Wobull
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| 07 Nov 2014 10:45 PM |
Hook: I put the trap to every name in the game They try to stand out but they all the same There ain't no culture, it's what they want you to be This is what you think when you're W-Trappy
Verse 1: Trapped in a virtual world where people don't even like me Where I left my physical connections in agony Don't know how I'm made up, I need to study anatomy And now tipping to the side like I'm on the balcony They keep telling me I need improvement when they ain't better Guess it's just another pretty boy movement and he's the trend setter If I don't make it out alive, see that I sent some letters Made some sacrifices but the prize is an overused rhyme lecture I'm starting my own legacy, not just another cheap name Some vacancy so now the domain I've never claimed I take the blame For the wrong doings we the people together should attain I'd have to pretend to be a certain person to have me sustained Now can I compare just a simple game to reality Did I pay for the fare, no I just tried to have originality I'm a different person now maybe not a similarity Getting off of the maze, but I'm just taking a rest temporarily So extraordinare that they look at me a lil' ordinary
Hook: I put the trap to every name in the game They try to stand out but they all the same There ain't no culture, it's what they want you to be This is what you think when you're W-Trappy
Verse 2: I don't have to be lyrical cause you people wouldn't notice But ain't being modest, I'm just stating the diagnosis These so called strongest is actually one of the damn lowest Can't do nothing like when promised he'd be a soloist I'd rather fall out cause no one's gonna pick me up Sorry to interrupt but it was just abrupt Then I can't rhyme because I'm half asleep and half f[ked Sorry mom but I got a B in my conduct Excuse me to disrupt, fitting to my relocation Trying to reconstruct, we should start a corroboration This ain't no constellation, this is real propagation They're trying to assimilate me and my population Y'all are now getting wounded knees cause this a massacre You'd be doomed history, jot it down your calendar A tomb mystery, they'd be crying rivers of misery This my last stand, maybe even my last victory
Outro: Last victory, heh. Only if I ever won. |
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| 08 Nov 2014 05:17 AM |
| "I'm starting my own legacy, not just another cheap name" Heard this before, just that line.. |
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Wobull
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| 08 Nov 2014 06:52 AM |
I'm sorry if you don't like it, because this is obviously not for good rates. Just trying to put words out of my mind. |
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| 08 Nov 2014 07:01 AM |
| even so, I still give this thing a 9.5/10 |
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Wobull
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| 08 Nov 2014 07:06 AM |
Dev, I haven't, but where did you find it?
Thanks, though, M4. |
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| 08 Nov 2014 07:18 AM |
| I think i heard it from Snoop..like week ago, he quoted someone, oh and i give it 8/10. :) |
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Wobull
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| 08 Nov 2014 07:21 AM |
| I don't think so, I read all of Snoopy's ro-raps. |
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| 08 Nov 2014 07:24 AM |
| He said it in game, not in song, he was quoting some rorapper/rapper.. :) |
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Wobull
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| 08 Nov 2014 07:26 AM |
| So, someone alreadt had that line on a song? |
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| 08 Nov 2014 07:27 AM |
| Maye, idk, i think it was ro-rapper Legacy. |
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TruH4WK13
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| 08 Nov 2014 07:47 AM |
I thought it was a sneak diss to Legacy...
9/10 |
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Wobull
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| 08 Nov 2014 08:08 AM |
Thanks.
Anymore rates/suggestions?
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Wobull
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| 08 Nov 2014 10:22 AM |
Verse 1 felt more on track
"I'm starting my own legacy, not just another cheap name Some vacancy so now the domain I've never claimed" is probably the best line
91/100 |
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Indiella
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| 08 Nov 2014 10:51 AM |
| I feel like you used rhyme dictionary for this.. |
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Wobull
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| 08 Nov 2014 10:53 AM |
Nah, it's words from my History vocabulary They're not really big words, but give me an example. |
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| 08 Nov 2014 10:55 AM |
| If I would too make raps it would be from you inspiring me to do so with your lyrics -claps 9/10 |
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Indiella
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| 08 Nov 2014 10:55 AM |
"corroboration"
I just feel like a 12 year old wouldn't know what this meant. |
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Wobull
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| 08 Nov 2014 10:55 AM |
| I'm taking advanced classes |
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