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| 08 Nov 2014 01:28 PM |
http://www.roblox.com/test-place?id=181604137
other than spamming surface guis |
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royaltoe
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| 08 Nov 2014 02:17 PM |
| Like I said before in game look at logitech's places |
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Namiras
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| 08 Nov 2014 05:39 PM |
| un-cancolide the tree leaves. |
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Kadios
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| 08 Nov 2014 06:55 PM |
| Make the sign rotate and add like red lights on wall. |
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| 09 Nov 2014 12:29 AM |
put effort in it
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| 09 Nov 2014 03:57 AM |
It's quite nice already, I like it c;
The place right now is a little dark, though, so I suggest turning up the ambient and/or adding more lights.
The walls are quite plain. Try adding a little detail to them. You've already made some effort to do that by adding black lines, but it's still a little flat. Try breaking it up by making the walls from multiple parts and creating a bit of a pattern with them.
Minor annoyance, but trees growing on black plastic seems a bit odd. Try using more of a dark brown color and using the Slate or Grass material, and lift the border around the soil up a bit so it's higher than the soil itself.
The GUI might look a bit better if it actually has some color to it. Try transparent light blue and make the part white and more transparent. |
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| 09 Nov 2014 04:57 AM |
It looks quite cool.
Try removing any unneeded outlines; add some cool clamps to the window (or some other kinda mechanical stuff, that looks cool on space stations); perhaps add some stuff flying around the planet. |
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| 09 Nov 2014 05:00 AM |
I tried scripting an AI
Failed miserably
Flys for a second and explodes
so i'm just removing the planet and adding cool lights |
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| 09 Nov 2014 06:52 AM |
Yea, just remove the un-needed lines and you're basically good.
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| 10 Nov 2014 09:14 AM |
Those random wires that are sticking out at odd places. They're kind of pointless.
It's a path that has no destination... I would make another storage/information/control/whatever room beyond it.
But that's just me.
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| 11 Nov 2014 08:13 AM |
| gonna add a bit to the wires |
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Greak5245
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| 11 Nov 2014 09:48 AM |
Make the text on the signs more natural. Add somthing to the wall. Maybe add one or more roms. |
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Greak5245
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| 11 Nov 2014 09:51 AM |
| And maybe make the lights wires 90* to the wall, then follow the wall a bit before it goes trough a hole. (I said maybe) |
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