Indiella
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| 28 Oct 2014 06:52 PM |
Although I don't listen to Becky G, I found her chorus in her song "Problem" ft. Will.I.Am very catchy and chose to use the beat of my chorus to hers. Also, the hook is very repetitive, I know. :P Pay Day, Song 4. --------------------------- [Intro (faded)] - "Yo, c'mere, look at these stacks I just made. - Ain't nobody around here make this much" = "Put that away, you're gonna get robbed if you keep flashin' it around!" - "I can't! Who can hide these dollar signs?"
[Hook] I got these dollar signs, dollar signs Dollar signs, dollar signs (Oh boy I got these,) Dollar signs, dollar signs, dollar signs, dollar signs These [n]s want these Dollar signs, dollar signs, dollar signs, dollar signs
[Verse 1] They call me Indiella Selling rhymes like the dealer, Makin' money off this profit, When I count it, I'm eager Feeling rich, oh the leisure Conquer like Julius Caesar All y'all want is the money, So I call you Ebenezer I-I-I'm makin' a prophecy My profit is all they see They don't see that I'm honestly Just a real rap prodigy Call me old school like the colonies They mistake me for just another wannabe I'm writing these songs, but I wish you could hear me audibly I mean, I've got so many raps, call it a novelty It's now in stores, outsellin' the Odyssey Though money shouldn't control us, it's a real oddity People 'round the world spendin' their money cautiously Y'all lucky you got money, y'all should be probably Realizin' you're blessed instead of beggin' for quantity
[Chorus] What designer clothes do you wear, What types of cars do you own? Were you born here or there, What did it cost for your phone? All of these questions, I already know They all want these...
[Hook] I got these dollar signs, dollar signs Dollar signs, dollar signs (Oh boy I got these,) Dollar signs, dollar signs, dollar signs, dollar signs These [n]s want these Dollar signs, dollar signs, dollar signs, dollar signs
[Verse 2] Throw that money in the air, it's pay day Spend it on some [s] like we eatin' Pei Wei Blow 20 bucks, here's your meal, enjoy your entree All y'all bluffin' when you stuffin' yourself with chow mein I mean I see these clouds but I know it'll never rain Drvggies blowin' dollars slingin' crxck, maybe a lil' co-ca1ne Ever since y'all paid, you ain't actin' nearly the same I can tell y'all think it's a joke, some type a game Money 'causes nothing except the feel of power I'll unplug y'all REAL quick, you turnin' sour I hear the thunder, might sprinkle, never shower They in they castle, in their 20 somethin' bedroom Like royalty, White Castle burgers ain't on the menu [B] more high maintenence, steak or lobster will do I'm sayin, these [b]s want a real revenue
[Chorus] What did it cost for your hair, How much money can I loan? Did you get this at Claire's, I really want my own All of these questions, I already know They all want these... (fades)
[Chorus x2 (first time slow)] What designer clothes do you wear, What types of cars do you own? Were you born here or born there, What did it cost for your phone? All of these questions, I already know They all want these...
[Outro (faded)] = "Aye aye aye, you lookin' like an easy come-up if you keep that stash on you..." - "Boy quit playin', y'all KNOW you can't make this much, not even if you were handed a silver spoon." |
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| 28 Oct 2014 07:01 PM |
It's alright I guess.
Time I make it rain XD |
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| 28 Oct 2014 07:50 PM |
| This is not you're best! I'd give it a 6.2/10 |
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Indiella
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| 28 Oct 2014 09:40 PM |
| I know this isn't my best, it's a filler song for the album. |
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| 29 Oct 2014 05:36 AM |
| yahh u see dem dollar signs when you get dat allowance yo |
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Wobull
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| 29 Oct 2014 05:58 AM |
"Throw that money in the air, it's pay day Spend it on some [s] like we eatin' Pei Wei"
Aye, I'm down. Real hungry |
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Icyclez
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| 29 Oct 2014 06:00 AM |
Keep this, make an actual demo out of it, send it to labels, etc.
Flashing it around here... I don't know, but still impressive.
10/10 and best of luck getting some actual irl cash :) |
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Indiella
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| 29 Oct 2014 04:35 PM |
| Lol, thanks for the ratings y'all! |
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