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| 05 Oct 2014 08:43 PM |
Intro - Redneck voice - There was a old legend of the 2 men of Snoop Clutch and Street , They were called bad meets evil... Snoop was evil , And Street was Bad.. Fastest gun sl1ngers ive ever seen...
Verse 1 - Snoop Clutch - They said I went soft Eversince I became snoopy then they said I fell off Everything I spit is fer0cious Right now i feel supercalfragilisticexpealidocious Cmon even Street knows this Ill turn they're heads backwards Rip it off like a 4 year old with they're aninmal crackers Im feeling loose I shot my C(o)/\/\ in a cup made chanel dr1nk it and call it my sw4g juice Im the GOAT per10d Im really a nice guy but i can get angry like keke on her per10d Went to streets bedroom made him p0sessed Made him write h0rrorc0re till I made him stressed Told him I murdered his girl to make him depressed Told him to join Snoop Clutch And ill give him the magic touch then sh0t him with po1sonous led Then he made a choice then said
Verse 2 - Street I'm off the leash, I'm linked to you but I broke the collar, I'm swimming through the hate! you're splashing on water, Life is a building, and I'm the insane [N] ducking through the vents, You a sell out, but worse than that you're available for rent, Two rap devils, absorbing the flames in hell for my strength, Life is a script, mines is a horror movie at a long length, I FEEL LIKE ME AND SNOOP ABOUT TO SPREAD PANIC!, 99 additions to your life, I'm a problematic, I'm the "shh", like a libraries' rules, (haha) You better get to the equipment box, cause you're only a tool, I'm still running this, blisters bursting on my feet, "Twist" the story, follow the yellow brick road, now you're following on "street", HAHA
Chorus - 'Cause this is what happens when bad meets evil We hit the trees til' we look like Vi3tnamese people He's evil, and I'm bad like Steve Segal Above the law 'cause I don't agree with p0lice either (me neither
Verse 3 - Snoop Clutch - Now I need everyones und1vided attention Im feeling old like im from another d1mension These a[] h0les dont know who they're facing I can body them then chase them with a cha1nsaw like j4son Murd3rous Words and i dont have a vocab like aetion Ima leave behind a leg4cy And Ima make sure nobody will mess with me Snoopy will need somebody to search for snoopy They need me in this rap s[] call me the next juicy I cause d3ath to all beauty Im the only ro-rapper thats unironic I feel high but im really low maybe its the chr0n1c When i go underground ima make sure my dead bodies are swimming with the fishes Cause im the kind of sinister That'll murder your minister Ill murder anybody including my ink Like im in murder inc And I dont need to f[]ing lip sync
Verse 4 - Street Flowing like a river, I'm dedicated to it like Wayne and Drama, Plenty of fish are in the sea, I'll be the flesh eating piranha, Don't get your hopes up, that aircraft would get shot down, I'm the KING of the castle, you're a joke, jester that shines my crown, (haha) Still getting experience, even in the fumes of hell, These [N]s trying to stunt! but to us it's just a show and tell, I've been p0ssessed, no ex0rcism could get the demons out, I'm a jungle in the biome, you're a seed unable to sprout, SO GET OUT OF OUR KINGDOM, or prepare to meet fate, I don't need no patrol for [N]s to try to escape hells gates,
Chorus - 'Cause this is what happens when bad meets evil We hit the trees til' we look like Vi3tnamese people He's evil, and I'm bad like Steve Segal Above the law 'cause I don't agree with p0lice either (me neither
Verse 5 - Street My saliva glands are gifted, I can tell from the formations of when I spit, If others claim they got the game on lock, then I'm a locksmith, Your plans always backfire, like a fire opposing resist, As your plans are looking foggy, you see two strangers in the mist, It's Snoop Clutch and Street, about to takeover, Don't get your luck up, cause aint no such thing as floating 4 leafed clovers, Annihilation beginning, I'm the [N] from my army that's sent for scouting, And you can keep being King of the Hill, I'm king of a flaming mountain, FIRE! Ugh!
Outro/Tiny Verse - Snoop Clutch - And if they do send me to hell when i leave Ima sh00t he d3vil in the face till he cant breathe
Chorus - .Chorus - 'Cause this is what happens when bad meets evil We hit the trees til' we look like Vi3tnamese people He's evil, and I'm bad like Steve Segal
Outro - Street - See you in hell.. Snoop - Bye bye..
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| 05 Oct 2014 08:54 PM |
dope is this just two
C'mon everyone, let's take a ride in my balloon / casino! |
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| 05 Oct 2014 08:55 PM |
pretty much
were remixing the entire hell the sequel album |
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| 05 Oct 2014 08:57 PM |
| Street , we can work on Welcome To Hell tomorrow or the next day.. |
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| 05 Oct 2014 09:12 PM |
Good...
9/10
You two did equally in this..
I love the last 2 verses between you two
*No not the tiny verse with 2 bars..*
But good job..
Cant wait to see the entire album.
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| 05 Oct 2014 09:34 PM |
| Street was fire snoop was super corny great song though I liked snoops first verse but his outright was terrible street was raw all the way through though. 9/10 |
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| 05 Oct 2014 09:35 PM |
| Aetion is pronounced Aye-Tee-On |
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minniem
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| 05 Oct 2014 09:38 PM |
IMO, This is kinda disappointing...the concept was ew, not to mention the RHYMES being ew (I shot my C(o)/\/\ in a cup made chanel dr1nk it and call it my sw4g juice). I KNOW you guys can do a helluva lot better than this.
Snoop- I'm gonna ignore the "supercalfragilisticexpealidocious" line, but "Ill turn they're heads backwards" ... their* And why are you censoring words that don't need to be censored? How do you have two outros? "Outro/Tiny Verse": Are you talking about a BRIDGE?
Street- Wtf man. How do you go from "The Catch Up Remix" to this :(? smh.
Look..if this was one of those troll songs then I get it and I'll take the rate back, OTHERWISE:
3/10. |
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| 05 Oct 2014 09:42 PM |
| @Minniem, this isn't my new style or anything XD, I just wanted a verse to fit in with the song, I'll be releasing a solo single tommorow of my own and maybe another bad meets evil collab with snoop |
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minniem
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| 05 Oct 2014 09:50 PM |
| Sounds cool..and Nooo PLEASE don't do another one of these e_e. Try a more..."mature" concept? :| |
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| 05 Oct 2014 09:53 PM |
| Yeah, like fking btches and getting money :D |
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| 05 Oct 2014 09:54 PM |
| Good to see you back street |
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iwantpsp
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| 06 Oct 2014 02:15 AM |
| Edgy Eight Year Old Meets Ultra Edgy Seven Year Old - Edgy Meets Ultra Edgy* |
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| 06 Oct 2014 07:18 AM |
I know golden said that cause he hates me and minnimen probably don't like this style or it was too intense
@Street
Welcome 2 Hell is just like a freestyle about being cold pretty much I need a verse.. |
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| 06 Oct 2014 07:19 AM |
and @minni
The only song that gets anymore mature is "A Kiss"
and that's not too much more. |
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| 06 Oct 2014 07:20 AM |
And @KingHurrican3
OH... I thought it was pronounced
Ation
xD
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| 06 Oct 2014 08:21 AM |
Minniem's criticism was a bit too harsh (and hopefully means she often gives out bad ratings to those deserving them) but she made some decent points...so I will expand on it somewhat.
The supercalfragilisticexpealidocious and swag juice lines were atrocities. This is what I meant when I stated that making multis while making sense often acts as an impediment to some, but you must overcome that. It isn't a freestyle. She was right about the outro's placement. While this isn't Street's best, it wasn't his worst either.
Some multis were missing where they would have been nice and the structure was awkward because some of the verses were 12 bars or 18 bars and so on. It's not that much of a problem, but here I felt as if the average pattern of going by 4s would have helped the rythm some.
As far as punchlines and metaphors go, they were there but the lyrics were somewhat riddled with weaker ones. While a clash of constant haymakers would have been nice, it's pointless making punchlines if you're going to make mediocre bars for the sake of rhyming.
I don't see how the concept was bad. It was Renegade esque. In hip hop, tracks with this concept display competitive natures and create lyrical endeavors. These are the kind of things that you're supposed to try to body the other person on. The concept was fine. The execution of said concept was somewhat egregious.
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Snoop's first verse was horrible due to the atrocious lines I mentioned earlier. It would have been a far better introductory verse had he just told a story and molded out the plot of the concept like he did at the end.
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Street's first verse was nice... did a better job with punches and metaphors, properly introducing himself. It would have further hindered the structure of the concept had the verse been mediocre.
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Chorus was asinine due to the similes mostly.
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Snoop's second verse annoyed me mostly because he displays a rookie mentality in which he feels the similes he's making are decent. "Im feeling old like im from another d1mension"...it's just a foolish attempt at a punchline. It makes no sense, and some that try to use lyricism struggle with this. The content of your punchlines need to connect better. "I can body them then chase them with a cha1nsaw like j4son"...in a word, "meh".
The ink line could have been good, but when you threw out Murder Inc it just ruined it because you formatted it all wrong. This is where a simile actually would have worked well. "I Murder Inc, I'm the monster waiting behind your door" would have been better than repeating the ink portion of the line. Usually repeating yourself can end up coming off as tacky.
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Street's second verse was fine technically. The metaphors were decent but the rhymes weren't. With adjustments this could have been made into a scheme.
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Street's third verse had the same qualities as the first one, except it was more punchline based and half of the verse had better which helped the overall quality.]]]]]
*{3/10 was a bit too much, but if I used number ratings I wouldn't give this anything above a 6 either.}* |
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| 06 Oct 2014 08:24 AM |
Oh, and I won't take off points for the Aetion rhyme. While I don't exactly promote the mispronunciation of words for the sake of rhyming it's not really that much of a problem, and the name is Greek...
Em mispronounced omnipotent in Rap God but it flowed smoothly and helped the rhyme scheme. |
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ASAPxBAPE
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| 06 Oct 2014 12:18 PM |
Terrible....xD Except for streets verse c: |
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