Elite1243
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| 18 Nov 2014 06:54 PM |
We'd wake up in this world Feel all curled... Walking around, this trashy terrain I'd always ask you... "Can we leave this place?"... And where you take me, has just enough space...
Chorus: Take me away... Take me away... We'll leave this bed No, we don't need to stay Take me away... Don't wait for the day... So that in the night, we could shine all the dark...
On the bed we sleep You can hear me weep My depression of this world... Just got the best of me... Calamities... And wars... Just make it worse...
Chorus: Take me away... Take me away... We'll leave this bed No, we don't need to stay Take me away... Don't wait for the day... So that in the night, we could shine all the dark...
Bridge: (jackmanyaFANS) Take Me Away! I'm going to love you in a different way. I'm going to take you to paradise, I'm talking about a Jamaican Bay, You're so beautiful what else can I say, You're a lovely painter, I think our relationship has been painted We you used to shine on the windows but I think it's been tinted I rushed a lot you know I sprinted Getting you angry wasn't my intension, Went to the wrong place let's go to a different direction, I'll make more wait I'll make know Your body ain't for display You know the price and I have to pay I'm gone!
Bones and despair... Feel up the atmosphere... Take me away From all this suffering...
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Wobull
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Elite1243
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Carnelia
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| 18 Nov 2014 06:56 PM |
| YMCMB is trash except for my baby drake |
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Wobull
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| 18 Nov 2014 06:57 PM |
| What made your comment worse was the obvious sarcasm, and let us not forget the use of an emoji. |
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Elite1243
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Elite1243
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| 18 Nov 2014 07:00 PM |
Not to mention you didnt read the song and just commented to troll
Nice job, babe 😘 |
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Zech9005
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| 18 Nov 2014 07:01 PM |
"Not to mention you didnt read the song and just commented to troll"
Calling a piece of trash a piece of trash because it's trash isn't trolling. |
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Wobull
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| 18 Nov 2014 07:02 PM |
Ever heard of common sense?
You basically made repetitive lyrics with horrendous "rhymes" and expect positive criticism. |
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chtr0192
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Elite1243
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| 18 Nov 2014 07:06 PM |
Yes, I expect positive criticism bc roblox IS TOTALLY NOT filled with troll and hate.
Ever heard of 'When You Assume, You Make An “Ass” out of “U” and “Me”'
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Wobull
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| 18 Nov 2014 07:07 PM |
Are you one of those autistic kids sitting behind a computer with no social lives, looking through corny ass quotes to make them feel better?
Most likely. |
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Elite1243
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| 18 Nov 2014 07:09 PM |
And are you on of those assuming know-it-all hypocrites that like to continue a pitiful argument?
Most likely. |
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Wobull
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| 18 Nov 2014 07:10 PM |
One fact though, is, I know more than you.
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3Dwolf11
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Elite1243
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| 18 Nov 2014 07:13 PM |
Of course you do
You've been studying my life, stalking me at every single action I commit
And now that we have met
You ASSUME that you know more than me |
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Wobull
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| 18 Nov 2014 07:14 PM |
| You've also assumed that I've stalked you your whole life. |
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Elite1243
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| 18 Nov 2014 07:16 PM |
Obviously, it was a form of speach
ANDDDDDDDDDDD
"One fact though, is, I know more than you."
Makes u sound like a know-it-all
Does it not? |
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Wobull
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| 18 Nov 2014 07:18 PM |
| I'd rather be a "wannabe" Mr. Know-it-all compared to making terrible lyrics like these and expect good comments and/or rates. |
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Elite1243
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| 18 Nov 2014 07:20 PM |
And I'd rather have courage to do new things, and try new things than be an insecure 'wannabe' know-it-all
Now, r we done here? |
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Wobull
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| 18 Nov 2014 07:23 PM |
| We could have been if you accepted my criticism. |
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Elite1243
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| 18 Nov 2014 07:25 PM |
If I was to criticize any of your imperfect actions
Would YOU accept my criticism? |
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Wobull
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| 18 Nov 2014 07:26 PM |
| Yes, and if you knew me, you'd know how I'd have handled it. |
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Elite1243
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| 18 Nov 2014 07:26 PM |
Yes, but I don't know you
So how can you compare my different life to yours |
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Wobull
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