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| 26 Nov 2014 11:28 AM |
My first RP.
☤~Story~☤ Journal entry 1: This virus was different, it was smart. It was impossibly infectious, and it had no symptons, when you got it you, you didn't know it until you were half finished devouring another human. The CDC realized that the virus that we now know as the NVC virus, existed after 9 weeks, by that time half the global population had it. The virus mutated its symptons, it started turning corpses into the walking dead that were eating and infecting other healthy hosts. The virus was similar too rabies, erratic behavior, foaming from the mouth, and being spread by blood or saliva. The military tried too calm things down, but that only lead too walkers in full armour. Major cities had fallen, New York, Los Angeles, and Houston. Chicago was still hanging on, with Refugee camps sparced throughout the area. Survivors still exist though, but most are more dangerous than walkers, they will shoot you dry just for a can of beans. I heard some healthy people up north were hunting and eating other people, just too save their own skin. Certain people are immune, they seem like our best chance of survival. The world is burning and we all know it, yet me and many other people are still fighting with every ounce of hope we have left. We haven't come this far too die now.
☤~Findable~Items~☤ If you can't afford an item, don't fret you can find all of those items and many more in the map. Certain items are rarer than other items the scale goes like this. COMMON(Melee Weapons, food and packs) UNCOMMON (Small pistols and ammunition, Cars) RARE (Large assault rifles, and military wear, Car keys etc) LEGENDARY (Helicopters, Explosive launchers, Tanks,) Everywhere you go you are sure too find a new item.
☤~Map~☤ Your starting point is somewhere in Illinois, you will be alerted of a nearby towns or neighbor hoods, so you can find items. You can meet and friend players. You are allowed 2 move spaces per day, one forumn post is one day. (Example: I inspect the house then uses my 2 move spaces too get closer too Chicago). If you are already in a town you don't have too use any move spaces too inspect it. If You inspect a certain building I will tell if you find anything, certain buildings have more chances of better items. Military bases have high chances of rare AR's. This system will take getting used too. Chicago is 15 move spaces away from your starting point. You will be alerted if you are close too bases or towns. Too talk too another player with your radio say Radio: (Username) (Type message here).
☤~Buyable~Items~☤ When designing a character you are given a certain amount of money too chose items that will help you progress through your story. You start out with 900 dollars, and may find some of these items along your trip.
Hand Held radio: Cost 300$ (Allows you too talk too any player that also has a radio)UNCOMMON
Car keys: Cost 850$ (Allows you too access any car giving you 4 more move spaces per day)RARE
Baseball Bat: Cost 100$ (Allows the player 2 more damage per zombie hit) COMMON
Military Vest: Cost 700$ (Allows the player 3 more health in battle) RARE
Basic Food/Water: Cost 100$ (Gives the player 2 liquid and 2 food items.) COMMON
Zombie blood: Cost 800$ (Greatly decreases chances of being attacked by a zombie) RARE
Regular Pack: Cost 300$ (Allows the player 3 more Inv. spaces more than the classic 4 spaces.) COMMON
M1911 Pistol: Cost 450$ (Allows the player too use a pistol with 20 shots, that can kill a zombie 2 move spaces away.) UNCOMMON ☤~Combat~☤ If you find an ASR or a melee or any other weapon I will give you its stats when I tell you have found it. For Ex. AK47 has 6 damager when a baseball bat has 2. Every player starts off with 20 health and that can be increased by armour, When you meet a play you can either friend them or say Attack, (username) w/(weapon). You can do that once per turn, after you have attack the person must attack back within 45 seconds. If he doesn't you are allowed too attack again. You may also flee if you can't win, but if your attacker has a long range weapon you will probably die.
(Battle example)
(Bobguy11 says)Attack, Lolman787, w/ M4A1,
(Then I say) M4A1 Does 7 damage lolmans health is at 13
(Lolman787 says) Attack Bobguy11, w/ AK47
(Then I say) AK47 does 6 damage Bobguys11s health is at 14
And so on until someone dies.
I will also say what they dropped. and you can loot it.
☤~Rules~☤ No ridiculous posts No talking without radio you will be ignored if you do so This may seem like a forumn game but its mainly an rp And have fun! I tried too make this different than apoc So don't ask.
☤~CS~☤ Name: Nickname: Age: Appearance: Bio: (Optional) Personaility: Items chosen:
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| 26 Nov 2014 11:40 AM |
| How would you know yet? I'm going too incorporate RP when you ACTUALLY join the game. |
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| 26 Nov 2014 11:40 AM |
| If I wanted to play Dungeons and Dragons with guns, I'd go make my own game. |
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| 26 Nov 2014 12:11 PM |
| How is this like DAD? Calm down fanboy jeez. |
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| 26 Nov 2014 12:13 PM |
| Im only joining because you put Illinois in |
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| 26 Nov 2014 12:46 PM |
(This is a very video-game-esque [Did I do good, Magey?!] roleplay. I suggest removing the dialogue fighting. I.E: "Blahblahblah shoots an Ak47 at Blahddityblah, doing 9 damage. His health is at 11." Also, you could've included an Author's Note instead of putting "I tried too make this different than "apoc" So don't ask." You state a random fragment that is "Apoc" what is "Apoc" Apocalypse Rising? Post-Apocalyptic movies? And etcetera. Also, next time don't capitalize the 'S' in 'So', OK? The status thing isn't THAT bad of an idea. Instead of telling the player how much damage it does, state what attachments it has, or how much ammunition is in it's magazine. The rarity system I agree with, actually. Because it appears that what you put in each tier is actually reasonable.
So all in all, I suggest you remake this Roleplay because it does indeed have a good story but, you should exclude the things I put in the paragraph above and then you'll probably get more love for this roleplay. Thanks, have a nice day!)
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| 26 Nov 2014 12:52 PM |
| For starters 90% of Roblox players knows apoc means apocalypse rising. And don't capitalize the s in So? I'm sorry did that slight Grammatical error ruin everything for you? If so you need thicker skin. But I will remove the damage script. Happy? |
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| 26 Nov 2014 01:06 PM |
Took your advice precise and made a new one. Join if you want. |
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| 26 Nov 2014 01:11 PM |
For starters 90% of Roblox players knows apoc means apocalypse rising. And don't capitalize the s in So? I'm sorry did that slight Grammatical error ruin everything for you? If so you need thicker skin. But I will remove the damage script. Happy?
Well, 98% of percentages are made up on the spot |
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| 26 Nov 2014 01:12 PM |
| Yeah I know. I pulled that out of my @ss. But I took his advice. and re did it. |
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| 26 Nov 2014 01:59 PM |
| so is this another alternate reality roleplay where military, nukes, and quarantines dont exist? |
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| 26 Nov 2014 03:10 PM |
| For starters, You obviously didn't read the lore because it said half the population had it and didn't know it. So yeah quarantine half the planet great idea. Secondly nukes would just destroy everything and kill people within a large radius with radiation poisoning. Also in the lore it said the military failed too kill the zombies there were too many. Maybe read the actual story next time bud. |
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| 26 Nov 2014 03:16 PM |
| Combat and PvP has been removed, For more RP. |
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| 26 Nov 2014 03:32 PM |
Or, you know, nuking half the planet wouldn't be a bad idea.
Half of them are stupid anyways. |
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| 26 Nov 2014 03:41 PM |
| Yeah but you would put us into too nuclear winter or kill of the rest of us with radiation. You would also kill all the farm land, so pretty much seal the human races doom. |
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| 26 Nov 2014 04:38 PM |
Or, yknow, underground bunkers; hydroponics bring in clean air and artificial light to grow crops. Boiling water and then putting said boiled water onto the crops, yknow, the usual.
Let the smart ones live. Do it for all of us. |
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| 26 Nov 2014 05:24 PM |
"the military failed too kill the zombies there were too many." so its an alternate reality where the worlds militarys only get two sticks and a rock to fight stuff with |
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| 26 Nov 2014 05:27 PM |
| Like I said read the lore, Half the population were zombies. And did you come on here just too hate, for what reasons, because your not good at it. |
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| 26 Nov 2014 05:28 PM |
| also i like how this alternate reality also has diseases that magically spread to half the world in two seconds |
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| 26 Nov 2014 05:29 PM |
"Like I said read the lore, Half the population were zombies."
also i'm fairly certain a military with that has soldiers with atleast have a brain can easily kill half the population if said half the population are all just rotting braindead corpses that shamble around |
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| 26 Nov 2014 05:30 PM |
| For the last time... "The disease was impossibly Infectious" You know that means bud? More infectious than the common cold. So it could easily spread too half the Population in 9 weeks. |
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| 26 Nov 2014 05:31 PM |
| yeah that means its a magically disease made by magical wizards in the magic wizard tower of magic and friendship magic |
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| 26 Nov 2014 05:32 PM |
| These zombies are different they aren't mindless shambling around, when the spot you they sprint at you. When they get into hordes they can trample a big group of military soldiers. And by your logic your saying every single zombie apocalypse movie doesn't hold water, and I doubt your any smarter than a Hollywood director. |
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