blocmarc
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| 12 Sep 2014 07:31 PM |
The Rising Hero an Apocalypse Rising Story Please note: This was written before hero badges were discontinued or the hat update came. So, there I sat. My back against the wall and my legs drawn up. With that glow stick as my only light source, I couldn’t see what more was outside this barn house. I was clutching that can of beans, and I was in deep thought, were should I go when morning breaks? I just sat there as I finished off my beans thinking, where will I go? What will I do? Come morning I grabbed my Makarov and stood up. I guessed it was about 8:30am. I exited the barn house and, luckily for me, no zombies were Around. I began to walk following the dirt road. Where ever it might take me. After a while of walking I passed into dirk, and there I was, right next to the sign saying DIRK, just staring into the town… There were only a few zombies but I had only 2 shots left so I snuck around to the military tent and look inside it… a combat knife is lying there, so I pick it up thinking, this will be useful. MHUAAAA! A military zombie knocks me to the ground, before he has time to make another move, I get up with my combat knife drawn, and slash him, killing him. “Wow, that was close” I said wiping off some sweat on my forehead. I exit the tent looking back into the town. I make my way through killing every zombie that I find and looting as much supplies as I can. Bye the time I come out, I have an orange hiking pack, about 3 ½ clips of Makarov ammunition, 2 blood bags, and much more food and drinks. I decided to move to the radio tower, wherever that was. So I just head off. Eventually, the radio tower came into sight through all the fog. Once I got there, there was only a single zombie, nothing I couldn’t take care of. One clean headshot put the zombie to the ground. I searched the building, and I found quite a few useful items. There was a pair of binoculars, a lee Enfield with 3 mags, and a compass. I decided that I would climb up the tower to get a better view of everything and scout out where I should head next. I decided to move to the prison, as I had heard that often good weapons could be found there. As I moved closer, I realized there was a LOT of zombies congregated around the front. I decided to sneak in through one of the cracks in the wall. I walked around to the opposite side and slipped in through a large hole. I walked around, until I finally reached the dead-center. There was nothing there. No loot. I was kind of disappointed. So I looted the security towers and guess what, there was nothing there. Someone must have already got here first. I was about to search the last tower when I slipped off the edge, and when I landed, I caught all the zombies attention. “Aw shoot!” I mumbled to myself as I put 3 bullets into a military zombie’s torso. As 3 police zombies came running at me, I wiped around and fired BANG! POW! 2 headshots, I raised my Makarov to put a bullet in the last one’s brain when… *CLICK* an empty mag. MHUUUAAA!!! The zombie whacked me hard. But for some odd reason, whenever a zombie makes a move, it takes a few seconds before they make another. Like they have to think hard before they make another move. And when that happened here, it was just enough time for me to draw my combat knife and jab it into the zombie’s body. I turned around to see a zombie, trying to get to me, but there was a large wooden barricade blocking the path and there it was, just standing there, like the barricade would move and he could come get me. “Ha!” I laughed, looking at that dumb zombie, too stupid to try and go around. I reloaded my gun and took it out. I put away my Makarov and looked into the military tent. There, was a small portable radio. It had no transmitter, but all the same, on those cold nights I could listen to some songs well I waited the night out. Speaking of night, I saw the sun was setting. Ok, time to get moving and find some place to stop for the night. After a while, I found a nice little urban area, just a few houses, a road, and some concrete barricades in the front entrance. There were only a couple of zombies, which I took out with ease. I finally decided to rest in a little 3-room blue house. I had already grabbed a road flare and when it was too dark, I set it off. The next morning, I head for the prison again in hopes of finding something new. Once I got there, there were no zombies. Good. I don’t want a repeat of last time. I remember there was only one place I had not searched: the last tower before I fell off. I get back to the tower, and when I looked inside I nearly passed out. “Holy MACKREL!” I yelled, amazed. Inside the tower was a M4A1 with 3 clips and a grey survival pack. After putting on the bag and picking up the ammo, I grab the M4. “Amazing, I’ve never seen one before!” I said. I started to make my way out when all the sudden… RATATATATATATATATA! I was being shot at! I quickly dived into the military tent for cover. Crouching under the window, the attacker had seized fire! Taking the moment I pull out my M4 and peeked out, as soon as I do the firing started again! I duck back, again the attacker halting his fire as not to waste ammo. I needed to know where he was. I quietly slip over to the other window and peek out. There he was behind the barricade with a RPK-45 drum mag. He had no cover from fire from my angle. I look down the sight, get ready, RATATATATATATATAT! 8 quick headshots. I stand up and hurry over. He was a bandit. He had nothing I needed. And I knew he was probably with someone, and they split up. And the firing would have drawn him here. I hurried out of the prison, making my way past the radio tower. After a while I am near kin, the biggest city in the area. I climb to the top of a hill near the city borders when I see a long tunnel going down. “Interesting.” I thought. I decided to go down. But before doing so I drew out my M4. This place was giving me the creeps. Once reached the bottom, the path was blocked with a wood plank. I crouched and went under the board.as I peeked around the corner, there was a man with a SCAR-H, he quickly turned and pointed his gun at me “DON’T MOVE!” he yelled, walking closer, “now put that gun away. “I slid my M4A1 into my backpack. This guy was DECKED OUT. He had a dark green military pack, a SCAR-H with a double drum mag and scope and a suppressor. “You aren’t one of … “HIS” men are you?” he said, taking on step closer “I reply, “what? No! And who is “HE?” “He’s a bandit, a marauder to be exact. And I’ve seen every one of his killings.” “Does he have a name?” I ask. “Not that I know of. That’s why I call him… “HIM”. He says putting his gun down. ”so, you said he has Men?” I ask” yes he does. As far as I know of, 3. Now who are you?” I replied, “Luke.”(Short for LuketheMan0506) “Well come in. I need to talk to you a bit more.”
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phoniex
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| 12 Sep 2014 07:45 PM |
WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM WITH THE "RETURN" KEY!? WHAT DID THE "RETURN" KEY DO TO YOU!? DID THE "RETURN" KEY MURDER YOUR FAMILY!? DID THE "RETURN" KEY EAT YOUR FRESHLY BAKED POT PIE!? DID THE "RETURN" KEY DEFAULT ON YOUR PAYMENTS!? TELL ME!
Also, don't waste your time writing fanfiction, especially not ROBLOX fanfiction. |
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blocmarc
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| Joined: 12 Feb 2013 |
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| 02 Oct 2014 07:10 AM |
| ok this post section is for SUGGESTIONS ONLY you want to fuss about it than just keep your damn mouth shut. |
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phoniex
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| 02 Oct 2014 07:44 AM |
| If you can't handle criticism, then I suggest you abandon the arts. If you make art, you are going to be criticized, both constructively and non-constructively. |
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blocmarc
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| Joined: 12 Feb 2013 |
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| 07 Oct 2014 08:11 PM |
| DID YOU NOT HERE ME shut up IF YOU DONT LIKE IT GO READ SOME OTHER sH*T PILE OF WORDS IN THE FUROM |
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| 07 Oct 2014 08:21 PM |
How to get butt-hurt, featuring blocmarc.
But dude, chill out. You're making yourself look like a nine year old bigot, not able to take even comical criticism. |
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phoniex
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| 07 Oct 2014 08:29 PM |
| I am not going until you use your adult words. |
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3Dwolf11
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| Joined: 30 Dec 2011 |
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| 07 Oct 2014 08:38 PM |
"DID YOU NOT HERE ME shut up IF YOU DONT LIKE IT GO READ SOME OTHER sH*T PILE OF WORDS IN THE FUROM"
Seriously dude? You just called your own fanfiction "sH*T".
nice going.
Tips:
Paragraphs Don't make ROBLOX fanfics. Put it to use and get some girls by making some 1D fanfics and show some girls at school. It might help. Rumors might spread about you but ok. |
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| 07 Oct 2014 08:40 PM |
DID YOU NOT HERE ME shut up IF YOU DONT LIKE IT GO READ SOME OTHER sH*T PILE OF WORDS IN THE FUROM
Well that escalated quickly. I suppose it's good you see your story for what it is though. |
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| 08 Oct 2014 12:50 AM |
"WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM WITH THE "RETURN" KEY!? WHAT DID THE "RETURN" KEY DO TO YOU!? DID THE "RETURN" KEY MURDER YOUR FAMILY!? DID THE "RETURN" KEY EAT YOUR FRESHLY BAKED POT PIE!? DID THE "RETURN" KEY DEFAULT ON YOUR PAYMENTS!? TELL ME!"
enter key*
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blocmarc
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| Joined: 12 Feb 2013 |
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| 09 Oct 2014 03:51 PM |
| look everyone I... uh... I'm a idiot. sorry but i was a little upset about other things and would have never really said it. oh and uh.. about me writing the fan-fiction... I was just super bored because ... well.. i don't know but the day. i was just bored. so uh.. if you want me to finish it up... I'll finish it up. if you don't care, fine. if you hate it, fine. and i you like it, ok. |
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