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Vexull is not online. Vexull
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27 Nov 2014 07:21 PM
Just thinking about lyrics for a song me and a friend are making. I think it should simply be about performing. Here's what I got for the first verse:

Now, I
I said we'll try
I think we'll make it by
They asked why
And I said,
maybe someday we'll be playing up there with the best
They said,
maybe, but you know that we're no better than the rest



Cool beans man. Thoughts?
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drakeh is not online. drakeh
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27 Nov 2014 07:24 PM
def a 10.0
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Vexull is not online. Vexull
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27 Nov 2014 07:25 PM
c:
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ilikefirewizards is not online. ilikefirewizards
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27 Nov 2014 07:28 PM
garbage
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Vexull is not online. Vexull
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27 Nov 2014 07:29 PM
:c
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ReneDescartes is not online. ReneDescartes
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27 Nov 2014 07:39 PM
honestly the rhyming isn't all that inventive
the melody might be good but it's hard to tell through text

good effort though so 6/10 i guess
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Vexull is not online. Vexull
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27 Nov 2014 07:59 PM
Yeah the melody is kind of weird but the lyrics go well with it.
And all the things that rhyme with "I" seem to be the best things to use. At least for the first verse.
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