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squidboi2
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Cloudruin
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| 07 Nov 2014 10:11 PM |
| not gonna lie, it could be better. |
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| 07 Nov 2014 10:12 PM |
hey squid
its a B+ at worst meanie |
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ParaShock
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| 07 Nov 2014 10:13 PM |
why not parashock
- ♛ ParaShock, Knight of Oberon and Graphic Designer | Live for the shield, serve under the sword. |
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| 07 Nov 2014 10:16 PM |
ik
i say that because ur a b list celebrity |
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| 07 Nov 2014 10:17 PM |
i am sorry sir
i did not mean to displease swoot toot |
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Cloudruin
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| 07 Nov 2014 10:24 PM |
it's too generic,
it only says japan on the ad,
it doesn't say anything that would cause another to click it,
it doesn't bring much curiosity unless it was their first time seeing it,
doesn't say anything about the group other than it is japan,
the art design is pretty decent,
but you need to add the little details that make the ad come together into a worthwhile investment. |
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Solotaire
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| 07 Nov 2014 10:26 PM |
+the background resembling the flag of japan is clever -too dark of a grey -the font for "ECHO" doesn't look great +the robloxian and red circle command attention very effectively -it takes too long for the viewer to know what the ad is for (attention starts at the circle to the right of the robloxian, goes to the robloxian, and then has to wander to the top left corner)
solid c |
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| 07 Nov 2014 10:27 PM |
It's okay. But you could make it way better. |
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kyle90038
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| 07 Nov 2014 10:37 PM |
good for japan needs more japanese stuff ramen and anime will do also kawaii girls |
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Solotaire
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| 07 Nov 2014 11:20 PM |
| you are 100% correct that using the letter grade was just copying squid |
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Obtention
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| 07 Nov 2014 11:28 PM |
| Add a mushroom cloud in the background and it'll be perfect |
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Obtention
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Solotaire
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| 07 Nov 2014 11:31 PM |
| let's compromise and put in a mushroom tsunami |
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ISOLAYTOR
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