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| 19 Oct 2014 01:36 PM |
Created by: SoarinApple Chapter 1: It Followed Me Home I was on a ship back to the Arcadian Stronghold after a raid on Swampy Moon Outpost, or “Pyro” as others would say. I can’t bare the smell of corpses that pollute the troop transport ship. I can’t smell at all now… “You okay…?” said iZetrox. “I’m fine, just tired.” I replied rather miserably. “Okay.” iZetrox pulled out a small glass of liquor, chugging it all down in one go. He sighs and throws the empty bottle out of the ship. Now the strong smell of al__hol filled my nostrils, my eyes started to water up. “Are you oh-kai *hiccup* or nawwwwwt..?!” iZetrox said while intoxicated. “Zec, you’re dr___, be quiet…” “You kan’t tell meh wot to doo..” “How the hell are you even drunk in one gulp of an entire l_q__r bottle?” I said. He only looked at me with his left eye half way opened and his right eye completely shut. He simply smiled and said “Ah have swaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaag…” , burping after he said that. I rolled my eyes and just stared out into the mountain side, where our Stronghold was right beyond. Finally we reached our destination and set up defenses on the wall, and cave east of the base. I stare off into the mountains, hoping to see the sun set. Instead there is a pair of red eyes looking straight at me. At first I thought it was an animal, then I its arms and legs move around. Could it be? Was it a Vaktovian? Impossible. I took at my Reaper-7 and aimed straight at my target. I fire only a couple shots to lower my weapon’s recoil and hopefully improve my accuracy while I was at it. “What the hell are you shooting at Initiate?” Rodger said yelling his lungs out and staring at me. “Uh…” I look back to see if the eyes were still there, and they weren’t. I must of got it. “J-Just some target p-practice, sir.” … “Mhmm…” I wonder, why is there only one Vaktovian, or whatever it was staring at me. Only thing to do now is to check it out, and miss training…
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| 19 Oct 2014 01:38 PM |
uh oh forgot to censor something in one of the character's line.... qq
pls dont ban me ;-;
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| 19 Oct 2014 01:40 PM |
| what the hell are you shooting at, initiate |
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| 19 Oct 2014 01:40 PM |
ty
small error, but ty
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| 19 Oct 2014 01:43 PM |
qq pls no robl0x ily
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| 19 Oct 2014 01:47 PM |
uh wot
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| 19 Oct 2014 01:47 PM |
| calm down m8 this subforum is hardly patrolled and most you might get is a warning |
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| 19 Oct 2014 01:49 PM |
i was all ready banned for a day in the past, i dont want to get a 3 day qq
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| 19 Oct 2014 01:51 PM |
i found the vaktovian in the mountains
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| 19 Oct 2014 01:51 PM |
| i doubt you'll be 3 day banned for this, especially if some time has passed since your last ban |
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| 19 Oct 2014 01:54 PM |
u wanna be in the story? then pm me m8
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| 19 Oct 2014 01:55 PM |
| why do i have pm, cant i just post |
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| 19 Oct 2014 01:56 PM |
i say pm bcoz i feel speshul
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| 19 Oct 2014 01:57 PM |
| ok but if i am not in the next story i will sue you for 1k robux |
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| 19 Oct 2014 02:00 PM |
lolok xddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
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| 19 Oct 2014 02:06 PM |
you don't get drunk that fast not from one bottle
otherwise, it's intriguing. satisfactory work. |
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| 19 Oct 2014 02:07 PM |
huehuehue
#TGIdrinks
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| 19 Oct 2014 02:10 PM |
| add me as a noob that falls outta a transport ship/building/fort's walls and need to get healed |
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| 19 Oct 2014 02:13 PM |
maybe
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| 19 Oct 2014 02:39 PM |
this is good but i want to be in it pls |
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| 19 Oct 2014 02:43 PM |
| Don't censor things and don't use usernames. |
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