TripleH
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| 14 Sep 2007 05:35 PM |
i am going to write a book
this will take from 2 weeks to 1 month
but when im finished it will be published to roblox
yes thats the only plce i will be publishing probably |
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TripleH
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| 14 Sep 2007 05:54 PM |
heres a preview here
There are 2 brothers named Steven and Andrew Porter. They don't get along very well but it's not that they don't like each other it's just that brothers are supposed to fight and argue. Sometimes they get along...................
there may be more previews later |
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StairDude
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| 14 Sep 2007 06:02 PM |
| A whole book in a month?How many chapters. |
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TripleH
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| 14 Sep 2007 06:03 PM |
its going to be more of the size of a kids book
but not a kids book just the same size |
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StairDude
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| 14 Sep 2007 06:05 PM |
| so about 60-100 pages or so? |
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TripleH
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| 14 Sep 2007 06:09 PM |
probably about 8 or 9 pages thi is my first book though if i write another 1 it will be much longer
probably
do they divide things into pages in the forums???? |
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| 14 Sep 2007 06:13 PM |
| depends on how long the post is, if it takes up a page and there's still more, it'll be on another page. |
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TripleH
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TripleH
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| 14 Sep 2007 08:42 PM |
i have been writing for a while
my thing might not be that long though im not sure |
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TripleH
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| 14 Sep 2007 09:43 PM |
The Adventures of Andrew and Steven Porter Chapter 1
There are 2 brothers named Steven and Andrew Porter. They don't get along very well but it's not that they don't like each other it's just that brothers are supposed to fight and argue. Sometimes they get along. Well they started there own pillow fighting company. At first the rules were where you could only hit with pillows. If you hit with hands, head, or legs they would get disqualified. Then they went from that to extreme pillow fighting. In that they could do anything. It's kind of like wrestling, except that you could use pillows, too. The pillow fighting company was called WPFF (World Pillow Fighting Federation). It was really cool. They wanted to post the videos on Youtube or Google Video but they didn't have a video camera. They liked to watch videos on both of them though. They mostly liked to watch wrestling videos because they loved wrestling. Steven's favorite wrestler was The Game, Triple H and Andrew's was The Phenom, The Undertaker.
Chapter 2
They had 4 dogs. Their names were Spot, Sam, Oof and Little Man. They loved their dogs a lot. Their dogs loved them too. They took very good care of their dogs. They fed them two times a day and gave them water with ice when it was hot. They had a poarch so that when it rained the dogs could get on it. Spot was a yellowish dog. Oof was brown and had a lot of hair. Sam had a skin problem and he was black and white. And Little Man was a small white, brown, and black dog. He liked to jump alot and he was very playful. Oof liked to play with him alot. But Spot woesn't very playful. He just loved loved to get hid head rubbed. Sam, although he had a broken leg was pretty playful. He didn't like Little Man though. They never got along. They were always fighting and growling at each other.
Chapter 3
Steven and Andrew had alot of crazy adventures. Like sometimes they would go and llay in the woods. Sometimes they would even stand in their front yard with a bee-bee gun hunt birds and squirels. Their parents didn't like it when this happened though. One time they were doing it and Steven was playing around and thought that it wouldn't hurt and shot Andrew's foot. Andrew sweared that he wouldn't tell their dad. But a few weeks later he got so mad at Steven for something that he told his dad. He was furious. I think that Steven got whipped. He probably did but not sure. Steven promised to his dad that he would never do anything like that ever again. And I don't think that he ever did. One time when Steven and Andrew were kind of young, they went hunting with their dad. Andrew got too cold and they had to take him home. After that it was oly Steven and his dad. They never shot anything but Steven still enjoyed it.
Those were some of Steven and Andrew's crazy adventures. Be expecting another book to come out soon Thank you for reading |
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TripleH
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| 15 Sep 2007 06:53 AM |
| fter u read tell me if like it |
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| 15 Sep 2007 07:01 AM |
| ..........The hook was horrible. |
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k9chief
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| 15 Sep 2007 07:05 AM |
| It depends the age bracket you are. Its pretty good, for a: ?. So its hard to tell, but yeah its pretty good. |
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k9chief
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| 15 Sep 2007 07:07 AM |
Yo I wanna post one of me stories, but me no wright for a while.
The sword of slaying
The waves, making loud swishing noises , were rushing to the shore, and as Zodiak Flint watched it he had a sudden urge to sail all over them. His father used to be a sailor, until his ship was blown up. Ever since he was young, he wanted to avenge his father from the Notorious Black-Eyed Pete. Now was his chance with him holding the "sailors wanted" poster, at exactly the right age. He had made up his mind. "Ahoy! My name's Zodiak Flint and I want to be a pirate," Zodiak said. “ Well, first things first, it’s to become a pirate. You do appear to be the right age and you are lucky enough to be the last person to be able to sign up. So jump on in!” Yelled the man. As Zodiak made his way up to the plank leading into the ship another man appeared. “All ready, Captain Shanks?” Obviously the man down there was Captain Shanks. “Aye, second man. As I have already told you, you are only second man. To everybody, you’re second man. Savvy?” Asked Captain Shanks. “Aye, Captain,” replied the man and disappeared behind the door to a room titled: Second Man Cabin. Zodiak hurried up the plank to find himself on an enormous ship inscribed with the words “ Sailors Depths”. It appeared to be covering something behind it, but Zodiak paid it no attention. He turned to listen to the captain as he climbed up the plank. “ Coursed Seagulls. Blast one in the head I will. Oh yes, all to your positions! Zodiak, you control the cannons, well you know, just in case. Now! WE SET SAIL!” Bellowed the captain while some men clapped and cheered. “ Uh, Sir. Don’t you think we should know the direction we are going in?” asked a man. “Aye, Flitburt. We will be going in the direction of the sea. It appears to be going north, yes,” replied the captain. “ But sir, that’s South...” Fliburt tried to reply but his captain started in a fit of: “No no! I know the way!” also with a bit of “ SHUT UP FLIBURT!” and accompanied by “ I know what I’m doing.”. The ship began moving in the direction of Africa. It was a long journey until Captain Shanks called a meeting. "Ahoy, my crew. I have something to say. This is not a sailor's ship. We own the seas as pirates," Captain Shanks smirked with a devilish face. " You lied to us Captain! DIE YOU FILTHY PIRATE!" Flitburt ran straight at the Captain, his sword in hand, slashed at the captain's head. Captain Shanks ducked, unbelievably quickly, and took a blow to Flitburt in the stomach. He was quickly sent off the ship. " Anybody else want to argue?" The captain bellowed. Some people jumped off the ship as a Navy sailor shipped pass, only thinking as it is another fellow sailing ship. Pretty soon they shall no the truth. Everybody left except Zodiak, Vivian Wisk, Billy Bobble, and Stanley Flipster. " Sir, as a pirate I know an enemy. I need to get him, to avenge my father as the sailor he was! You might know him because they told me he sent two of Captain something's men to Davy Jones Locker. Is it true sir?" Zodiak began. " Ye all wrong! Mr. Flint was a cold-blooded pirate!" he bellowed. " I don't believe you" "Believe it. So who is the man you are trying to get? " Somebody by the name of One-Eyed Pete, Captain" Zodiak explained. This caused a few gasps by the other crew members, but captain shanks only came up with a ' WHAT KIND OF PIRATES ARE YOU??? TOUGHEN UP!'. Instead the captain looked at Zodiak and said," Actually, that pirate has something I want too. Something by the name of the sword of slaying. The one that killed your father, dear boy. Aye, I know it well. Killed over a million people in its past. Very dangerous weapon, you have to agree. One-Eyed Pete might be no good name for a pirate, but its true and he sure knows how to use that sword of his. Deadly man..." The captain became quiet but kept going after," Killed my... my.... my father....,"
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k9chief
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| 15 Sep 2007 07:08 AM |
| Sorry if theres any like, "Shut ups" In it. I didnt think I would post it. |
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TripleH
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| 15 Sep 2007 07:57 AM |
| Lol, anyways what you think of it? |
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ROBLOXCOP
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| 15 Sep 2007 07:57 AM |
I think that is very good. I like the way you didn't use any profanity or bad words. And I just like it. I also like how you used coplete sentences like I do. That was a good book. |
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ROBLOXCOP
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| 15 Sep 2007 07:58 AM |
| I was talking about TripleH's book, though. |
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whocares
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| 15 Sep 2007 08:22 AM |
awesome book dude
(tripleh) |
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k9chief
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| 15 Sep 2007 08:38 AM |
| cry lol anyways yeah me and triple friends now XD Mine just says Shut up becuase well, I didnt mean to post it here. I just wanted to show Triple my book becuase i wannna be friends with bookwriting kids. I just like pirates. ANYWAYS once again Triple nice book |
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k9chief
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| 15 Sep 2007 08:51 AM |
| That was once again too lol |
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k9chief
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| 15 Sep 2007 09:03 AM |
| Hey Guys me and triple H are gonna try to wright a story together XD |
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k9chief
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| 15 Sep 2007 09:10 AM |
Yo Im only on Chapter two of the sword of lsaying lol :
The sword of slaying
CHAPTER 1: CAPTAIN SHANKS
The waves, making loud swishing noises , were rushing to the shore, and as Zodiak Flint watched it he had a sudden urge to sail all over them. His father used to be a sailor, until his ship was blown up. Ever since he was young, he wanted to avenge his father from the Notorious Black-Eyed Pete. Now was his chance with him holding the "sailors wanted" poster, at exactly the right age. He had made up his mind. "Ahoy! My name's Zodiak Flint and I want to be a pirate," Zodiak said. “ Well, first things first, it’s to become a pirate. You do appear to be the right age and you are lucky enough to be the last person to be able to sign up. So jump on in!” Yelled the man. As Zodiak made his way up to the plank leading into the ship another man appeared. “All ready, Captain Shanks?” Obviously the man down there was Captain Shanks. “Aye, second man. As I have already told you, you are only second man. To everybody, you’re second man. Savvy?” Asked Captain Shanks. “Aye, Captain,” replied the man and disappeared behind the door to a room titled: Second Man Cabin. Zodiak hurried up the plank to find himself on an enormous ship inscribed with the words “ Sailors Depths”. It appeared to be covering something behind it, but Zodiak paid it no attention. He turned to listen to the captain as he climbed up the plank. “ Coursed Seagulls. Blast one in the head I will. Oh yes, all to your positions! Zodiak, you control the cannons, well you know, just in case. Now! WE SET SAIL!” Bellowed the captain while some men clapped and cheered. “ Uh, Sir. Don’t you think we should know the direction we are going in?” asked a man. “Aye, Flitburt. We will be going in the direction of the sea. It appears to be going north, yes,” replied the captain. “ But sir, that’s South...” Fliburt tried to reply but his captain started in a fit of: “No no! I know the way!” also with a bit of “ SHUT UP FLIBURT!” and accompanied by “ I know what I’m doing.”. The ship began moving in the direction of Africa. It was a long journey until Captain Shanks called a meeting. "Ahoy, my crew. I have something to say. This is not a sailor's ship. We own the seas as pirates," Captain Shanks smirked with a devilish face. " You lied to us Captain! DIE YOU FILTHY PIRATE!" Flitburt ran straight at the Captain, his sword in hand, slashed at the captain's head. Captain Shanks ducked, unbelievably quickly, and took a blow to Flitburt in the stomach. He was quickly sent off the ship. " Anybody else want to argue?" The captain bellowed. Some people jumped off the ship as a Navy sailor shipped pass, only thinking as it is another fellow sailing ship. Pretty soon they shall no the truth. Everybody left except Zodiak, Vivian Wisk, Billy Bobble, and Stanley Flipster. " Sir, as a pirate I know an enemy. I need to get him, to avenge my father as the sailor he was! You might know him because they told me he sent two of Captain something's men to Davy Jones Locker. Is it true sir?" Zodiak began. " Ye all wrong! Mr. Flint was a cold-blooded pirate!" he bellowed. " I don't believe you" "Believe it. So who is the man you are trying to get? " Somebody by the name of One-Eyed Pete, Captain" Zodiak explained. This caused a few gasps by the other crew members, but captain shanks only came up with a ' WHAT KIND OF PIRATES ARE YOU??? TOUGHEN UP!'. Instead the captain looked at Zodiak and said," Actually, that pirate has something I want too. Something by the name of the sword of slaying. The one that killed your father, dear boy. Aye, I know it well. Killed over a million people in its past. Very dangerous weapon, you have to agree. One-Eyed Pete might be no good name for a pirate, but its true and he sure knows how to use that sword of his. Deadly man..." The captain became quiet but kept going after," Killed my... my.... my father....." There was a short pause, until somebody screamed. " IT'S HIM! IT'S HIM! HELP US! LOAD THE CANNONS! TAKE HIM OUT!"
Chapter 2: One-Eyed Pete's arrival!
The black ship rolled up to the so called " Sailors Depth". " PIRATES! I SHALL SPARE YOUR LIVES IF YOU GIVE ME WHAT I WANT!" yelled One-Eyed Pete. " I knew this day would come..." whispered Captain Shanks. "What's he talking about, Captain Shanks?" Zodiak asked. Without answering, Captain Shanks ran and jumped off the ship, disappearing under the water. " HAHAHAHA! SO YOU DECIDED TO GIVE YOURSELF UP, HEY SHANKS? HAHAHAHAHAHA!" Pete yelled. There was a big sound, as if a gun had been shot. Wait, not as if, one had. Red blood came swimming up to the top of the water, and the opposing ship sailed away. " Captain Shanks.... Gave his life for us...." said Vivian Wisk, with a tear crawling down her teeth. " Aye, maybe he did, maybe he did not," said a voice behind a pillar. It carried on, " Even the best pirates can be tricked, don't believe everything your eyes will see,". Captain Shanks stepped out from behind the pillar. There was a yelp from Vivian, but all Stanley Flipster did was smile knowingly. "It was a robot, Dear Children. HA! He'll be back though, when he finds out." Said the Captain. " Aye captain. I knew all along. I actually smiled when I saw the blood up, thinking about how badly you tricked him. Let me guess, it was ketchup?" Explained Stanley. " Actually, no it wasn't. He would've known if it was ketchup. I let Flitburt cut at a bit of me head, cause ing blood to fall into the bucket behind me. I sensed that Pete was on his way, so I sent out a robot, and I was controlling and talking through a microphone. That's why I didn't come floating back up. To tell you the truth, I released the blood before he shot. The blood made it to the top right when he was sailing off. It was perfectly planned," The captain said. He kept going," He still thinks that I'm dead, so we should travel in the opposite direction he came from, how we shall do it, I don't know," He finished. " And where would that be, Captain?," asked Billy Bobble. " Antarctica, my dear boy. How? I have no idea. We'll just have to cope with it now, wont we?" he asked. Only one person said "Aye" but all the others looked at him as if he'd gone mad. So they set off, to the sea of Antarctica. "Captain, I have just one more question," Zodiak confronted the Captain. " What would that be, Mate?" Asked the Captain. "I would want to know the name of this, humble, ship," said Zodiak.
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