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| 07 Oct 2014 07:38 PM |
I looked down, not knowing what to do or where I was...or what I was... I saw a large yellow fish. It floated by and started feeding on small organisms. That was my first sight. Yes, death was the first thing I beheld. I could see their pain even with my lack of understanding. I didn't know what was happening, just that one thing was destroying the other. I couldn't comprehend it, whatever was happening, it had to be the way of...wherever I was, right?
What am I? What am I doing here? What's happening around me?
A forceful current was pushing me through the freshwater the great beasts scurried forward. Those things kill, so there must be something bad coming. But I can't move. I sat immobile, letting this death sweep over me. Funny, I never even understood death, and now I'm face to face with it. A large wave of water filled my upward vision and crashed down on me. I didn't die, though. Only sitting elsewhere.
Is this what death is? The passing to another place? A movement to another world where death will only repeat? an infinite loop of pain and destruction with no true meaning other than to 'die' again?
This was too much, but there was no escape. I had no choice but to stand for the rest of this cycle. One day I would die again, according to my new reasoning. Now I could only wait for the next journey, the next death and end of life. Life, it was meaningless, right? Just a location, a temporary feeling that didn't matter. No relevance too it. Yes, it had to be true.
Hm, what was that? A large object coming onto the surface of this land. Was this my second death. The beast was moving like the others. I didn't understand. Why couldn't I move? Why am I bound when I am innocent?
The large creature crashed into the water, moving through it making sounds that sounded like...an emotion. I didn't understand. What more was there than life and death? I understand that there are thoughts, yes, but what was this. These moods, they effected those thoughts, right? Do I have the freedom to move through my own mind, or am I yet bound by iron chain to one life?
Oh no, here it comes. The monster's face moved through the water, sweeping me up into a small cavity leading inside of it. All was dark for a while, I could feel my once immovable body squirming up a tight space subconsciously.
--Several hours later--
The girl's father hovered over her. "You're pale as a ghost..." He said with a frown. She laid on a white sheet bed, a trash can close by.
hnng tired brain
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| 07 Oct 2014 07:41 PM |
ehh makes me self conscious in a bad way
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| 07 Oct 2014 07:42 PM |
pretty ominous if you ask me
really good!!!
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| 07 Oct 2014 07:43 PM |
i honestly just went into a really weird state of mind and then winged this whole thing probably why its bad
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| 07 Oct 2014 07:46 PM |
ebola has a mickey mouse head
so its better |
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