Pen54321
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| 31 Oct 2014 07:37 PM |
I have this idea for a quest storyline. A quest storyline is when a bunch of quests happens in chronological order to make a story.
STORY:
You are a member of the Frastini Family, a family of wizards that have been hunted down by the Sovagrads. You are were raised by your grandmother because your dad, Revern Frastini, one of the greatest wizards of the Frastini Family, have been killed, while your mother has been presume dead. Once you become 18, you started doing quests.
QUEST STORYLINE: 1. The Forgotten Letter
You have been asked to find some resources for your family since the Sovagrads have been slowly tightening their grip on the Frastini Family. You find this cart that was filled to the brim with resources. You begin to leave until you find out that a letter was on it. You find out that their is a person that you know that wrote that letter. You go to her and finds out that she has been looking for the person she wrote the letter to. So you and her go looking for him.
2. Not What It Seems...
As you go looking for clues, people start telling you that the woman that you are at is a known Frastini hunter. So you started to investigate.
3. Close Call
She finds out that no one is the village she lives know who this man is, so you, with her, go out to a nearby village. As you go off you see this small ravine above you. As you go across it, a rock almost kills you both. They escape, but you see that a group of thieves pushed the rock.
4. Surprise
She takes you to a inn so you guys can rest. She then tells you that she is your mother, and you are overwhelmed with emotions. You ask her why you left the Frastini Family. She answers by saying she killed your father. You ask why, and she reply by saying that she found out what the Frastini Family has done to the Sovagrads. Then you get knocked out by a Sovagrad guard. The last thing you see before you succumb to the knockout is your mother looking at you while more guards come to the room.
5. Imprisonment
You go to prison and you await your execution. The day before you die from the execution, the Frastini Family raided the prison and free you and your fellow prisoners. You go into hiding and await the takeover of the Sovagrad Empire...
Post suggestions on the storyline so far.
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| 31 Oct 2014 07:40 PM |
| Too long to make TLDR version. :/ |
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| 31 Oct 2014 07:48 PM |
To be honest, it was nice in the beginning. Once it got half way, it became bad.
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| 31 Oct 2014 10:21 PM |
um the ending got a little boring think of this bold beginning mighty middle exciting end
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| 31 Oct 2014 10:27 PM |
also while your at it try to make it better
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