marc12267
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| 26 Nov 2014 06:51 PM |
Here's my 3rd attempt at creating a original RP idea.
There will be 2 worlds: one would be a wasteland, and the other would be like a futuristic dream come true. People can start off in either one of the 2 worlds, but the people in the wasteland world must pay $2,500 to go to the other world, but those already in that world will have to go back to the wasteland world if they break the more severe of the laws in the utopian world. The cost, for the people who are booted into the wasteland world, to go (back) to the futuristic world will need to pay 2 times the price.
Anyways, I'll describe the 2 worlds more detailed: the wasteland world's habitants might last shorter than those living in the non-ravaged world. The wasteland world has sand. SO MUCH SAND. SO MUCH THAT THERE'S AN INSANE AMOUNT THAT COULDN'T BE COUNTED! Sorry, I pushed myself over-the-top. Anyways, the buildings in that world will be deteriorating, although still inhabitable, but it can fall anytime. In the utopian world, however, it's much cleaner, more sleek and not-so-bad.
This is the most work I've put in so far, so please throw constructive criticism at it. |
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| 26 Nov 2014 10:56 PM |
| That sounds cool but why would anyone want to rp in the good world? |
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| 26 Nov 2014 10:59 PM |
Sounds interesting. You'll have to add more than that, though. Will it be like an Elysium breaking and entering thing or more of a character development thing?
The world concept has the potential of quite a bit of ideas, but make sure you know that this idea shouldn't be the final product. |
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marc12267
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| 26 Nov 2014 11:08 PM |
I... just can't decide. D: If I go with the Elysium thing you mentioned, then we would end up like.. I don't know. But if I go with character development, then I would make it optional for the people's characters in the wasteland to have artificial limbs and gritty stuff, with 1/3 of the OCs on the utopian world
I know it's not the final product. I'll declare it as it is if it has enough ideas, or if the ideas are fresh enough. |
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| 26 Nov 2014 11:26 PM |
I see.
If you have any more ideas to add to this concept don't be afraid to share. I'd be happy to know more about it. |
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| 26 Nov 2014 11:39 PM |
WHAAaaAAAATtttTTTT?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!
YOU HAVE TO PAY 2.5K JUST TO GO TO ANOTHER WWORLD THAT IS BASICALLY JUST A DESERT?
WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!
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| 26 Nov 2014 11:41 PM |
| let's break the system and invade the elysium |
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marc12267
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| 26 Nov 2014 11:53 PM |
@MrVincent
You have to pay 2.5K to go into the utopia world. NOT the desert world. Duh. |
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marc12267
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| 26 Nov 2014 11:59 PM |
| ...and that's why I'm incorporating jobs. That's right. Jobs are in both worlds and it'll play a vital role in the wasteland world where you have to ear 2.5K to go to the futuristic world. |
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| 27 Nov 2014 02:42 AM |
| Maybe "Utopia" could be full of political intrigue and assassinations and whatnot, with everyone trying to get to the top? |
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| 27 Nov 2014 04:16 AM |
| Interesting it does remind me that I need to get working on my own ideas. |
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| 27 Nov 2014 09:50 AM |
| Yes. There will be random assassinations with random people trying to get to the top rank. |
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marc12267
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| 27 Nov 2014 09:58 AM |
| The conflict is that in the "utopia" world, people are trying to become the upper class for long, while in the wasteland world, people are violently fighting to get into the "utopian" world. |
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| 27 Nov 2014 10:16 AM |
I think it would be interesting to be one of the people who wanted to stay in the wasteland Like, they knew they wouldn't get to utopia in time, so they wanted to rule what was left of their own world |
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| 27 Nov 2014 06:34 PM |
I know it is. It's my redemption from making terrible RPs and it's the start of me making good, well-thought out RPs.
I'll try to become urbane as well.
Anyway, what are your suggestions for this one? Oh yeah, here's my OC template sheet.
Name: Gender: Age: Status: Bio: Prosthetic Limbs: |
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| 27 Nov 2014 06:37 PM |
Mmm... Needs LOTS of work.
But, if composed right, tweaked, et cetera, then I think it could be a really good roleplay. With the right people, of course.
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