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| 02 Nov 2014 11:19 PM |
I'm kinda new to the threads so... don't judge.
You're a wolf on the planet Havelcia (have-el-SEE-uh). The wolves here aren't normal. These wolves built civilians of themselves. There are royals, non-royals (aka villagers), and the "runts", the most hated. Some of these wolves have powers... but they're rare and hidden. Will these power holders take over the greedy, cruel royals? Let's find out! ________________________________________________________________ Rp n.ame: [...] Gender: [...] Kind (runt, royal, or non-royal): [...] Power(s) {if any}: [...] Body details (eye color, fur color, etc.): [...] ________________________________________________________________ RULES (please follow °•°): No powerplaying (don't dodge everytime pls, it gets annoying) No breaking ROBLOX rules! (I don't wanna get banned °•°) Have as much fun as you can! |
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trolled22
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| 03 Nov 2014 03:43 PM |
Rp name: [Arkure]
Gender: [Self explanitory.... You still wanna know? Fine, male.]
Kind : [Runty! (Runt xD)]
Power(s)[Many psychadelik powers like mind bending, headaches (On other people xD) and giving people terrible thoughts, ect. also has poisonous claws c;]
Body details [Black fur, neon green tips at ends of ears, note, and tail, has green eyes, but the white part of his eyes are black,] |
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trolled22
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| 03 Nov 2014 04:00 PM |
1. Why are there wolves and not anything else 2. How do they evolve 3. No plot 4. Nothing details where and why these royals and so and sos are come back with a detailed story Om not being ride just trying to help |
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trolled22
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| 03 Nov 2014 04:02 PM |
Its just a RP...
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We make it up as it oes c; |
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| 03 Nov 2014 04:04 PM |
Might aswell add me too...
Rp name: [Spectra] Gender: [Obviously Female] Type: [Runt] Powers: [When she is angered or in a sticky situation, her eyes go a light purple and she floats off the ground and makes a power orb that obviously goes at the attacker :P] Body details: [She is a pure white and her muzzle, ears, right paw, and tip of tail are black. Her nose is pink and her eyes are an ice blue, she also has bangs that cover one eye, tip of bangs also black.tongue is also purple.]
~Auto accepted!~ |
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| 03 Nov 2014 04:12 PM |
| (Btw der are KIND OF normal animals... they're just bigger. Like, a normal rabbit is the size of a bear cub.) |
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| 03 Nov 2014 04:18 PM |
Sorry, but we prefer 'professional' role plays- ones that have an actual plot - rather than this. You don't aimply says "we ll revl it s we gozz" it labels you as "This guy/girl was too lazy to think of a plot" and when you answer people's questions it helps get more joiners. If you want, you can get in touch with a rper here and Collaborate thus to make it better. |
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trolled22
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| 03 Nov 2014 04:22 PM |
| Rock, you realise that NO ONE wanted you here, and right now, its just a friend-to-friend roleplay. |
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trolled22
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| 03 Nov 2014 04:24 PM |
-sigh- its just a roleplay starter anyway, we dont need a "Hey, we're super professional!" roleplay and make a whole group, place, and plot, and web site! its just a simple RP starter, not the super-duper-ultra-pooper roleplay.
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| 03 Nov 2014 04:25 PM |
Rock, This Is my first thread, now I know my mistakes. Please don't state them over and over again.
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birm123
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| 03 Nov 2014 04:26 PM |
here's a few suggestions[not to be rude but help a fellow role-player out] 1. how is there a planet that has wolves, a species on earth? 2. how did the wolves evolve to create society? 3. can you give us some information on the powers, like how the wolves got them and what type of powers they have? 4. how often do one of the wolves have powers? 5. maybe list some locations, though you really wouldn't need to. 6. what is the plot here? who is the antagonist? why is the protagonist doing what they're doing?
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| 03 Nov 2014 04:28 PM |
protagonist
antagonist*
silly me |
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trolled22
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| 03 Nov 2014 04:30 PM |
I think you just stated everything rock said... and alittle of original stuff, but still (Original points: 1) but again, this is her first thread >.>
Again, kthxbaioriginalboi |
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| 03 Nov 2014 04:30 PM |
What birm said I was trying to say |
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| 03 Nov 2014 04:30 PM |
birm, ask FlareTheWolf... She inspired me k. |
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birm123
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| 03 Nov 2014 04:30 PM |
yes, i know
i was giving her constructive criticism :) |
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| 03 Nov 2014 04:33 PM |
This is like, The Island of Mezaa mixed with Hunger Games.
hungergames4lyfe MEZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
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| 03 Nov 2014 04:35 PM |
3rd time...
First thread. First thread = Not perfect Everyone's first thread is usually terrible. and also,
you cant really edit a posted thread, so she'll have to create a new one, people will still be commenting and replying "Hur hur invalid RP" and stuff, and she will have to remind everyone to go to the other thread, newb people will join the convo in this one, and she'll have to keep telling people to go the other one, because they are too ignorant too look down, and it would just be a huge mess. so we cant really fix it >.<
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birm123
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| 03 Nov 2014 04:38 PM |
We aee trying to help not judging also you cant expect everyone knows what the hunger games are or what island of mezna you have to explain everything |
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