LordHock
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| 25 Nov 2014 09:30 PM |
Verse 1 (Talking) Some people say We all have a beast inside But it's up to us To choose a different ride Alter the tide But from what I see... I [F]ing can't!
Verse 2 (Yelling rap) Blood Hunta throws tantrum His fandom gettin mad His momma get sad when she see Blood Hunta drinking his own [F]ing pee Tuck his [D] between his legs Call the [P] next door Tell em he was once poor But I ain't no more I unleashed the [F]ing beast inside Ate a feast of [P] Could he no more be the wimp he once was Or should he remain To be a [p]imp Tipping the chick leaving his room a good fifteen percent [F] that kid over there Blood Hunta just ripped out his [F]ing hair! I think the [F]er gone mad! He has a gone a tad bit ova board
Verse 3 [MF]er got upset last night Kicked my [MF]ing [A] in a God damn fight [B] had it comin he said [F]ed my friend Hitch now she dead Hunta please Stop! That beast is crazy! Please Hunt! I swear to God I won't be lazy! [B] [F] you! I got enough peeps that pays me My beast does what it wants! It will taunt you if it wants! You can not [F] with it! It will rip off a [T]! Back off! Go [F] Christoff! I've had it with you! Beast, go show this [B] to our sort of flu! *Gunshot*
Blood Hunter - 2014
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LordHock
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| 25 Nov 2014 09:31 PM |
| This was a bit of my dark side. Rate it 1-10 with suggestions. |
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LordHock
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BroBro264
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LordHock
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LordHock
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| 25 Nov 2014 10:35 PM |
| Holy crap... Can I get an explanation? |
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| 25 Nov 2014 10:39 PM |
she see [F]ing pee
Tuck his [D] between his legs Call the [P] next door Tell em he was once poor
verse 3 (2*) was decent and stuck to the story a lot better verse 1 wasn't a verse |
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LordHock
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| 25 Nov 2014 10:40 PM |
| Well you can't rate a song that low for one verse and 2 stanzas |
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| 25 Nov 2014 10:42 PM |
I was just giving a large example of the awfulness of the first verse you explicitly asked for a single digit out of 10 |
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| 25 Nov 2014 10:43 PM |
-1,000,000,000/10 Dude.This is like,the embodiment of why people hate ro-rap. Holy crap. The rhymes are so simple,you use no advanced hip-hop techniques in this,your bars are like 3 words each,and these are just so bad they don't make ANY sense. Sorry dude,but. Wow. |
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peter1078
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| 25 Nov 2014 10:56 PM |
| Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 0/10..................................................................................................................jkjkjkjkjk -5/10 |
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| 25 Nov 2014 11:07 PM |
-10000000000000000000000000/10
You drank your own pee, and died. |
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| 26 Nov 2014 10:34 AM |
| 2.75/10, dude, normally you have pretty decent stuff, but I just wasn't feeling this, the subject matter was okay, but the delivery seemed more focused on spitting out as many obscene and profane lyrics as possible, work on it, the ro-rap community expects more. |
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nazair22
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