Vexull
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| 27 Nov 2014 07:21 PM |
Just thinking about lyrics for a song me and a friend are making. I think it should simply be about performing. Here's what I got for the first verse:
Now, I I said we'll try I think we'll make it by They asked why And I said, maybe someday we'll be playing up there with the best They said, maybe, but you know that we're no better than the rest
Cool beans man. Thoughts? |
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drakeh
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Vexull
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| 27 Nov 2014 07:39 PM |
honestly the rhyming isn't all that inventive the melody might be good but it's hard to tell through text
good effort though so 6/10 i guess |
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Vexull
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| 27 Nov 2014 07:59 PM |
Yeah the melody is kind of weird but the lyrics go well with it. And all the things that rhyme with "I" seem to be the best things to use. At least for the first verse. |
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