jasdevil7
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| 11 Nov 2014 01:39 AM |
Small piece I made a while back, critique? http://www.roblox.com/Tokyo-Side-Street-place?id=180266151 |
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jasdevil7
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| 11 Nov 2014 12:26 PM |
My god that place is beautiful. I know you're still working on it, but maybe you could have a cafe in the black building with the red title, some side vendor carts, more furniture, etc.
If you want to go REALLY big, you ought to advertise this place and have carts or shop slots opened up for clothing/food groups. |
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| 11 Nov 2014 08:34 PM |
Thanks a lot for the reply, means a lot. I will take what you said into account, at this stage I don't think I'm going to turn the red store into a Cafe, rather into a little convenience store. (thus Chin Chin's Konbi.) A lot more is planned to be added. |
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| 11 Nov 2014 10:13 PM |
UPDATELOG: 12/11/2014 Started work on the Subway, currently the entrance is there but barred off. Added new Billboard for the Red Dragon Restaurant. Added a cart, probably going to put stuff in there. TO BE DONE: Interiors of 7/11, Chin Chin's Convenience Store, random store, and any other empty buildings. Detail the Subway, trains won't be operational but will be there, probably going to be something that takes a long time. NPCs are a maybe. |
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| 14 Nov 2014 06:32 AM |
UPDATE LOG: 14/11/2014 Updated the Subway heavily, finished off the tracks, added a bunch of signs, chairs, info centre and an entrance at the top. Still far from finished. Contemplating whether or not to add functioning trains in. |
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