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EchoDuplicate is not online. EchoDuplicate
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07 Nov 2014 10:08 PM
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squidboi2 is not online. squidboi2
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07 Nov 2014 10:08 PM
a solid c
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squidboi2 is not online. squidboi2
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07 Nov 2014 10:10 PM
c+?
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Cloudruin is not online. Cloudruin
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07 Nov 2014 10:11 PM
not gonna lie, it could be better.
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EchoDuplicate is not online. EchoDuplicate
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Fauxtillion is not online. Fauxtillion
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07 Nov 2014 10:12 PM
hey squid

its a B+ at worst meanie
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ParaShock is not online. ParaShock
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07 Nov 2014 10:13 PM
why not parashock

- ♛ ParaShock, Knight of Oberon and Graphic Designer | Live for the shield, serve under the sword.
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EchoDuplicate is not online. EchoDuplicate
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Fauxtillion is not online. Fauxtillion
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07 Nov 2014 10:16 PM
ik

i say that because ur a b list celebrity
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EchoDuplicate is not online. EchoDuplicate
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Fauxtillion is not online. Fauxtillion
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07 Nov 2014 10:17 PM
i am sorry sir

i did not mean to displease swoot toot
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07 Nov 2014 10:18 PM
c
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Cloudruin is not online. Cloudruin
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07 Nov 2014 10:24 PM
it's too generic,

it only says japan on the ad,

it doesn't say anything that would cause another to click it,

it doesn't bring much curiosity unless it was their first time seeing it,

doesn't say anything about the group other than it is japan,

the art design is pretty decent,

but you need to add the little details that make the ad come together into a worthwhile investment.
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Solotaire is not online. Solotaire
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07 Nov 2014 10:26 PM
+the background resembling the flag of japan is clever
-too dark of a grey
-the font for "ECHO" doesn't look great
+the robloxian and red circle command attention very effectively
-it takes too long for the viewer to know what the ad is for (attention starts at the circle to the right of the robloxian, goes to the robloxian, and then has to wander to the top left corner)

solid c
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ArmedSurvivor is not online. ArmedSurvivor
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07 Nov 2014 10:27 PM
It's okay.
But you could make it way better.
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07 Nov 2014 10:30 PM
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kyle90038 is not online. kyle90038
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07 Nov 2014 10:37 PM
good for japan
needs more japanese stuff
ramen and anime will do
also kawaii girls
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Solotaire is not online. Solotaire
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07 Nov 2014 11:20 PM
you are 100% correct that using the letter grade was just copying squid
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Obtention is not online. Obtention
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07 Nov 2014 11:28 PM
Add a mushroom cloud in the background and it'll be perfect
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Obtention is not online. Obtention
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07 Nov 2014 11:31 PM
Or a tsunami
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Solotaire is not online. Solotaire
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07 Nov 2014 11:31 PM
let's compromise and put in a mushroom tsunami
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07 Nov 2014 11:32 PM
Solotaire :)
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