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| 10 Oct 2014 11:17 PM |
An idea I had a little while back.
The world of absolute order; controlled by the god of order, a peaceful place. There is no hate, no violence, no anger, nor crime; but it comes with a price. There is no liberty, no emotions, nor free will; as long as anyone could remember they all had a schedule they followed.
6 am wake up 8 am eat 9 am work 12 pm eat 1 pm work 7 pm shop 9 pm eat 10 pm sleep
Laws
Report "evil" Stay out of the enforcers' way If "evil" is found, go inside
People never questioned or rather, they couldn't. However you are not like them, you are different; you are an exception...
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Resident: The residents of this world. They have no emotions, nor judgment. If they find out you are an exception, they will report you to the enforcers; otherwise they will follow the schedule and they are the shop keepers at 7pm.
Enforcers: Murder machines, sent by the god of order to kill exceptions, like you and your friends. They have no emotions, don't get tired, and have the ability to lock on to you so you can't run from them. They scout the streets at 10pm-6am, 9am-12pm, 1pm-7pm. If one sees you they will alert every other enforcers in the area, so kill them quick! Oh, and have fun!
Known Types
Angels Light flying types armed with 20mm machine guns, they are also like police helicopters. They will follow you around with spotlights on you if they see you
Legion: Humanoid 6ft tall ground types, often attacking in groups. Armed with rocket launchers, assault rifles, and a blitz knife (a chainsaw, tazer, and knife combo.)
Guardians: large spider like armored ground types, armed with railguns strong enough to rip you to pieces in one shot. (So, try not to get hit)
God of order: The unknown ruler of this world, he controls all most everything in this world. Oh, and he wants you dead; whether you are against him or not. Nice guy right?
Exceptions
Outsiders:People said to be from a different world. They can not recall the name and faces of people in their past lives nor the name of places, but they can tell what the memory was about. They have the power to control one type of element (iron, uranium, neon, etc) around them. Power comes at a cost, if their use their powers they lose bits of their memory, (older memories disappear first) as well as giving off bits of radiation.
Embodiment:People with free will born into this world of absolute order, they are like the residents. Although, they have free will and a special power that goes against nature.
So, that's idea so far
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| 10 Oct 2014 11:23 PM |
There is no hate, no violence, no anger, nor crime; Report "evil"
These contradict each other. If none of those emotions/actions exist then "evil" also wouldn't exist. And "perfect utopias that are actually dark and oppressive" is such a cliche idea. It's been overused to death. Please don't do this. |
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| 10 Oct 2014 11:27 PM |
| 'Evil' is referring to exceptions, but I should change that now that I think about it. |
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| 11 Oct 2014 12:29 AM |
"perfect utopias that are actually dark and oppressive" is such a cliche idea. It's been overused to death. Please don't do this.
It is not a 'Perfect utopia'.
A prefect ututopia is when peace is kept, however people are happy and able to follow their dreams.
It is not, because they don't have the ability to be happy or follow their dreams. Due to the fact the normal 'residents' don't have emotions, ambition, nor judgment, its not that they are forced to it's just they can't. |
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| 11 Oct 2014 12:57 AM |
"Angels Light flying types armed with 20mm machine guns, they are also like police helicopters."
well that got dark quickly |
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| 11 Oct 2014 03:36 AM |
| This reminds me of Harrison Bergeron. |
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