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Re: What can i add to make this place look better

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StolenCandy is not online. StolenCandy
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08 Nov 2014 01:28 PM
http://www.roblox.com/test-place?id=181604137

other than spamming surface guis
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StolenCandy is not online. StolenCandy
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08 Nov 2014 01:29 PM
le bump
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royaltoe is not online. royaltoe
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08 Nov 2014 02:17 PM
Like I said before in game look at logitech's places
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TheDarkDom999 is not online. TheDarkDom999
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08 Nov 2014 04:50 PM
A purpose.
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Namiras is not online. Namiras
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08 Nov 2014 05:39 PM
un-cancolide the tree leaves.
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Kadios is not online. Kadios
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08 Nov 2014 06:55 PM
Make the sign rotate and add like red lights on wall.
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MikeFromStateFarmm is not online. MikeFromStateFarmm
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09 Nov 2014 12:29 AM
put effort in it


#shotsfired
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09 Nov 2014 01:54 AM
More colorful lights
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VolcanoINC is not online. VolcanoINC
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09 Nov 2014 03:57 AM
It's quite nice already, I like it c;

The place right now is a little dark, though, so I suggest turning up the ambient and/or adding more lights.

The walls are quite plain. Try adding a little detail to them. You've already made some effort to do that by adding black lines, but it's still a little flat. Try breaking it up by making the walls from multiple parts and creating a bit of a pattern with them.

Minor annoyance, but trees growing on black plastic seems a bit odd. Try using more of a dark brown color and using the Slate or Grass material, and lift the border around the soil up a bit so it's higher than the soil itself.

The GUI might look a bit better if it actually has some color to it. Try transparent light blue and make the part white and more transparent.
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Empire8595 is not online. Empire8595
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09 Nov 2014 04:57 AM
It looks quite cool.

Try removing any unneeded outlines; add some cool clamps to the window (or some other kinda mechanical stuff, that looks cool on space stations); perhaps add some stuff flying around the planet.
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StolenCandy is not online. StolenCandy
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09 Nov 2014 05:00 AM
I tried scripting an AI

Failed miserably

Flys for a second and explodes

so i'm just removing the planet and adding cool lights
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StolenCandy is not online. StolenCandy
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09 Nov 2014 05:47 AM
bump
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Sinisterss is not online. Sinisterss
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09 Nov 2014 06:52 AM
Yea, just remove the un-needed lines and you're basically good.

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StolenCandy is not online. StolenCandy
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09 Nov 2014 07:27 AM
Wait what lines
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09 Nov 2014 07:33 AM
what lines[2]
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10 Nov 2014 07:23 AM
abc
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Winception is not online. Winception
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10 Nov 2014 09:14 AM
Those random wires that are sticking out at odd places. They're kind of pointless.

It's a path that has no destination... I would make another storage/information/control/whatever room beyond it.

But that's just me.

~Win
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StolenCandy is not online. StolenCandy
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11 Nov 2014 08:13 AM
gonna add a bit to the wires
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Greak5245 is not online. Greak5245
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11 Nov 2014 09:48 AM
Make the text on the signs more natural.
Add somthing to the wall.
Maybe add one or more roms.
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Greak5245 is not online. Greak5245
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11 Nov 2014 09:51 AM
And maybe make the lights wires 90* to the wall, then follow the wall a bit before it goes trough a hole. (I said maybe)
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