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| 07 Oct 2014 11:41 PM |
I was syncing music on my phone at like 11 AM and I realised I'm almost done with 1 Story on Domino quest.
I grabbed a clip.
Here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YLknSTMKRXc&list=UUADazIt-tBk36G1cORrDQGw
the entire thing comes out whenever the hell it comes out. |
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| 07 Oct 2014 11:54 PM |
the style is really neat but the text transition is a tad confusing. perhaps fade the text in and out? or fade the bubble out completely and fade in a new bubble with every line, idk. |
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| 07 Oct 2014 11:58 PM |
the text is going to be edited.
Im trying to do an SMT/Persona like dialogue sequence. |
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| 08 Oct 2014 12:07 AM |
I saw, and like I said it's a really interesting style and I can't wait to see it in full swing,
but as a guy who watches a lot of videos with subtitles and a guy who worked on a roblox film with subtitles, you do notice that you do need to put some thought into it.
on a video with voice acting, the audience's eyes can wonder across the screen and still understand what the characters are talking about, however in a subtitled work your audience's eyes always have to go back to the bottom of the screen, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, infact it can be taken as a stylistic choice. However your viewers' eyes will still wonder across the screen to marvel at the shot and they are counting on the director to notify them whenever a new line is on the screen. If you have two lines of text at the bottom of your screen that constantly fade in and out, it's easy to catch that out the corner of your eye, however with the way you currently have it in the clip it is sort of hard to notice the changes when you're not directly looking at the text bubble, and you don't want the viewer to look at the text bubble all the time, you want them to wonder around and look at the shot. Which is why i suggest putting in some change between the text transitions, such as a fade. I'm not sure if you planned on fixing this later and i wasted all this time writing this, but i still thought it would be worth writing just in case. |
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| 08 Oct 2014 12:10 AM |
The text is planned out liked this
>Text 1 >camera change/text transition >text 2 >Camera change/text transition >text 3
so on and so forth |
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| 08 Oct 2014 12:23 AM |
| Funny thing is my movie takes place in 2010 |
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| 08 Oct 2014 08:26 AM |
routess already made something like this before you also your text is off centered and the profile picture for the character is not drawn like you promised |
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| 08 Oct 2014 12:09 PM |
I know the characters aren't drawn, I am working on everything still.
I have 6-8 pictures of emotions and such for each character. |
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| 08 Oct 2014 12:16 PM |
>Rubbish
what are you, some sort of colonial person? did you travel through time just to say rubbish on this thread?
no. |
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| 08 Oct 2014 12:18 PM |
| I hate to tell you mate but it is. |
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| 08 Oct 2014 12:23 PM |
| it is..... because you did travel through time? |
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| 08 Oct 2014 12:33 PM |
| roblox bubble chat music videos |
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| 08 Oct 2014 12:39 PM |
| Are still more interesting than his... Or she.. I have no damn idea |
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| 08 Oct 2014 12:40 PM |
>Are still more interesting than his... Or she.. I have no damn idea
why do you not like it exactly? |
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| 08 Oct 2014 08:14 PM |
show things that are good rather than showing it incomplete like it's okay to show WIP but not like "yo this is what it's going to be so look at it" |
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