zadfad
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| 09 Nov 2014 12:04 AM |
As the people of the continent live harmoniously among their own absolute rulers, one kingdom's people decide to make a stand against their current ruler. They stormed his palace, and deposed the Royal Family, putting in it's place, a corrupt republican scheme that ruled with blood.
But even the vengeful people, took action against their new masters. They removed the leader of the regime, and replaced it with a corrupt autocratic party of 5 men.
The entire continent disapproved of this. They all rallied up against them. In a Grand Coalition, and declared war.
The nation rallied up its forces... and every single man, woman, and child they could find to enlist... and repelled off the invaders.
In these wars.... One man... One general would rise up... and seize the reigns of time.
This man would ride up, and completely overhaul the entire social order.
This man would revolutionize Warfare...
This man would revolutionize modern thinking...
This man would revolutionize the World...
That man now faces enemies of the highest number, and the entire continent points its arms at that nation. The man after winning the nation countless victories at the southern frontier, returned to the capital, and in a bloodless coup... He seized power for himself, and now he faces enemies in all fronts as the leader of the nation...
He fought them all, and brought glory to his Nation...
His enemies call him a tyrant...
But this man...
His name is Napoléon Bonaparte! He is no tyrant! He... is L'Empereur! -------------------------------------- Context: Set in May 26th 1805 as the start date. That was the day Napoleon was crowned Emperor of all the French. That country is obviously France, and the continent is Europe. This RP will be a run through of the Napoleonic Era, but its up to you guys on the narrative. I will not be RPing, but I will progress history, and take control of Bonaparte if I must. ----------------- Its up to you on how you want to go with this.
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Name: Gender:( Male Female or Trans. If trans, specify biological and physical genders ) Age: Occupation:( Will need a good amount of soldiers for effect... ) (If soldier) Unit Type: ( Cavalry, Infantry, Artillery ) Race:( I don't care if you pick ahistorical things like Elfs or Orcs. This is your RP, you do it your way, but be reasonable ) Speciality: ( What you're good at. No damn. ) Weapon of Choice: ( Again, be reasonable. Scythes aren't allowed in combat unless self defense. They were farming tools in this time period. ) Biography: *Optional* Notes: ( Leave a GOOD note please. )
------------------------ Rules: All Roblox rules apply.
Romance should be kept at a low level, but for the sake of elbow room and your freedoms, it does not have to be at a minimum. That minimum is for you to decide. I will point out any violations.
You will have ONE WEEK to RP in one time period after the start has been announced, until we move on to the next. ------------------------
Au revoir mes amis. Bonne Chance!
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MrVincent
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| 09 Nov 2014 12:06 AM |
uhhhh
cool name nice story
good luck |
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zadfad
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| 09 Nov 2014 12:07 AM |
Glad you like it.
But wtf kind of response is this?
If you have criticisms, then say them, damnit! |
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| 09 Nov 2014 12:40 AM |
First: Why were you so overly vague in the introduction? There is no need to hide the fact you are speaking about Napoleon.
Second: I really doubt a trans section is necessary in an RP taking place in the 1800's. It's not like a character can say "Hey, I'm trans guys!" They weren't very accepting of such beliefs back then. Plus it doesn't even add any conflict or plot. A Mulan type character would work. A trans in the army? What exactly can someone roleplay as such a character? |
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zadfad
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| 09 Nov 2014 10:32 AM |
I was trying to fit the over romantic hype on the time period with the intro.
I threw in the trans thing for experimental purposes. Dude, you know how people react to this stuff.
And I was thinking Mulan when I typed that. A transy in the army could work, but only in dire circumstances. As for RPing, they can focus on hiding their identity,and close encounters. Honestly its put to them. |
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| 09 Nov 2014 09:16 PM |
they can focus on hiding their identity,and close encounters.
"Close encounters?" What "close encounters?" |
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| 10 Nov 2014 08:59 PM |
cmon mage, any other criticisms?
This is literally my rough copy, Ill make the real one later, as soon as I iron out Every single flaw there.
So. Bruh, more critics? |
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| 10 Nov 2014 09:10 PM |
Quit nitpicking, Mage.
This is his rough copy. He wants to fix every flaw. I'm pointing out the flaws for him. |
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| 15 Nov 2014 10:06 AM |
| OK so ima start a little test run. Anyone wanna just make a CS and RP for a few turns while I try to regulate? I need to test this out before I make the real copy. |
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| 19 Nov 2014 05:06 PM |
bumpthree
seriously! I need a testrun! |
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| 21 Nov 2014 06:07 PM |
Name: Pierre LePontoia Gender: Male Age: 45 Occupation: General Unit Type: Infantry Race: Human ( Make this a realistic RP please.) Speciality: Command Weapon of Choice: Sabre Biography: Born into a influential family in Paris, France. At age 10, Pierre was sent to military school. In graduation at age 18, Pierre was commisioned as an Captain and sent to North America in aid to help the American Revolution. After the war was won, Captain LePontoia was promoted to Major, and commisioned there for 6 years, until promotion to Brigadier Command. In Brigadier Command, he was injured in global expansion and was knighted for his valiant actions while in service, also being promoted to General. In 1803, he was commisioned as a full general commanding the French Army.
Notes: Please make this a realistic Napoleonic-French RP.
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| 21 Nov 2014 06:48 PM |
Alright, this is a Test Run, so there will be some problems, Once we work out all the issues with this, Ill put up the main thread. ----- Also, Napoleon was crowned on December 2, 1804, Damnit I messed up! So I guess thats where we'll start.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________ Anyways.
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The Notre Dame glows gold, in the festive light of the occasion. An organ's tune is resonated around the room, and a choir sings a light tune. The Cathedral itself, seems alive with a heavenly aura. Toward the end of the Cathedral, men with white robes sit on golden chairs, adorned with velvet and gems. The man in the middle chair, wore golden robes, and a tall gold hat, sat with an anxious expression on his face, awaiting the man of the hour, Napoleon himself, stood in front of the Pope, the seated man. Bonaparte stood with a dignified pose, holding a golden crown in one hand.
You stand with the other Generals of France's Armies, watching the event unfold. ( Lets just say your point of View is that of the Famous Painting Of Napoleon Crowning his wife emperor. )
( Alright, now Im giving you the opportunity to express your character's opinion, and his current state of mind, and whatnot. I will gradually be progressing history and setting up scenarios. Everything else is up to you and other RPers, as long as it isn't ahistorical to the point of throwing the flow of time off course. GLHF with this demo m8. ) |
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| 21 Nov 2014 06:58 PM |
| General LePontoia smiles as he sees his new royal majesty, Napoleon, being crowned. He wishes to speak about higher command after the ceremony. He awaits the end. |
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| 21 Nov 2014 07:01 PM |
Name: Arno Dorank
Gender:male
Age:24
Occupation:thief
Race:human
speciality:theivery (obviously
Weapon of choice: two beggars daggers
Biography:son of a nobleman that did not want a child so he threw him o nthe streets at 5,he learnt quickly how to steal |
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| 21 Nov 2014 07:02 PM |
| that looks intre- no i cant to many guards to escape with a life no just go into the crowd and watch |
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| 21 Nov 2014 08:21 PM |
Ill let him in, so I can see how to handle his kind.
Accepted m8.
You're sneaking behind a hay cart outside the Notre Dame. Your about to pickpocket the guy who owns it, but a Magnificently dressed woman entering the Cathedral.
You're move. |
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