REUD
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| 30 Oct 2014 03:03 AM |
Sandiamond and KingconXII were driving through a wooded empty section of highway on the Isle of Kaeru. They needed to transport these new guns from Fort Kaeru to the new fort in time for the grand opening. Lightning flashed, thunder roared, the sky went dark in the torrential downpour. “We’d better stop,” said colonel Sandiamond. Commander Kingcon nodded his head in agreement. He stepped on the brake, and suddenly the truck started to slide on the slick pavement. They plunged off the road and slid to a halt at the bottom of an incline. Pale and shaking, Kingcon quickly turned to check if Sandiamond was all right. When he nodded, Kingcon relaxed and looked through the rain soaked windows.
“I’m going to see how bad it is,” he told Sandiamond, and when out into the storm. He saw King's blurry figure in the headlight, walking around the front of the car. A moment later, he jumped in beside Sandi, soaking wet. “The car’s not badly damaged, but we’re wheel-deep in mud,” he said. “I’m going to have to go for help.” Sandiamond swallowed nervously. There would be no quick rescue here. He told Sandi to turn off the headlights and lock the doors until he returned. The Kaeru phantom. Although King hadn’t said the name aloud, they both knew what he had been thinking when he told Sandi to lock the truck. This was the place where a man had once taken a machete and hacked his friend to death in a jealous rage over an alleged affair. Supposedly, the machete-wielding spirit of the murderer continued to haunt this section of the road.
Outside the car, Sandi heard a shriek, a loud thump, and a strange gurgling noise. But he couldn’t see anything in the darkness. Frightened, he shrank down into his seat. He sat in silence for a while, and then he noticed another sound. Thump. Thump. Thump. It was a soft sound, like something being blown by the wind. Suddenly, the truck was illuminated by a bright light. An official sounding voice told him to get out of the truck. Kingcon must have found a police officer. Sandiamond unlocked the door and stepped out of the truck. As his eyes adjusted to the bright light, he saw it. Hanging by his feet from the tree next to the car was the dead body of KingconXII. His throat had been cut so deeply that he was nearly decapitated. The wind swung his corpse back and forth so that it thumped against the tree. Thump. Thump. Thump.
Sandiamond screamed and ran toward the voice and the light. As he drew close, he realised the light was not coming from a flashlight. Standing there was the glowing figure of a man with a grin on his face and a large, solid, and definitely real machete in his hands. Sandiamond backed away from the glowing figure until he bumped into the car. “Playing around when my back was turned?” the ghost whispered, stroking the sharp blade of the machete with his fingers. “You’ve been very naughty!”
The last thing Sandiamond saw was the glint of the machete in the eerie, incandescent light. |
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Cysira
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REUD
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| 30 Oct 2014 03:21 AM |
first word > boring
not reading |
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REUD
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| 30 Oct 2014 03:38 AM |
says an idiot newbag called "Scalvus"
"Scalvus"
need i go on? |
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REUD
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| 30 Oct 2014 04:25 AM |
why do u need a tdlr for a short story
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REUD
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| 30 Oct 2014 05:26 AM |
| then the machete would have to be a carrot |
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| 30 Oct 2014 05:27 AM |
| The ghost has very similar characteristic's to that of Colonel Master3395??? |
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REUD
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| 30 Oct 2014 05:55 AM |
| Woah, like a real writer... gg, thumbs up from me. Nice story! |
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| 30 Oct 2014 07:29 AM |
| Wow 5 stars you had me leaning on this one. |
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| 30 Oct 2014 12:25 PM |
| hah geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy |
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Teow
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| 30 Oct 2014 12:28 PM |
| "Pale and shaking, Kingcon quickly turned to check if Sandiamond was all right." ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |
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| 30 Oct 2014 01:00 PM |
This sentence creeps me out
"Playing around when my back was turned?” the ghost whispered, stroking the sharp blade of the machete with his fingers. “You’ve been very naughty!”
Why is he stroking a machete? What does he mean by "Naughty"?
This part...
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| 30 Oct 2014 02:42 PM |
"Standing there was the glowing figure of a man with a grin on his face and a large, solid"
PHRASING. |
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REUD
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| 30 Oct 2014 02:58 PM |
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REUD
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| 30 Oct 2014 03:00 PM |
i would fall asleep if i read this
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| 30 Oct 2014 03:36 PM |
| https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5GgflscOmW8 LIVING LIKE LARRY |
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| 30 Oct 2014 09:36 PM |
| why is everyone voting for a 1 chapter story. it took me days to put mine together ;( |
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