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| 14 Oct 2014 04:12 PM |
[Intro] What I told em man... I told that man he wouldn't last a day... The guy ain't nothin...just nothin... Tried to tell em...
[Hook] I tell ya it ain't nothin compared to it We had already been through it Havin to pity that fool, always broken as old Buicks I don't even gotta get down to it Think they ballin, just disgrace em too Just shows how bad they got it based on their IQ
[Verse] I'm tellin ya it ain't nothin Only takes one phrase to mess up somethin Not bluffin, people idiotic for thinking they erupted When the stuff produced really causes income deductions Naw now be gone man Believe you the best, you wrong man Nothin more than a con man Just don't belong man Always sucked at makin songs man When it comes down to it, you worse than bronze man Never gonna get it on man You just made the wrong plan When it comes to them people, their decisions ain't wise Ain't never gonna make cash or have a sudden rise More like Nick Cannon and I ain't even spreading lies No surprise, exactly how that stuff shall lead to their demise
[Hook] I'm tellin ya it ain't nothin compared to it We had already been through it Havin to pity that fool, always broken as old Buicks I don't even gotta get down to it Think they ballin, just disgrace em too Just shows how bad they got it based on their IQ
[Verse] The rebuttals everywhere, it makes em go critical Can't win but can't back out, not a smooth criminal Make em wish they never talked They could walk shameful or have their heart stop What left do they got, but still act an egomaniac But too r..tarded to be a brainiac, there's plenty shame in that Too many F Bombs used just to stand out from the rest Still cornballs whatsoever to be stomped on by the best That boy don't own a Benz, he just wishin False claims ruining reputation in the exhibition I feel sorry for the way this man is livin Gonna end sooner or later by a bloody lynchin Rockin fake chains, counterfeit diamonds, you name it A wannabe p!mp trying out for rapping but never made it
[Hook] Im tellin ya it ain't nothin compared to it We had already been through it Havin to pity that fool, always broken as old Buicks I don't even gotta get down to it Think they ballin, just disgrace em too Just shows how bad they got it based on their IQ
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Aetion
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| 14 Oct 2014 05:55 PM |
| You need to work on making your rhymes unique, try listening to some underground and mainstream rappers, get a style you like, or if you like more than one try to mix them to your liking. I suggest improving and trying to use more words in your rhymes, you had like 5 lines that all had ended with the word "man." |
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| 14 Oct 2014 05:57 PM |
| You know how some rappers do that kinda thing with an ending like that? I tried that to see what would happen. |
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| 14 Oct 2014 05:59 PM |
Try listening to
Cage , Hopsin , Royce Da 5'9 , And Fat Joe |
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Aetion
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| 14 Oct 2014 06:02 PM |
I didn't even bother with the ending cause I stopped reading. Just listen to some of these rappers and try to take influence from alot of them...
Rakim, Kendrick Lamar, RZA, Earl Sweatshirt, Capital STEEZ, Joey Bad###, Nyck Caution, Logic (I'd prefer his older songs if you want a underground/lyricist feel), there are some others but that's a start. |
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| 14 Oct 2014 06:05 PM |
Rakim, yes Kendrick Lamar, yes RZA yes , Earl Sweatshirt fk no , Capital STEEZ fk outta here , Joey Bad###,yes Nyck Caution,no Logic yes
Ima add to this list
Nas Cage Slick Rick Cypress Hill Older Jay Z Denace Grandmaster Caz Run DMC Tim Dog Kool Moe Dee |
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| 14 Oct 2014 06:08 PM |
People I listen to: A$AP Rocky 2 Chainz K Camp Eminem Juicy J Somewhat Lil Wayne Somewhat Pusha T Somewhat Kanye West Only 1 song from Royce da 5'9 |
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| 14 Oct 2014 06:10 PM |
| It's my first song since I came back so I'm trying to kick back in. So rates for so far? |
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| 14 Oct 2014 07:05 PM |
>you like Juicy J +Respect
8/10 |
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| 14 Oct 2014 07:30 PM |
"People I listen to: A$AP Rocky 2 Chainz K Camp Eminem Juicy J Somewhat Lil Wayne Somewhat Pusha T Somewhat Kanye West Only 1 song from Royce da 5'9"
Im sorry but this is.. ew
But juicy j <3 |
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| 14 Oct 2014 07:33 PM |
^ Only "bad" artists in that list are Eminem and K Camp |
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| 14 Oct 2014 07:35 PM |
Tell that to the album sales income
KILL EM |
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| 14 Oct 2014 07:37 PM |
| No idea what to but here because I despise ro rap with a burning passion and you insulted Buick.. |
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| 14 Oct 2014 07:38 PM |
"Kayne west" Terrible Artist
"2 Chainz" she got a big booty so I call her big booty
"Lil Wayne" His old stuff
"Royce da 5'9 but one song" da fk outta here |
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| 14 Oct 2014 07:41 PM |
" "Kanye West" Terrible Artist "
>terrible
Now let me tell you why that's bullsht. |
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| 14 Oct 2014 07:44 PM |
1. I'm not a fan of Buick.
2. There's Rick Ross and Meek Mill too. Somewhat Drake. |
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| 14 Oct 2014 07:45 PM |
Like 808s and heatbreaks is kaynes only good album
and his song "Power" is decent |
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| 14 Oct 2014 07:45 PM |
Rich forever #MAYBACHMUSICGROUP |
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| 14 Oct 2014 07:46 PM |
How about College Dropout, Late Registration, and Graduation?
Oh, sorry. I'm talking to a person dk riding a generic YouTube rapper. |
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