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| 24 Oct 2014 11:43 AM |
[V1]: Moses is to part seas As I am to part beats/ They say I'm part human, But I'm Art - I mean all beast/ ..A messenger with no less Than in depth soliloquies/ Rest assured, I'll have these Farces cease/ And it's no surprise, I see through guise with the Wisest out of three eyes/ False prophets proclaiming Blue grass with green skies/ Their true intent a remnant In which screams 'DIE'/ And true faith is when you Hear truth but esteem lies/
(Welcome to the end times!)
[V2]: "The end is near", etched Into the cardboard/ Held by your local hobo Yelling, "This you should Prepare for!"/ As for knowledge, it's no Contest.. You starve more/ ..That emphasis more solid Than a car door/ They call them crazy and hide it From the public/ The masses are too enthralled by Beamer, Bentley, and Cutlass/ Alongside the media blaring You must that, and must this/ Honestly you can't comprehend What the fuss is../ Or when it'll all just end/
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Chaarusu
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| 24 Oct 2014 01:10 PM |
| Feel free to give criticism, feedback, rate, or what have you.. |
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| 24 Oct 2014 02:58 PM |
| Pretty decent.. The first verse was pretty disgusting but it came back good. |
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| 24 Oct 2014 03:02 PM |
It's bimmer and Cutlass' are awful |
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| 24 Oct 2014 03:09 PM |
| I know it's Bimmer, autocorrect botched it. :( |
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| 24 Oct 2014 03:39 PM |
Oh Why did you mention a Cutlass alongside those luxury vehicles though, was it intended? |
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| 24 Oct 2014 03:56 PM |
| Cutlass for the lower class to marvel at. |
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Indiella
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| 24 Oct 2014 04:01 PM |
| Jordan, do you happen to be Jordan39? |
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Aetion
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| 26 Oct 2014 12:18 PM |
| Thanks for the welcome, and from here on the raps will only get better.. |
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