio
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:35 PM |
state your feelings
write it in iambic heptameter if that actually means anything |
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:36 PM |
@choco
And your whining isn't. |
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:36 PM |
no no I just write it in arabic and leave it at her doorstep winning
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:37 PM |
i would recommend getting some kind of like perfume, video game, or jewelry she likes just in case she turns down the poem.
otherwise, just go straight up to her, state your feelings, and work from there. |
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:37 PM |
"watch your dreams get shatter into itty bitty recces pieces" ..You could be on to something, actually. Make the poem about how she is like a bunch of Reese's Pieces. Y'know, like 'you have the personality of a thousand Reese's Pieces, I eat each one, yet my love for them never decreases.'
..Or some other cheesy crap like that. I dunno, go crazy. |
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lagio
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:37 PM |
| write it in mandarin so it can be confused on google translate for potato |
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Awkrin
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:39 PM |
| Most poems are too cheesy write a song, or make it cheesy romantic if she likes that crap. My girlfriend likes cheesy romantic crap. |
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:42 PM |
or I have master plan I'm writing a short story about something I aibn't telling with me her and a few of my friends as characters I just sprinkle hints among that story (it will only be seen by my eyes and hers)
...just like 7th grade |
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XTGNegro
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:43 PM |
| nah this is more like a b-17 bomber flying over an area of 500 kugelblitz aa pieces |
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| 01 Dec 2014 09:44 PM |
no it's a lone b-17 flying over a city in other words when it goes down it's gonna be a hell of a show
...just like 7th grade |
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