Wobull
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| 14 Oct 2014 06:58 PM |
[Hook] Let's go home guys, the candle's no longer flaming Flame's now is rapidly fading I ain't hating I'm just putting on some shading Cause this dude wanted some degrading
[Verse 1] Fire is attempting to blaze the beef, but can't even heat the meat Fazed and dazed when he see me beatin' with my technique Sneak dissing me but I'll be hissing like I got snake blood from leaks You play football? Bet all your plays so far are incomplete Do you feel like having your ancestors come up from the burial Why not your damn father, I wanna have him see his son hysterical I'm still in the graveyard, no material can't keep me here dead Getting head from your ex cause I've really never died in the end If you even had a paycheck, you're probably using a diss maker When this ends, they all are gonna check you as a dismissed hater Lines looking like you're trying to hard to be a famous YouTube parodist Scoop the clutch and snoop it like I'm King Rose needing a nude thera[p]ist Pack up guys, I've already caught the body with just a fish hook Cause you just swallow the bait like you think you ain't being looked We now going closer, to the thrift so we'll trade for discs and some books Or should I stoop to your lower grade, or you understood?
[Hook] Let's go home guys, the candle's no longer flaming Flame's now is rapidly fading I ain't hating I'm just putting on some shading Cause this dude wanted some degrading
[Verse 2] I told some of my cats to read some of your good lines Oh wait, I don't have cats and you don't have any would read rhymes Wasting your time responding while you gaining some pounds Not lyrically though, irritably doesn't know how to pronounce You know what I'm saying? You tickle bombs and know I ain't talkin' Iraq If you was a little bit good, I would have dissed you in your track But you pissed like contracting external urethral sphincter then relax Internal pain and sufferings are all eternal, watch your back Don't get me started on how you was begging like you ret[]rded For just a collaboration, but lucky for you I'm halfhearted If not, I'd be heating the evaporation, still unguarded Let's not let you type anymore verses, let's try to make you guarded Are you now in the garden, praying and wishing That you wanna leave the burden by letting me lynching I'm slaughtering you already through the damn screen You're not even challenging, fragile like glass figurines
[Hook] Let's go home guys, the candle's no longer flaming Flame's now is rapidly fading I ain't hating I'm just putting on some shading Cause this dude wanted some degrading |
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Wobull
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| 14 Oct 2014 07:42 PM |
| I was listening to "Grindin" by Lil Wayne on repeat, therefore some of the cheesy lines. |
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nazair22
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nazair22
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| 14 Oct 2014 08:02 PM |
| "you don't have any would read rhymes" Fail spell XD |
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Wobull
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| 14 Oct 2014 08:04 PM |
Thanks naz.
Any more rates? |
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Wobull
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Wobull
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ducky980
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| 15 Oct 2014 02:16 PM |
youre getting better at the choruses
but get some of the SunFLo in your lyrics |
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Wobull
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| 15 Oct 2014 03:26 PM |
You're a great poet. Probably some of the most creative poetry I've ever seen. Sort of offensive, though. |
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Wobull
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| 15 Oct 2014 03:33 PM |
It's ro-rap dissing, it has to somehow offend the person I'm targeting. Thanks for the remark, though. |
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| 15 Oct 2014 04:11 PM |
| Poetry dissing? Sounds new! |
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| 15 Oct 2014 04:17 PM |
| It's rap not pure poetry so a bit diffrant but same idea with the ryhmeing and nice wobull i give it a 10 outta 10 |
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| 15 Oct 2014 04:52 PM |
Well, the poetry bait is worn out, I guess. 6/10. Serious answer. |
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