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Re: "One maniac at a time, we will take it back..."

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maddie201 is not online. maddie201
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18 Oct 2014 10:47 PM
p l o t

Welcome to Cutter's Ridge, a small, government-controlled town out in the middle of freaking nowhere. I know what you're thinking. "Aren't most cities 'government-controlled' in some sense?" "Where is this?" "What is this even about?"

Okay, to answer the first question: This town is different. If you came, you'd understand, but you can't enter without having...special properties. Here's a hint: It's just about a second Area 51, but not as very closely monitored from the outside, and it doesn't specialize in aliens or whatever kind of bullcrap they keep locked up there. You'll see what I mean later on, that is, if you bother to read the whole damn thing.

To the second question? Here's the answer: Somewhere in Oregon, maybe. Or Idaho. No one's really sure in this town. All they know is that they were shipped there, unconscious in some cases. All they know is that it's isolated, desolated, and cut off from most connections to the outside world.

The third question? How about you find out and keep reading. Yeah? Okay.


Okay, listen up. Cutter's Ridge. Somewhere in the northwest American states. Unusual town. Second Area 51. Severely government-controlled. Got that part down, right? How 'bout this one?

This town is for killers. Only killers, and usually massacre-kind of killers. Ones that don't seem to give up. Or stop. All they hunger for is their victim to fall to the ground, the scarlet pooling around their now limp and deadened corpse. No stopping them. Just kill, kill, kill.

Weird, right? Why lock 'em all up together? Keep 'em in an asylum! Death penalty! They could escape! Don't do this!

Too late.

Besides, if we had wanted to escape, don't cha think we would've gotten out already? It's hard as heck even trying. The Dome prevents us from exiting in any way, shape or form; it's probably thicker than a foot, and it's made of the strongest kind of Pexi-Glass made...or whatever the hell it is. Made to keep us in, and away from the public.

I think I can guess another question in your head that may prove that this government plan has faulty logic. "Can't they kill each other if there's no one else to kill?"

Yes and no.

Why?

'Cause we understand each other, in ways. We all have our reasons to kill-but we all have one thing in common, one way or another.

We enjoy it in some way.


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I guess it isn't that bad, though, this town. If you don't look to the Dome, the Security Walls, the possible cameras set up in your home, and the patrolling military officials that patrol almost all day, everyday, it's actually pretty decent. You're in a place where you're understood. You're fed, you're given a home. Your own house(unless things get tough and crowded-you gotta get a roommate), your own belongings, and it actually acts similar to a normal town. There's markets and such, for all kinds of things.

Oh, and another thing. Wondering about the market kind of thing? "How can you buy stuff with no money?"

Well, you can get a job somewhere in the town, and we have these cards, called BBCCs-Behavioral-Based Credit Cards-and we get "money" if we act correctly and correspond to the laws of the town, and well, not get in fights with others, militia, patrols, or even your darn neighbor...maybe even offer some community service. Act good, and you might as well be rich. Somewhat. In a way. Not really. Not in this town.

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Okay, darn, a bit too much talking coming from one person, eh? My throat hurts a bit; I'm not used to running my mouth like this. I usually let some of the older guys or girls introduce rookies around here, but some of them were being a bit freaking lazy.

Point blank is: Welcome, kid. Get over it. You're not leaving anytime soon. Feel free to ask if there are anymore questions.

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Okay! There was the introduction for you. I'll just need to go over some simple things, and then this RP can get started! Read the next post for the rules.
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maddie201 is not online. maddie201
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18 Oct 2014 10:51 PM
One: Follow all Roblox site rules, if you would please.

Two: At least be Semi-Advanced in your roleplaying. By this, I only ask that you do no "one-liners", and use proper grammar, which includes correct spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and usage of words. A few mistakes here and there are completely acceptable, but if it happens frequently...I don't know, it's just a serious pet peeve of mine. Just promise me you'll roleplay correctly, okay?

Three: Please not too much powerplaying. Absolutely no killing without permission. If this happens, either fix it in one way, or I will have to ask you to leave.

Four: You can be any killer you wish to be. Existent, from a movie or book, or just your own imagination, be it! I have no problems with it! In fact, I encourage it.

Five: If one person does not reply for a while, this may be because they feel left out of the roleplay. Bring them on in! And don't ignore other people's actions. If it's typed, it's typed and set in stone. Be sure to read the posts posted before you just so you can keep within the roleplay.

Six: This also adds onto Number five. A floodstop will be required if a few people request it, or if a person doesn't reply for a while. But, we will continue if they request so.

Seven: Try to keep it within the...human, category? Don't include all of these special powers and stuff, like controlling different things.

Eight: Don't fight via OOC. It's fine to keep OOC around, but make sure it's OOC-and-IC. I won't want(and other people as well) to suddenly go from roleplaying to talking about pineapples or your favorite foods or what happened today and such. Keep the RP in your posts!

Nine: Well, what can I say? Have fun! Thanks for reading the rules! And put "Dreams Become Nightmares" in the Other section of your form. Thank you!

Okay! Now time for a form to fill out! Next post below :p
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maddie201 is not online. maddie201
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18 Oct 2014 10:53 PM
Here is the form

<-- ::gєттιηg тσ кησω уσυ:: <--

Username/Screenname:
Nicknames? What would you like to be referred to?:
Any Specific Interests?:
What's Your Music Preference?:
Movie Genre Preferences?:
Book Genre Preferences?:
List Some Groups You Like!:
How Advanced Are You?[Somewhat/Semi/Advanced]:
Muse Level[1-10]:
Activity Level[1-10]:
What's Your Favorite Passtime?:
Anything Else About You?:


--> ::тнє νєяу ƒιяѕт тαѕтє:: -->

Character's Legal Name[optional]:
Character's Nickname, or the Name They're Known By:
Character's Appearance[can be details(inscription, but please be lengthy to some extent!), one or several pictures]:
Any Unusual Apparel?:
What Do They Normally Wear?:
Preferred Weapon Choice(s)?:
Any Kind of Saying/Slogan/Motto that they're known by?:
Favorite Method of Murder?:


--> ::α ѕтαв αт тнє нєαят:: <--

Personality[please be somewhat detailed!]:
Known History[optional, can post a link of the story if needed]:
Any Kinds Of Disorders?:
True Reason for Killing?:
First Victim?:
Family Status?:
Family Members?:
Any Kinds of Phobias/Fears?:
Reasons For Said Phobias/Fears?[optional]:
Friends?:
Acquaintances?:
Enemies?:
Likes?:
Dislikes?:
What Do They Usually Do Now?:

<-- ::мιѕ¢єℓℓαηєσυѕ:: -->

Anything...Special?[Crushes and/or Relationships?]:
Check for Roommate[Yes Or No, ask the person who's roleplaying the character you'd like to board in with first, though!]:
Anything Else You'd Like To Add?:
Other:
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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18 Oct 2014 10:55 PM
The Dome prevents us from exiting in any way, shape or form; it's probably thicker than a foot, and it's made of the strongest kind of Pexi-Glass made...or whatever the hell it is. Made to keep us in, and away from the public.

That...Is...The...Stupidest thing....
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maddie201 is not online. maddie201
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18 Oct 2014 11:01 PM
I have no ideas for how to describe what is in my mind. But I'm glad someone at least took the time to read it; most people usually skim the passages over and just join.
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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18 Oct 2014 11:06 PM
I have no ideas for how to describe what is in my mind. But I'm glad someone at least took the time to read it; most people usually skim the passages over and just join.

*Bows* You're very welcome. I'm such a nice fellow.
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PawzKat is not online. PawzKat
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18 Oct 2014 11:10 PM
Shorten the character sheet, miss, and you're good to go. :p
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maddie201 is not online. maddie201
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18 Oct 2014 11:15 PM
Oh is it too long? (I keep forgetting that this isn't like the other websites I RP on. I actually just copy and pasted this from one of my old threads xD)

Alright, I'll keep that in mind for if I make more threads on here. c:
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DaichiAkane is not online. DaichiAkane
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18 Oct 2014 11:16 PM
You are very nice and positive..

Mage, don't ruin this one.
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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18 Oct 2014 11:19 PM
You are very nice and positive..
Mage, don't ruin this one.

Bu...Bu...Plot holes...
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PawzKat is not online. PawzKat
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18 Oct 2014 11:19 PM
I know what you mean, Maddie, I did the exact same thing when I first started out here. You'll find that quite a few of us are unwillingly to fill out longer character sheets given laziness and lack of effort. Lol.

The standard character sheet would probably include something like this;

Name:
Gender:
Age:
Appearance:
Personality:
Biography:
Other:

Of course, seeing how everyone's roleplay requires a different amount of details, you can customize the format to your liking, perhaps adding something relevant to the killing? ^·^
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DaichiAkane is not online. DaichiAkane
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18 Oct 2014 11:21 PM
Bu...Bu...Plot holes...

Mage pls
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maddie201 is not online. maddie201
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18 Oct 2014 11:25 PM
Thank you~! @DaichiAkane

What do you mean by plotholes? Is there a way I could have made this thread better?

Lol I believe it. Most of the time I don't want to spend time on a form unless it's really interesting.

Okay, thank you for letting me know. Do you care if I use that form sometime? I'll add credit if you want @PawzKat
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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18 Oct 2014 11:27 PM
What do you mean by plotholes? Is there a way I could have made this thread better?

There is no way the government would waste taxpayer money to build a giant dome around a random town to trap prisoners. They'd haul them off to jail.
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PawzKat is not online. PawzKat
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18 Oct 2014 11:28 PM
Of course you can use it, Maddie. But it's not really my form, just the basic concept every one pretty much twists and uses on a whim. ^·^
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kingfish101 is not online. kingfish101
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18 Oct 2014 11:43 PM
well the simpsons did

especially when the president of the united states

is the terminator
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mageofpower is not online. mageofpower
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18 Oct 2014 11:44 PM
well the simpsons did
especially when the president of the united states
is the terminator

That was to stop the biohazardous waste within Springfield from spreading. (Plus that was a comedy movie.) This is just silly.
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kingfish101 is not online. kingfish101
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18 Oct 2014 11:47 PM
but still

the president

was the terminator
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Sahanke is not online. Sahanke
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19 Oct 2014 12:09 AM
Well, couldn't the Government have built a dome with murders, cameras and other things as part of a social experiment to test the bounds of those with convictions? Instead of being put into jail, they picked an alternative to jail time in which they have to live with others just like them in controlled society like the Vaults in Fall Out, for testing purposes.


And besides, plot holes are not a big deal, they can be fixed as the story goes on. Makes things juicy.


And marking.


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PickachuGirl is not online. PickachuGirl
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19 Oct 2014 12:11 AM
marked

i actually have sort of an idea of what to do for a character this time, I think. will probably start the character sheet tomorrow though))
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Laserbeak89 is not online. Laserbeak89
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19 Oct 2014 12:26 AM
i would fill out cs

but

morning

morning bad
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MrVincent is not online. MrVincent
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19 Oct 2014 02:50 AM
The title made me cringe.

I just love when people do this.

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Tailsdahfox136 is not online. Tailsdahfox136
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19 Oct 2014 04:16 AM
Hello there maddie! Welcom to the RP Forums, have your honorary welcoming sammich! :P

But, in a more serious note, try not to tick off soard or tim or someone like that cause they might get really butthurt and use this thread as their flame thread. Also, me, Pawz and kattnisskid are the three people who don't get into flame wars and try to keep the peace. Also, I agree with Pawz, shorten your CS a tad.

"Be a good girl and make me a sammich? *Turns into sammich*"
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kingfish101 is not online. kingfish101
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19 Oct 2014 04:18 AM
and im just that one guy
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Tailsdahfox136 is not online. Tailsdahfox136
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19 Oct 2014 04:20 AM
No, kingfish is with me, katt and Pawz. I don't think he's gotten into any flame wars yet.

"Be a good girl and make me a sammich? *Turns into sammich*"
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