GalaxyIII
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| 08 Nov 2014 08:00 AM |
[Intro] [N] Who are you? fake shady?
[Verse] Kid, your the shadow on the wall. Your my shadow when I Go shopping at the mall. [N] Your a shadow when we started filming the call. Your the shadow, when you saw Nick Foles fumble the ball. When i enter the streets, your a shadow. What do you do? When you walk you get beat up in by a gang. And when i walk in the street you here "Bang bang" Stop trying to get drunk. Thats how the titanic sunk. And thats exactly why your a shadow skunk. [Tribute to M4 To make me do this for saying he can put up anything better than me]
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| 08 Nov 2014 08:06 AM |
| Tribute to me? What did I do? |
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| 08 Nov 2014 08:06 AM |
"Tribute to M4 To make me do this for saying he can put up anything better than me"
I can and always had. |
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GalaxyIII
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| Joined: 26 Apr 2013 |
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| 08 Nov 2014 08:15 AM |
You read it wrong . i meant when u said i cant rhyme. But were tied so why care? |
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| 08 Nov 2014 08:22 AM |
| You actually rhymed, but who said we were tied? I been beat you. |
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TruH4WK13
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| 08 Nov 2014 08:23 AM |
| Tied........ I have to disagree. Btw why are diss tracks so short? |
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GalaxyIII
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| 08 Nov 2014 08:27 AM |
| m4 i rap battled you and won like 5-1? ask Indie, or Chanel G. @Truu cuz i didnt try in dis i just threw in couple rhymes |
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| 08 Nov 2014 08:34 AM |
@galaxy, ok for one thing, you only beat me ONCE. and at the shelter. but that was cuz it was my first time doing that against someone in-game. I forgot who you were so I couldn't think of anything to say. at least I actually RHYMED.
I've beat you more times, now you shut yo mouth. |
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Icyclez
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| Joined: 01 Mar 2013 |
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| 08 Nov 2014 08:45 AM |
For a diss, this is too short. Not to mention for example here:
Kid, your the shadow on the wall. Your my shadow when I Go shopping at the mall. [N] Your a shadow when we started filming the call. Your the shadow, when you saw Nick Foles fumble the ball.
The amount of rhyme repeat here wasn't equal to the rest. In fact, the rest were less.
Work harder. 4/10
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| 08 Nov 2014 09:47 AM |
| Just plain horrible. If you can't do better than what Keyyon put out you should know that you need to work on your everything. Cringed. I don't even want to criticize Keyyon's with a post after seeing this garbage. |
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| 08 Nov 2014 11:27 AM |
"Btw why are diss tracks so short?"
Idk man. Disses should be at least as long as my verse in Freedom OF Speech. |
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Wobull
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| 08 Nov 2014 11:28 AM |
| This is as horrendous as keyyon's diss |
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Xunap
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| 08 Nov 2014 01:13 PM |
more 10 year olds trying to diss each other with raps so pathetic |
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